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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Sorry to keep you all waiting dearies. But EMA ne is kadar mera dil toda ki meri kamar hi toot gayi!

Was suffering from slip disc so wasn't in the mood to continue the story.

But soon I will start the updates...Till then enjoy life!


Take care dear..get well soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys thank you for your concern and sorry to keep you all waiting for so long! So now I am back and here's your update:

Part 17 updated:

Now Raghav gets really very very angry! He calls Sammy inside his cabin. Paakhi thinks he is gone cuckoo!! Why is he getting angry on Kalpi all the time? Lord why is he sooo Khadoos? She nods her head in bewilderment and goes back to her cabin. She just wanted the day to end and go back home.
Home? Before she never used to like the thought of being at home what with Neetu and her antics but these days she waited to reach home and enjoy the family dinners with Akash too joining them. Everyone in her family took a great liking to him. He sure was a charmer! She came out of her thoughts and looked at Raghav through her cabin glass and thought, if only Raghav could be sweet like Akash! Why did it hurt that Raghav did not care for her!? Pushing all the wierd thoughts in her head she started working.

Raghav's cabin:

Sammy you told me that she would surely realize her feelings if I ignored her! But what happened she just left without saying a word to me! I mean she is hardly bothered about me yaar!

Sammy smiles and says you are wrong Raghav! Why do you think she got a headache? Just wait and be patient and dont forget my advice do not call her or answer her calls and keep ignoring her for the next few days and then see the magic happen!

Kalpi got down from the bus near her favourite place and walked upto the garden and found her famous bench with bappa's temple behind it! She visited the temple and prayed to her Lord!
Bappa what is wrong with me. Why am I so confused? Please send somebody who will make me realize what I want! Please bappa I cant live like this! She proceeds with a heavy heart to go and sit on the bench. Seconds later she is shocked to find Raghav sitting next to her smiling with a lip bite. She kept staring and did not know how to react. She looked away and said aap yahan kya kar rahey ho?

Finding no reply she turns back to look at him but no one's sitting on the bench. She nods her head and thinks ' You have lost it Kalpi, tera kuch nahi hoga'. She did not realise till what time she sat there lost in the memories that Raghav and Kalpi had spent together when someone tapped her shoulder.

She turned around to see a hawadar standing and asking her, ' Kaay zhaala madam, ghari zaaycha ki naahi?' in marathi. (what is it madam, dont wanna go home?)

She looks at him n then looks around. It has turned dark. How come she did not realise how long she has been sitting here? She nodded her head and replies to him, yes I am leaving. It is 7.30 pm. How come Aai has not called yet? She is surprised, she looks at her phone, it is switched off!!

Oh no I forgot to charge the phone yesterday and so it must have got switched off! S*&t! I am going to get an earful from Aai for sure today! She waits on the roadside for an auto hoping she gets one soon!
With the traffic and office leaving time it was difficult to find an empty auto! Oh no its better I walk up to home after all its just a 20 minutes brisk walk! She starts walking towards home hastily.

Singhania chawl:
The atmosphere is full of tension. Kamla calls up Paakhi to ask why is Kalpi late and her phone is switched off. On learning that KAlpi had left office in the afternoon with a headache she almost drops the phone in her hand. Paakhi also tells her that Khadoos must have scolded her a lot! Kamla now calls up Raghav and tells him Raghav baba my Kalpi has not yet reached home. I left her to work at your place as you could look after her, but now...

Raghav is plain shocked. He panicks and says Kamla maa I will do my best to find her please do not worry ok? He turns to Sammy and tell him tht our plan has backfired. Maybe Kalpi was too hurt and now she has not yet reached home.

Here Kalpi is still walking. Her head is literally splitting and she is also very tired. She felt as if for every one step she took forward her legs pulled her two steps backwards.

Suddenly she step on a small stone and twisted her leg. She fell on the ground. Ouch! Aai! she cried. Oh no I think I have sprained my leg! Now what do i do? She couldn't get up as the pain was unbearable. Sitting on the road she waved her hand at the passing by vehicles.

