FF: Love, Revenge & Regrets Part 51only RagNa updt on Pg 152 - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh Priya what a lovely update. 😃👏 n ur warning was right...I was blushing, smiling and grinning all by myself while reading this! 😆 When i watch Ragna VMs or videos or read FFs, and smile stupidly, and my niece is with me, she looks at me as if I am some weird creature! 😆 😛 Ragna make us do weird things too! n plz update soon, loved it. 😊😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
read the last three parts together...
really awesomeee👏👏👏
loved ragna's part & raghav's loverboy look...all of it was nice...

PS- want prem's part more in next part pleaseee..since i m crazy for prem n we never get to see him lyk dis in show..so plzzz😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
What the priya..u made me blush throughout😳omg such a lovely update!!!i would have opend it earlier..i repent seriously...lovely is less word...loved it like anything😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Hi friends,

I was listening to some songs this afternoon and heard this song from Sonu Nigam from the movie Agneepath. Suddenly RagNa came to my mind and this story popped up. I thought it would be unfair to other RagNa fans if I dont share it with them. Please go through the narration and express your views, comments and criticisms...

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Raghav just jerks off his hand from Paakhi's grip and tells her to open her eyes.

Paakhi in your world its all bout you and you only, you don't love me you just think about urself. Please leave me alone, paakhi I have to go.

Saying so he ran upstairs and out the gate, his eyes looking out for the one he cared for, the company of the only one his heart ached for... He dint find her anywhere there and he ran upto his car to find her but saw Sammy standing in front of him.

Sammy had an angry look on his face, he questioned Raghav what is he upto?😡

Sammy: Raghav I thought you wanted to hurt the Kapoors and hence wanted to involve Paakhi I was against it right from the start but u wudn't listen and now you pulled poor Kalpana into this revenge game! Why does she have to bear the brunt of your enemity towards Kapoors. Just because you love her does not give you any right to hurt her feelings. Did you not think of Kamala bai even once who was ready to sacrificed her job to save you? 😲

Raghav: Sammy! Shut up! Just shut up and let me go I have to find Kalpi, I don't know what she might be upto. Oh I will go mad. All these years I was dying to avenge the death of my father from the Kapoors and wanted nothing else but their destruction. I kept myself away, from every single happiness and never got involved in anything which would deviate me from my path of revenge. 😭

I returned from US just with this motive in my mind, and then met Kalpi. That woman has made me go crazy for her right from the day I saw her. Finally I met someone who had no pretence who did not croon over me for my money, Power or status. In fact she had the guts always to stick to her point and prove it right. I tried to restrain myself and I tried her to keep away by being rude to her, but day by day she just kept coming closer.

Aaahh I don't know what to do, on one hand I am feeling on top of the world for being in love with such a lovely woman and I know she will care for me like no one has ever done, but on the other I feel guilty towards my responsibilities to my father!

(Raghav pulled his hair and fell on his knees) My head is spinning Sammy please I have to meet Kalpi!!!😭

There was a pin drop silence followed by the sound of sniffing, Sammy could not believe what he saw...😲Raghav was crying, he was completely shattered. Not knowing what to do he lifted him and put him in his car and drove away. He kept saying Bas Raghav sab theek ho jaayega (Things will become ok.)

As soon as the car left Kalpi came out from behind a wall, tears flowing from her eyes. She couldn't believe her ears! Revenge???!!! Love?? What is wrong with Raghav Sir??😲

She stood frozen there for some time analyzing each and every word of the conversation that had taken place. Suddenly the honking of a car shook her back to reality. She saw that was Paakhi driving past her in full speed. She wondered aloud, Deva please Sir ko achhi buddhi dena. Yeh sach hain ki mujhe Paakhi pasand nahi but I do not want Raghav to use her for his revenge against the Kapoors.

