FF: Love, Revenge & Regrets Part 51only RagNa updt on Pg 152 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
oh love triangle... nice update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was amazing dear...

Prem taking care of kalpi and ragz jealous of him...

Sammy enjoying the entire show...

Everything s beautifully written...

Just a splendid update👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww loved it yaar .i really like dis angle of prem nd i think its gud to pair up kalpi wid prem for sumtime u knw kind of fake relatnship 😉 to mke raghv mre jealous
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update...just love jealous raghav😆😆😆
Continue asap..
Edited by appyK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really enjoy reading this part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please update soon. Its amazing. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow jealousy jiga rags
wow am enjyng it😆😆
amazing update
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
When ll u update..??
Plzz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 19 a - short update
Majnu? Ha ha ha Prem laughed hard! And then a rage crept over him till he started shaking. Gripping the glass tight in his hand he threw it with full force on the floor. A loud noise of the shattering glass was heard. The whole floor had the pieces of the glass spread all over. Akash was shocked at this reaction!

What is wrong with you Prem? What happened? Prem turned to look at Akash, I am not majnu okay. Majnu was a hopeless loser who just died for his love. I am not going to die but I can kill to get my love!

Yes this is what I will do. I will kill him. No matter how hard I try she never looks at me the way she looks at him. He grabbed onto Akash's shoulder and asked him...Have you ever done any stupid deed in your childhood due to which you have had to suffer to date?

I did and now I will lose her...no she was never mine so how can I lose her? I want her mate I really do. She makes me feel nice and human. I can't imagine my life without her, Aakash, please do sumthin! He then went to his room and collapsed in his bed with tears in his eyes.

Akash closes the bedroom door n locks it from inside and makes a call but it seems no one is answering it so he leaves a message asking the person to call him back!

He is looking disturbed too!

Here Raghav, sammy n Kalpi reach the chawl. He picks her up and takes her upstairs leaving Sammy in the car. Her full family is excited to see her but they try to control their feelngs. Vitthal seemed slightly worried and felt bad to see Kalpi in Raghav's arms n that his rajkumari no longer needed him.

Raghav puts her down on the sofa but is hesitant to let her go.
Kamla notices this too but choses to ignore as she trusted RS fully! Kamla asks them to sit while she makes tea. Raghav sat next to Kalpi. This time again Vitthal sensed that Raghav is being overfriendly to his rajkumari. But before he could react or ask something Pakya came and pulled him out of the house. Kamla was making tea when she realised that they did not have sugar as it got over. Main Kanta ke ghar se shakkar laati hun (I will get some sugar from Kanta's house). She asks Raghav to wait till she makes tea!

Now it was only Raghav n Kalpi in the room and Kamla had closed the door saying too many mosquitoes enter the house if doors left open.

Raghav now sat very very close to Kalpi. Kalpi who was silent all this time felt nervous. This man can romance anywhere koi license hi nahi! She had stated thinking of ways she can send him off asap.

He went close to her ears while she sat pretending not to be affected by his proximity. On the contrary her whole body had heated up and stiffened with the tension. Her mouth went dry, she was thirsty n feeling very tired and exhausted.

He whispered into her ears, "Next time I see you with Prem then you are gone, usi waqt seedha uthake shaadi karloonga", Samjhi!

Kalpi gulped at this warning from Raghav! He holds her hand and tells her, dont think I will leave you so easily, ye haath chodne ke liye nahi pakda hai...

Kalpi was now fully tensed because the door was not locked and anytime her mother or her father...She was shivering and feeling giddy too! Soon she felt as if the room was moving. Goodness what is it? an earthquake? and then everything blacked out!
She fainted and fell on his shoulder. Raghav did not know what to do. He wanted to get water but how can he do that without lifting her head from his shoulder. He was struggling to get up when she slipped from his shoulder onto his lap.

And just then the door opened and Vitthal was shocked at what he saw!


Sorry for the shprt update but another will be a long one...promise
Jab tak likes n comments aatey rahenge ye story chalti rahegi...ha ha ha (-gabbar)
More likes n comments = next update.
Edited by priya_remix - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow yaar
I loved it
Plz update soon 👏

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