A car went past by her and stopped and reversed back towards her. It was Prem! He jumped out of the car and leapt at her. What happened Kalpana are you ok? I mean how did you fall, did anyone hurt you, are you hurt? How can you be so careless? Are you crazy?

Kalpi forgot all about her disomfort and pain as she was taken by a great surprise by Prem's concern for her! She was like, Whoa! whats it with him? She replied Prem, Are you okay? Hope you are not drunk! What is wrong with you?
Prem realised that he had unknowingly showed his true concern for Kalpana and cursed himself under his breath for his PDA. He just said What?!! Come I will drop you home!
He lifted her bag and threw it in the backseat. Then went back to her and tried helping her get up by holding her hands. She tried to get up but Aaah! she cried and once again lost her balance when he hels her by her waist. Kalpi was too hurt to notice that they were standing so close. But Prem was loving this closeness. He could smell the shampoo in her hair and could feel her thin waist. She was so small and fits perfectly in my arms he thought. Kalpi tried limping but then again the pain in her leg arose like a lightning shot! She clutched his shoulder and said Prem bohot dard ho raha hai!( Its hurting a lot!)

He did not think twice before he lifted her in his arms as if she was a feather and made her sit on the front seat. He came back to the driver's seat and said first lets go to a nearby clinic. You certainly need medical attention. He drove to the nearby clinic as fast as he could. Kalpi just kept staring at him in shock! Who are you?

What? Asked Prem? Oh no! did you hurt your head as well when you fell! Must be internal injury. Do you remember your name? It Kalpana...He sounded so genuinely concerned that it made Kalpana laugh out loud!

Ha Ha No I am fine I did not hurt my head! I asked because you are all of a sudden so concerned and helpful that I could not believe you are the Prem Kapoor mere bachpan ka dushman!

Dushman!!!!! Is that what she just said! I am an enemy to her! From childhood? He braked so hard that Kalpi lost her balance and was about to hit the dasboard in front. But Prem held her.
He looked at her with puppy dog eyes and said I told you last time that I am sorry. Can we not start this all over again? Let bygones be bygones please! I really want to be your friend!

Kalpi gave a smirk and repeated, Bygones? Forget everything that you and mother did with me? should I trust you now? What is it this time Prem? .

Prem sighed aloud and nodded his head. He said, 'No matter what I do I know you will never forget my mistake. Anyways this is not the right time. Someday you will realize that I have changed.'

No said Kalpi admantly, You won't change Prem Kapoor. Its in your blood!I will never trust you! And we can never be friends. A bai's daughter can never be your friend Mr Prem Kapoor!'

He is hurt by her words but does not talk further n drives to reach the clinic! He gets down and again lifts her in his arms and walks in.

As he passes by the other patients in the clinic, two people are shocked to see Prem carry Kalpi in his arms and walking towards the reception. and then he places her on a chair near the waiting area.

They were none other than Raghav and Sammy. As soon as he had heard Kalpi did not reach home, both Sammy n Raghav came searching for Kalpi. They even looked for her in the temple and the garden but had just missed Kalpi. On the way when their car had passed on the road they missed to see Kalpi on the road as that was the same moment she had her fall! But on the way their car broke down and Sammy got down to check the problem. In a hurry to check he just carelessly pricked himself with some part of the car. Ouch he winced. Raghav got out of the car and checked his hand and the thing with which he was hurt. It was a rusted piece of tin. Raghav showed concern and told Sammy lets go to the nearest clinic and get it dressed and get an antibiotic shot else your wound might get septic. Sammy says tu jaa kalpi ko dhoond main clinic jaata hun. (You go search for Kalpi I will go to the clinic). Raghav nodded in disagreement. Main bhi tere saath chalunga(I'm coming with you.)

His eyes had turned blood red from what he just saw. How dare that Prem touch my Kalpi! Main isey aaj nahi chodunga!
He marched towards them but before he could confront them Prem entered the doctor's room with Kalpi!