She went home and could sleep with great difficulty. She dint say a word to Kamala maa about the happenings at the party, it was tuff to avoid so many questions from Pakya, Kamala and Vitthal. She had just smiled and said that it was good but boring and I am too tired. Got to go to the office tomorrow!!😕

Raghav was pacing up n down in the bedroom and kept looking at his mobile. Should he call Kalpi? What would she be thinking? And now how will I manage to impress Paakhi all over again. Oh this is so difficult! How did I get into all of this?

He is unable to sleep the whole night and keeps on drinking and passes out in the morning!

Sammy goes to wake him up and sees two empty bottles of whiskey on the table nearby and says ab ye kya uthega?🥱

He leaves for office. He notices that Paakhi has not come to work yet and Kalpi is working. He thinks to himself, how does she manage to get this attitude everytime she comes back stronger than before, she sure is a fighter. ⭐️

Sammy: Kalpi, aaj Raghav nahi aayenge toh koi bhi kaam ho, mujhe call karna. Ok?

Kalpi: Kyun Sammy Sir kya hua? (with full concern and worry on her face). She realizes that she should not have asked but corrects herself by saying Sir outdoor gaye kya, I asked because aaj unki client ke saath meeting hai. In her mind she thought, both Sir n Paakhi did not come and I was so conscious to come to office today. I did not know how to face Sir! But why did he not come, hope he is fine. Her head was😕 filled with questions and she was getting restless by the minute as the clock ticked away.

In the office Kalpi is unable to work she seems quite disturbed. Sammy asks for a file and she hands him a pen. Sammy says Kalpi you don't seem fine to me, looking all pale, did you not sleep yesterday night your eyes are blood red!!! And I asked for that Malhotra& Sons ' file and not a pen!😆

Kalpi was too tired as she had not had enough sleep and even in the morning she skipped her breakfast as she was getting late and forgot to get her lunch. She just stared at Sammy's face not knowing what to say. Sammy thought she looked like a zombie today big black circles around her eyes made her wide eyes look sunken and sad. She also looked a bit weak to him. He pondered for a minute and then thought maybe I should let her go home and take rest.

Kalpi please go home you are not okay. Kalpi asked Sammy if she can come to his cabin to talk. He wondered what did she want to talk about, hope she isn't resigning and leaving today itself. Once in Sammy's cabin Kalpi confronted Sammy.

Kalpi: Sammy Sir ye sab kya ho raha hai. Ek taraf Sir tells me, assuming that I am Paakhi that he loves me, then he plans a game of revenge using Paakhi, what is all this? You knew all about it and kept mum. Why Sir?😡

Sammy was flabbergasted! His mouth went dry, throat parched, he wanted to hide under the table but reached out for a glass of water n drank it.

Sammy:What rubbish Kalpana! Wh- what are you saying?

Kalpi: Sir I heard everything when you both were arguing near the car yesterday. May I please know what is going on, and why is Sir so revengeful? I have the right to know because I am being dragged into all of this unnecessarily.

Sammy: Thought for min. and explained everything to Kalpi. Why Raghav returned from US and how he wanted revenge against Kapoors and how he fell for Kalpi. Hearing this Kalpi was a bit embarrassed, she looked down, here and there.

Kalpi: So where is Raghav Sir now? Is he okay?

Sammy: No he is not fine Kalpi, he is totally confused and is fighting with himself. He was drinking the whole night and even now the cook called me to tell that Raghav is still not in good mood as he threw away all the food served to him. Kalpi? Shall

I ask you a favour, if I tell him something he will never understand. Why don't you make him realize that what he is doing is only going to hurt him more.

Kalpi: Is a bit surprised! Sir me? Will he...I mean why would he listen to what I say. He will shout at me for sure. And if you say he is not in his senses it does not make sense to talk to him at the moment. Pauses foe sometime and says but if you insist I will go and check on him maybe ask him to have food.

