RagNa FF: Mein tumhare saath hoon...last update page 56+epilogue+note - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
what a great update ...
Sammy is villian OMG
do update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's totally awesome i mean i can't wait to read the next part😊 plsss i beg u write it too quick😉👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh no!! i hope nothing happens to the babay!! :O please update it soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 11

-on the streets
Raghav had fell to the ground. A man in a dark black coat came out of his car and dragged raghav to the door and put him in the back seat and drove away.
-at abandoned house
Sammy was still sitting by kalpi while she slept peacefully. Sammy's phone started ringing so he got up and went out of kalpi's room.
Sammy: hello?
It was the same man who dragged raghav into his car.
Man: hello. Is it done.
Sammy: I tortured her a lot just as you asked.
Sammy was lying hoping the man wouldn't ask for proof.
Man: oh really? How do I know you aren't lying? I want you to record you slapping kalpi until her cheeks turn blood red. Pulling her hair, twisting her wrist, crushing her toes, and making her body black and blue.
Sammy: are you crazy? How can I? She's like my little sister. And so innocent and fragile.
Man: I don't care! You do it or else I KILL RAGHAV.
Sammy: NO! I'LL DO IT.
Man: good. Now get to torturing kalpi.
Sammy: ok.
Sammy went back to kalpi, kissed her forehead, held her hands, and kissed her wrists. Sammy picked up kalpi from the bed and put her on a chair and tied her hands and feets to the chair. Sammy splashed water on kalpi's face and she awoke.
Kalpi: Sammy sir. Aapne mujhe bhaanda kyun hai? Please mujhe kohle!
Kalpi struggled in her chair while Sammy set up his phone to focus on them while kalpana could not see it.
Sammy put on a dark coat with a hood so his face would not be revealed to raghav and came and stood close to kalpi.
Kalpi: Sammy sir mujhe janne dein please!
Sammy slapped kalpana. Kalpi looked up with tears. Sammy held kalpi's chin and said "struggling won't do anything! I'm going to torture you! And there is nothing you can do about it! Kalpi was trembling with fear! Sammy slapped her again and again until kalpi's cheeks turned bright red. Kalpi's cheeks were numb. Kalpi was looking down crying inconsolably. Sammy pulled her wrists and twisted them until he heard a crack. He also had tears in his eyes, but didn't let kalpi see. Sammy then picked up a stick and beat kalpi with it on her arms and legs. Kalpi kept screaming with pain.
Kalpi: bas! Please stop! Aur nahi seh sakti mein!
Sammy stopped and stopped the recording on his phone and sent it to the man threatening him. Sammy then untied kalpi and carried her to bed. Sammy put kalpi down on the bed, he went and got the first aid kit. Kalpi went unconscious and Sammy tended her wounds. After Sammy was done he kissed on the wounds and said "mujhe maaf kar dena! Magar tumhe aur raghav safe rakhna zada zarrori hai."
-at raghav's captivity house
Raghav woke up tied to a chair and saw a man in a long coat, his face covered, in front of him.
Man: good morning...nah...good evening.
Raghav: kaun ho tum? Aur mein kaha hoon?
Man: itne questions ek time peh. Aram sein.
Raghav: shut up! Who the hell are you!
Man: Revenge! Is who i am.
Raghav: what!
Man: I have a little video for you to watch.
Raghav: shut up! I don't want to see any video!
Man: even if it has your beloved kalpi in it.
Raghav: what! Where is kalpi? What do you know about kalpi? How do you have a video of her.
Man: let's just say...I have her held captive. Now just watch this.
The man played the video of kalpi get beaten up by a another man. Raghav's yes widened and became blood shot red.
Raghav: kalpi! Kalpi!
Man: calm down Romeo! She probably still has a few bones not broken. Probably just a little crippled. But after a few days she will be fully crippled!
Raghav: who the bloody hell is this piece of shit! How dare he hit my kalpi! If I get my hands on him I swear I'll bloody...
Man: oh shut up! Kya karle ga tu! Huh! Tu kudh yaha captive hain!
Raghav: let me go! U think hold me captive? Well ur wrong! I'll get out by hook or by crook!
Man: ur not going anywhere except to God!
Suddenly the room was filled with the sound of a gunshot.

To be continued...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Is it really that bad guys? Nobody commenting or liking. 😭 😕
Edited by Ragnaislife - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Sammy torturing Kalpi was very emotional
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG... Its nice...
Felt v.bad 4 Rags,Kalpi n sammy...
Plzz continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sapnapari

OMG... Its nice...

Felt v.bad 4 Rags,Kalpi n sammy...
Plzz continue soon...


Thank u so much! Will definitely!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful Update👍🏼
Feeling bad for Kalpi😭
Sammy must be so sad..😒

You have great writing talent, keep it up! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pookhi

Wonderful Update👍🏼
Feeling bad for Kalpi😭
Sammy must be so sad..😒

You have great writing talent, keep it up! 😃


Thanks! I try! Yes he is!

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