He was about to barge in when the nurse asked him to wait for his turn as there were patients inside. He was dying to know what had happened to Kalpi and why was Prem with her! He was disappointed and angry that it wasn't him taking care of her. Why do I always end up hurting her?

He realises something and makes a call. 'Haan Kamla maa! Hum jald aayenge. Dont worry she is fine now with doctor. Dont worry nthing serious. Yes I will, ok bye'

...To be Continued

Please do not throw chappals on me. I m not starting Prem Kalpi track. But I guess I missed Prem in this show so much that I made an entire chapter for him! :)
Anyways Raghav has to get jealous naaa! so please like and add ur comments for the next update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsum dear... beautifully written... cnt wait to read hw prem will influnce rags nd kalpi's reltnship...

plzz update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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brilliant update...continue soon..👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hope u r alright now..tc..
Awesome update..me 2 missing prem and loving this jealous raghav..😆😆continue asap..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chalo it seems I am in the mood to keep writing today!

Part 18 updated:

Raghav was prowling in front of the door at the dispensary waiting to pounce on Prem and Kalpi. He had all sorts of imaginations and thoughts with Kalpi and Prem. HE was wondering why Prem is interested in Kalpi all of a sudden? Is Prem planning to hurt her?

Kalpi why did she take Prem's help? I mean what exactly must have happened to her? Where did she go from office? Did she go to meet Prem? No she dislikes Prem then why would she do so? But then the way he was carrying my Kalpi in his arms, he picturised the same thing and winced with his eyes shut as if trying to delete that image from his system!

Sammy walked upto him. His hand was now neatly bandaged and he said Raghav you better control yourself! Raghav looked at Sammy as if he would attack him first.

Its all because of you, he hissed under his breath! Na tum mujhe use ignore karne ki advise dete aur na mein follow karta aur na woh rooth jaati. Dekha now that Prem is trying to take advantage of this situation! I am sure, usine kuch plan kiya hoga and now pretending to help her and all.

'How dare he! that ...'Shhh Sammy signalled that the door had opened. It was the doctor and Kalpi was again seen in Prem's arms but she had a sprain bandage in her leg!

The doctor was smiling and telling Kalpi you are lucky to have a boyfriend like him who is so caring. Trust me I have seen many couples but never seen anyone carrying his girlfriend in his arms around the dispensary. Take care and I advise you not to strain your foot for another 3 days! And yes, eat well, as the medicines I gave you are very strong!

Kalpi was embarrassed to hear this and Prem was grinning from ear to ear. Kalpi was like, Doctor uncle ye mere BF nahi hai.. woh..

But the doctor said achha achha theek hai...but remember I have seen life and many people too! Ok Bye and come after 3 days.

Raghav was ready to kill that doctor, he was enraged like a mad wild bull confused as to whom should he attack first the doc or Prem?

He marched towards Prem and looked at Kalpi with his bloodshot eyes. Kalpi was shocked to see Raghav there at the clinic and said Sir aap yahan?

She felt uneasy and uncomfortable as Raghav saw her in the arms of another man! She squirmed in Prem's arms and asked him to put her down . He felt a bit disappointed but gave in to her request and placed her on the bench in the waiting area. He looked at Raghav and could read the anger in his eyes. He realised that Raghav loved Kalpi and could not see her with anybody else just like he despised seeing Raghav with Kalpi. With a heavy heart and knowing the answer, he asked Kalpi if he should wait for her to drop her home. He had started walking even before she replied. Kalpi called him back and his heart skipped a beat! He turned around to see Kalpi with a meek smile and grateful eyes. She thanked him! Thank you Prem for all that you did! Prem felt great from inside! He shook his head and replied, please don't thank me I dont deserve it!

He left from there giving another look to Raghav who did not want to see Prem at all. His eyes were fixed on that beautiful damsel sitting on the bench with her eyes cast down. She doesnt even want to look at me! But she can tolerate Prem! Mmmpphhh!