Sammy: That will be great help Kalpi. Thanks. (Gave a smile that said Kalpi, you love him too, I can see that)

She leaves office at 3pm and reaches Raghav's home at 3.30pm. The servant answers the doorbell. He already knows Kalpi, Kalpi asks kaka Raghav Sir kahan hai?

Kaaka: Beta kya batau kal raat se pareshaan hai kuch bhi nahi khaaya. Soye bhi nahi hain shaayad bas deewaar ko dekh ke baithe hai. Kamre mein jaane nahi dete.

Kalpi: Theek hai Kaaka aap jaaiye main manage kar loongi. He leaves and she enters the kitchen. Sets up a plate of food and a glass of water for Raghav on the dining table. Covers it and goes to Raghav's room. Raghav's words are ringing in her ears.

She decides no matter what Raghav has always helped her and it is her duty to get him out of this depression. She comes to the door and tries pushing and it opens slowly. She enters, the room is dark with drapes drawn fully to block light. Things were scattered on the floor. She was searching for Raghav and found him sitting on the floor, his eyes moist. He looked horrible! Her stomach churned to see him like this. She ran to him and sat next to him held his hand in hers and called him ever so lovingly...Sir...Raghav Sir.

Raghav turned to look at her and said tum phir aa gayi. I told you to stop chasing me. Everywhere I go you come and make me look like a fool. He thought he was hallucinating Kalpana and kept talking.

Kalpi: Smiles and says toh phir kya karun? Aapne kal se kuch nahi khaaya, ye kya haal bana rakha hai? 😊

Raghav smiles at her and replies tumhe meri kitni parvaah hai, but I am not hungry.

Kalpi: Agar mein apne haathon se khila du toh?

Raghav bites his lips and smiles. Tum bohot ziddi ho!

She helps him get up from there and takes him to the dining table and serves him food and feeds him. She switches on the radio so that he can feel better. Background song (Abhi mujh mein kahin toh baaki hai zindagi- sonu)

During the song he eats and she feeds wipes his face makes him drink water lovingly with a caring smile on her face.

He holds her hand and rubs his cheeks on them. HE looks at her so longingly and lovingly as if a man bereft of love. He wanted to soak in all the love Kalpi showered on him. His eyes did not flutter even once as he looked at her divine face, so calm so serene. She kind of put his restless mind to rest. She stroked his cheeks and ran fingers through his hair and he closed his eyes. Tears rolled down his cheeks.Ye lamha kahan tha mera) He was sitting on a chair and Kalpi was standing nearby. He ia unable to control himself and hugs her from waist and cries holding her tight.

Kalpi tries to calm him and wipes his tears. All this while background song is playing.

She strokes his head and bends down to hug him back. She cant see him this way. He was better when he was rude to her. Now seeing him all broken and shattered made her heart ache terribly. She felt strange. Do I love him too?

Raghav breaks the hug and holds her hand and places on his eyes showing her so much respect as if apologizing for all the rude behaviour towards her. He then kissed her hands and smiled. (zakhmon pe marham sa laga hai...) Kalpi sits and kisses on his forehead and eyes as if saying please don't apologise, You don't know what you mean to me Raghav. Both have tears in their eyes and smiles on their faces. They both get up. Raghav cups her face and admires her as if he has finally found what he has been stopping himself to look for...love and only love in her wide beautiful eyes (khushiyan choom loon ya ro du zara...mar jaaun ya jee lu zaraa...)

They both remember their childhood! And smile. Kalpi looks at him regretfully thinking how she misunderstood him and called him khadoos. She held his hand with a firm grip as if to say that she is by his side always. Raghav looks at her with a disbelief and is grateful to her to be by her side even after how he hurt her.

Kalpi sees that Raghav is tired she takes him to the bed. Make him lie and covers him with a sheet and turns to leave only to realize that Raghav is holding her hand. He gets up makes her sit on the bed and lies down on her lap holding her hand. (Song ends- Raghav sleeps with a beautiful smile).

Kalpi place his head on the bed and tidies the room. She feels a sense of happiness to see raghav sleeping. She reaches the door and looks back at Raghav. He looks so endearing that I just don't feel like leaving him. She walks back to the bed covers him and strokes his head, kisses his forehead and suddenly feels a knot down in her chest as she notices that she is dangerously close to his face. Her lips only couple centimeters away from his which was smiling. She admired him and couldn't resist herself and gave a small peck on his lips and ran out of his room.

Kalpi reached home at 8.30pm. Kamala asked her Kalpi aaj bhi late beta bahut kaam tha kya?. Kalpi replied Haan Aai and gave her a big smile.

Kamla noticed that Kalpi looked different. She looked like a bloomed flower, all fresh and happy. Aai jaldi khaana de bhook lagi hai.

She just couldn't stop smiling thinking about Raghav and suddenly remembered that what if Raghav regrets this evening he spent with her???? And what if he continues to walk on the path of revenge?...

Please share your views. If you like it, I will continue and update the next chapter..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg what and update👏👏
Loved it😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
[Recap Part 24 : No one who saw them now would ever guess they had been through a life and death situation few hours ago! Because they both were so happy and lost in each others thoughts that they were actually happy about the lift incident that brought them closer!!! Love really has some funny ways thought Raghav!

Wierd Love thought Kalpi, the more we try to chase it away the more it pursues like the waves in the sea that keep coming back to us! She so wanted to scream her lungs out that she was in love! Should I tell baba? Maybe he will be able to help me!

Part 25a updated:

Statutory warning continues: Strictly to be read when alone! Else you may risk people thinking you are insane as you will be smiling! LOL

Kalpi enters the chawl with a smile on her face!! Attu notices this! She questions Kalpi with a mischief in her eye! Attu! I came early because something happened in the office today!

Kamla came running inside and held Kalpi by face and asked her in full concern, Tu theek hai na beta (are you fine my child?) Woh Paakhi had called me informing that you n Raghav baba got stuck in lift for 2 hrs! Nothing happened to you right?

Kalpi smiled (actually she felt a bit happy to get this kind of attention from her mom) She wanted to say she is fine but then sweetly said haan woh Aai I am feeling a bit tired. Tu baith main nimbu paani laati hun (U sit I will get some fresh lime water for you beta!)

Gauri too came to Kalpi and checked her pulse! and then told her your pulse is still irregular Kalpi first go change your clothes and wear something loose, and take few deep breaths! Also avoid eating anything oily for dinner now! Drink lots of water, ok?

Attu u should hv been a doctor! The way you behave is no less than a doctor! Suddenly her expressions change and she replies in a very strict tone. What do you mean I behave like one. I am a doctor!!

Kalpi and Kamla are shocked! Kamla tries ot change the topic by asking Gauri for tea. Gauri gets diverted and she moves back to her bed!

Kalpi changes and her phone rings! It was Prem! Before she could even say hello he fired a long list of questions...

Kalpana? Thank god you are fine. What happened? Did the lift fall? Were you in it when it fell? Did u get hurt? I mean that Raghv was with you and still it took 2 hrs to save you! Are you ok now? Just relax okay! and tell ur cheapo boss to install a new elevator in his building! Paakhi told me that you were stuck in a lift!

Kalpi told Prem to give the phone to Paakhi! I knw she must be somewhere around you, just call her!! Prem was a bit disappointed that Kalpi did not answer any of his questions, maybe she did not like the way I asked!

He calls Paakhi and tells her that Kalpi wants to talk to you.

Paakhi comes and she also starts her raagpatti! Kalpi now upset says enough is enough Paakhi stop spreading rumors I just got stuck in the lift the lift did not crash it just got stuclk!!

Sorry yaar Kalpi you knw naa I just have to blurt out everyhing. Next time I will not do so!

Kalpi: Ok now give the phone back to Prem!