Kalpi kept looking at the floor. She felt guilty, and she did not know why? Its not my fault then what is wrong with me. I should have not let Prem leave. Raghav would then never talk to me, that is what I wanted right? Then why did I ...ufff ab ye aur ek bhashan denge!

Slowly she lifted her eyes to look at Raghav. She saw him ogling at her, all his anger gone. Her cheeks went beetroot red as she could feel a tingling sensation from her head to toe it was as if she could feel his eyes taking her beauty in.

How can someone look so beautiful even when she is hurt, tired, dishevelled? Her hair was all in a mess, her clothes had become dirty due to the fall. She looked very tired and weak but still she looked amazing.

Raghav, Woh main...Actually... arre! yeh aap kya kar rahey hain please mujhe neeche utaar dijiye.

Kalpi was trying to explain but before she could finish Raghav lifted her in his arms and started walking. She tried to struggle but he was too strong to budge. Sammy was amused to see Raghav and Kalpi in the Dilwaale Dulhaniyaa le Jaayenge pose! He shook his head. Raghav stopped and asked him to get Kalpi's medicines too with his.

Sammy agreed and proceeded towards the pharmacy, while Raghav walked towards his car. Kalpi was upset! She did not like this. She was feeling weak it was true, but her resolve was also becoming weak and this she did not like!

You dont need to drop me home, just catch me an auto and I shall go! I dont want anybody's favors or ummm... she could not speak as her mouth was shut by Raghav! (he placed his palm on her mouth...what did you guys think ;) ) shhh...just shut up! I am not interested in you, Kamla maa asked me to drop you home so I am just following her orders.

Kalpi frowned and pushed his hand! How dare he? Khadoos only cares about himself. Why did I even let Prem go? she wondered aloud!

Shhh so Prem is it? Whats going around with you both cos as far as I know you never liked him, then what is with this newfound affection towards him.

Kalpi was beginning to enjoy Raghav's jealousy. Sir is jealous of Prem? Does that mean he still loves me? ...'Oh its nothing, he has changed. Unlike some other people who never accept they were wrong in the first place, Prem apologised for his mistake and wants to improve relations', said Kalpi with a slight smile on her lips.

Relation??What ??? How is he related to you now???

He just wants to be friends with me! You gotta problem with that too Sir?? Raghav was very upset. He went very close to her, his nose almost touching hers. I dont like to see anyone even looking at you let alone touch you. Uss Prem ki toh main khabar loonga!!!

Please Sir I dont want you to get into all this nonsense! I am an adult and I know whom I should befriend and whom I shouldn't.

Raghav was about to pull her towards him when Sammy opened the backdoor and sat in the car.

I have got the medicines lets go! They both keep quiet and Raghav starts driving again. Thankfully the car did not create any problems after Sammy fixed it, but Raghav wanted the car to break down again so that he could spend some more time with Kalpi!!

Once Raghav's car left, Prem too left in his car. It looked as if he almost cried when he saw Kalpi in Raghav's arms! Cursing himself for becoming vulnerable in front of Kalpi, he drove back home.

Once he reached home he went towards the bar and opened a bottle. From the corner of his eye he saw Akash talking over the phone and he seemed a bit serious. Prem ignored him and started drinking. He was almost 5-7 pegs down when Akash joined him. So Mr Majnu, wassup? Prem turned towards Akash and looked at him irritated and repeated Majnu? and then laughed...


-----To be continued...


More likes and comments = sooner updates... Thanks for reading ppl!

Edited by priya_remix - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome updates i read both the parts together...👏👏 lovely and Prem bring in a new girl for him too afterall he too deserves a chance 😉
Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
well dear..this isgreat...i luv raghv...aww..poor guy can c api wit prem...n sammy he was juz enjoyg the show...🤣

AWESOME...update soon..🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing dear... prem serious abt kalpi nd takin care of her..😊

rags gttin jealous is alws delight to read...

kalpi cursing.. 😆 cnt wait to read hw prem will affect rags...

plzz update soon..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Alys keep ur in this
And upfate fat plzzz
Nyc story
I m loving this triangle

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