Prem: Prem I am really fine ! You sister just wants to blow things out of proportion! Thanks for your concern. Really I appreciate it !

Can I come over to meet you? Kalpi is like its already 6pm why do you want to come now!

Well I just thought you know...I am sorry Prem it will take you a long time and you will skip ur dinner. We can meet tomorrow if you really want to but I can assure you I am fine!

Prem smiles when he hears Kalpi is more worried about him in her condition and tht she agreed to meet tomorrow! He says fine then take care. Goodnight!

Singhaniya mansion:

Raghav is all drained out! What an eventful day!! He smiled to himself thinking the moments he spent with Kalpi! Jsut then his phone rang and he listenend to soneone over the phone and got tensed ! He then calls up Kalpi and talks to her over the phone!

Kalpi is all concious and worried as she does not want anybody to hear her conversation so she goes to the chawl terrace and talk to Raghav!

They discuss various things and then talk about her results as he asked her if she is planning to reappear the exams! He wants to know more about it and asks her the details if she requested for rechecking etc!! He then tells her I want to give you something! She says what will you give me through the phone! And she heard a kissing sound! She blushed and cuts the call!
Raghav sighs and rubs the phone onto his chest and says issey ziddi ladki kahin dekhi nahin (Have never seen such a stubborn girl!) But I am no less!

Just wait Kalpi let me get you in my hands then you will suffer and smiles and naughtily with his lipbite! He goes to sleep peacefully!

Here at the Kapoor mansion after Prem had spoken to Kalpi he keeps smiling! Paakhi and Aakash look at Prem and each other and smile. Paakhi waves her hand in front of Prem but he is lost somewhere else! She laughs out loud and tuggs his sleeves and tells bhai kahaan kho gaye? Prem comes back to the real world and acts grumpy. What nonsense I am sleepy leave me alone!

But Akaash n Paakhi are in no mood to leave him alone. Finally Akaash tells Prem you are in love and Paakhi is all excited and she cant believe her ears when she asks about the girl and Aakash tells her about Kalpi!!

Kyaaa?????Paakhi literally screams out loud!! Prem covers her mouth and says dont shout if mom comes to know then Kalpana will be in trouble!

Poo now in teasin mode...ooo so Kalpi will be in trouble then what will happen to you bhai!! ???

Prem blushes and escapes from there to his room! He is sleepy and wants to meet Kalpana in his dreams!

Kalpi is all blushing and gushing after today's events thinking about Raghav!
Edited by priya_remix - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nyc update dear
first tym kamla cnrn abt kalpi.
Like prems cnrn also bt ltl afraid hope he is nt going to create any hurdles 4 ragna
update sn
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Part 25 b updated:

Here Kamla and Vitthal are having some talks. Kamla asks Vitthal if he has noticed KAlpi these days? Isn't she behaving wierd? She is taking interest in her looks and moreover she is full time on that stupid phone!! Vitthal says even I have been telling you that since some time but you were busy with your other baby!!
Kamla tels him that Paakhi needed her as she was rejected by Raghav! whom she loved a lot!

But I am scared Vitthal. I think its Prem! Vitthal jumps up from his chair and screams what nonsense!!?? That Kapoor's rotten egg can never impress my daughter!!

KAmla gets scared...no Vitthal in fact Kalpi n Prem are now friends! She has told me everything! But his coming here daily does not look good! Vitthal is disturbed to hear this! But why not Raghav even he comes here often!

Baap re vitthal says Kamla! Are you ok? Where is Raghav and our daughter Kalpi is no match for him! If he can reject Paakhi then how will he entertain Kalpi? Vitthal looks at her scornfully and slaps his forehead! You need to be sent to a Zoo! He leaves and sees KAlpi on the terrace over the phone! He hid behind a pillar to hear what we say!

He looks at his rajkumari and sees that she is sooo happy and contented. He smiles to see his rajkumari like that! He goes closer to her as soon as she sees him she cuts the call and asks Papa kya hua?

Vitthal asks her whose call was it! Woh Papa please dont be angry it was Raghav! I know I should not have answered his call I am sorry Papa!!

Vitthal cups her face and says you have done nothing wrong my child! It is ok to fall in love! Everyone falls in love atleast once in a lifetime!

Kalpi hugs her Papa! and says oh Papa he loves me so much I have never felt so special and wanted before Papa! He takes so much care of me that...Vitthal completes the sentence for her that ...you will forget me na Rajkumari with tears in his eyes!
Why do you have to grow up so fast beta? He wipes his tears and sees that Kalpi is almost about to cry and he laughs and tells aaj se tumhaara vidaai ki practice shuru!! Kalpi widens her eyes in shock! Kyun PApa? So that on vidaai u wont have tears in your eyes!!

Next day morning Prem as usual visits Kalpi Seeing Kalpi in a very good mood, he feels happy. He asks her about her health n stuff and she informs him about the conference. Tum bhi toh honge wahan? Wont you also be there Prem?

Prem had forgotten about it he had asked Aakash to handle everything! He immdtly calld up Akash and then let out a sigh of relief. Yes it id day after tmrw! You need anything in the last moment just let me know, Ok. Chal then you need to do packing right? Prem leaves and offers Kalpi to drop at her office. Kalpi declines saying you go straight to your office or else after 10am you will be stuck the whole day in traffic! as bothe the offices are on the opposite roads!

Here Aakash is all set doing packing and stuff and Paakhi is helping him. They both are in his guest room! She picks out clothes for him and he packs them. He thanks her for her help.
And she smiles and says anytime! Then she turns to leave towards the door when Aakash pulls her back hugging her from behind! And holds her very close to him. She closes her eyes and whispers What the hell are you doing? Aakash now takes his left hand and wraps it around her upper arms and chest and his right hand still wrappin her waist! He nuzzles his nose to her temple and neck and whispers in her ears! You also join us to Delhi naaa! How will I be without you for 5 days!
Paakhi turns around and kisses him on his cheeks and his forehead and his nose and one last on his chin!! Chalo 5 days ka hisaab baraabar!?? I will miss you too!

Aakash is like what I am not a kid that you fooling me with these!! I want the real deal! and grabs her to claim her lips. She wants to stop him but once he got there it seemed that more than him she wanted to kiss him! He kissed her deeply and passionately while his hands all over her! She loved it whenever he did that to her!
She closed the door and locked it and pushed him onto the bed nearby!
Aakash was a bit surprised! and he chuckled! hmmm so madam is in full mood I guess! She bit her lips and came over him and said yes you should not miss me for 5 days right? They kept kissing and that lead to heavy petting and then Aakash pulled back feeling guilty! Paakhi suddenly felt angry! What is it Aakash?

He said I dont think it is right! They both were breathing heavily! Paakhi you better go to your room! please! It does not look good that I take advantage of my friends sister! Paakhi really very very angry as she was all turned on and now Aakash was asking her to leave!

So till now whatever you did was not taking advantage is it? Go to hell Aakash! She stormed out of his room with tears in her eyes and goes to her bedroom! She wonders is there something wrong with me! Why do guys reject me all the time! Raghav and now Aakash! She heard her door click and she knew it was Aakash. She did not turn to look at him. He apologised to her and made her realise that he valued and respected her and did not want to do anything that could harm her and her family's reputation.

Oh Paakhi said I never thought that way! And they hugged. But immediately withdrew themselves as it was very difficult for them to stay separate under one roof!

Raghav has already instucted Ramu to pack his stuff and leaves for office and on the way picks up Kalpi!

-----To be continued!



Edited by priya_remix - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update:) Continue soon
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Omg 2 in 1 and both updates really good! Can't wait to see what happens while they're out if town! Continue soon pls! I love prem in ur ff. I miss him in the show so nice reading about him.
Edited by sunyy - 11 years ago

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