FF: The Mentor : Chapter 8 : Enemy In Laws : Upd. pg 60 - Page 22

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Yeah please continue. Short or long but atleast u r giving update Nd continuing with the story. Thanks
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Thank God ! You are back. Long or short , we are 'EVEREADY "' to read it ! Not only romantic but exciting too, keeping you guessing for the next 'move of Kalpi ! Thanks for reconsidering.
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Shana really happy that u hv finally decided to come out of one year mourning period of sad demise of EMA and continue with this beautiful FF of yours.
I read all the five part once again to get into the flow. You have beautifully started the journey of two souls RAGNA, reflection of each other. Both are on the journey to prove their identity, one in the revenge mode towards those friends turned foes, Nd creating justice for his lost innocence lost childhood, lost parents/security. The other one too seemingly dejected by her own mother for foster daughter, now trying to win back her mother by completing dreams of her mother.

Both of them are so lost in their aim that they seemingly forgotten about their lone heart that was beating for each other probably from the day of their existence. And destiny pitted them with each other initially one as mentor Nd other as student/intern. The tough and hard mentor collided with equally receptive intern, Nd fate unsealed the hidden emotions in them towards each other. Raghav being elder, and more experienced fathomed it Nd got restless, sleepless guarding himself Nd Kalpi from this surge. Kalpi being yet naive Nd innocent spends sleepless night to understand this new feeling of special caring she feels towards her mentor.

Kamla being the MOTHER is sleepless knowing Nd understanding these budding emotions. Really dunno wat hv u planned for Kamla's character, the same as in EMA or will give your magic touch to her too.

And now started the real journey. In the game of hide and seek Of their emotions behind the curtain of their goals, they finally succumbed to the inner magnetic pull of attraction, resulting in a beautiful FIRST KISS, knowingly enjoyed by one unknowingly enjoyed/recognized by other one.

Then came the moment of realization and confession in Goa. The responsibility of mentor turned to care, jealousy Nd possessiveness Of a lover in Raghav which got reflected in Kalpi. The self control of alert mentor prevailed and the overwhelmed in the flow, with the fragrance of first realization Kalpi confessed and voiced out her love to Raghav, her mentor her MIRROR! Her mirror accepted THEIR TRUTH, reciprocated Their RELECTION, but alas chose to be the SHADOW. A reflection which requires clean transparent, clear medium for light to reflect Nd illuminate, where as a shadow requires densities Nd opacities of secrets, negative emotions of revenge Nd above all smokes of confusions to blurt the reflection Nd cast a dark shadow, which Raghav has become by impulsively announcing his marriage with Pakhi to fulfill his revenge.

Now will be eagerly waiting to see how Kalpi changes shadow back to reflection of RAGNA. So now will there be role reversal of mentor Nd intern?
Patience Is indeed a virtue wen u decide to write after a span of a yr, so will stick to the virtue for the answers. Till then sorry if I hv bored u with my comments.
Edited by shoonya9 - 10 years ago
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Thanks for continuing it. Love your stories.
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Shana plz continue waiting for the update dear. How r u
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Mee mre meee
thankyou so much for continuing it
I love your ff :)
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Shan Happy me !!!!!! Do continue !!!!!!!!!!!
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Shoonya. What a lovely lovely analysis of a remarkable story !!!!!! You have brought out the emotional depth of the characters of Raghav n Kalpana with such immense clarity that their angst has come alive👍🏼 . Loved your take .😊
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Chapter 6

The Player



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Kamla Baai was on ninth sky she rushed to her cell phone.' Let me congratulate my Paaki baby' she gushed.' At last she got what she always wanted. Raghav Baba and she will be married soon' .Kamla Bai was busy weaving dreams for her second daughter. Soon her Paki baby will be a bride
and it will be she who will dress her up.

While dreaming of her foster daughter once again she forgot her own daughter. She missed the colorless face of her own daughter who stood there in shock .It was her father Vithhal who marked it.

'Kalpi r u alright. Why r u so shocked! As though u saw some ghost. '

I saw something worst Baba ,just that now i realised it ' said Kalpi collecting herself.

'Ah Aai pack my Tiffin first ,then congratulate your Paaki ',demanded Kalpi trying to be her usual self even though disheartened at the cluelessness of her mother about her own daughter's heartbreak.

Her words were enough to make Kamla realise Kalpi was irritated at her Paaki priority again. She rushed to pack her lunch before Kalpi would go to office without it. Kalpi cried all through her way. Tears did not seem to stop. She felt like suddenly summer monsoon found its way through her eyes.

Raghavs sweet words sounded more like thunder now.

So for Raghav Prem was an idiot so what was he himself. A Player !!

She reflected at herself 'What am i then ?'

'Nothing ', was all she could deduct at this weak moment,where she felt rejected both by her mother and now Raghav too ,the one in whom she tried to find her solace. At the end of the day they both belonged to Paki.

'O madam! ,in which world r u' , complained a passenger whose way she had been blocking while lost in her on thoughts.

'Sorry bhaai saab ',she apologized more to herself then to passenger for going so weak enough to think of herself as nothing.

She looked at the sprawling blue glassed building with name Singhania Groups shining on it. Suddenly it seemed as repelling as Kapoor Groups or say as challenging as Kapoors. She fiercely pushed the rolling entrance gate and slipped. The guard rushed to help her but she stood up hastily.Embarrassed at herself she thanked the guard but again knocked herself to something.

Surely it was one of her worst day today . She forgot all her anger and tried to remember whose face she saw in the morning to have such a bad day. Was it my own !

'May be yes ' came the answer from somewhere. She looked up to face somebody unexpected. Prem Kapoor

'Seems like my sisters marriage news has made u mad enough that now u r talking to urself' taunted Prem who was actually the thing Kalpi had knocked herself in and who heard her speak to herself so loud enough

Kalpi rolled her eyes Not again !

'I think u own an apology to me rather then some

taunt regarding your sister ' she fired .

'Well i did come here to say sorry but seeing u in

such state makes me confused . Is it still the hangover or my sisters' news.After all your savior is getting married to my sister so...' he could not complete his sentence.

'Better say sorry for your act and get lost ' growled

Kalpi as she stomped towards her chair.

'OK sorry for that day. Sorry for not being able to succeed to lay u down' winked Prem ' but sure i will succeed next time coz your savior will be busy with my sister ' .

Prem swiftly made his way out before some hard thing came flying on him. He liked dejected yet angry face of Kalpi. It always made his day. For him it served her well. A working maids daughter dreamed too much and even though he hated Raghav Singhania , still for the first time he found himself appreciating him for being so smart in playing around the girls.

Kalpi had enough . Fist the morning news then the slip at the gate and now Prem. Her desk phone rang.

The voice on other side made her heart pound. She did not want to face him . No not today. He had ditched her and she needed some time to really face with some real good swear words. She was in dire need of her brother Pakya's chawl wali gaalees to vent her frustration.

She banged the receiver down. Do hell Mister Bossu r no Boss today ' , she mumbled to herself and decided to merge herself in pending files.

'Miss Jadhav ', the voice cut strait through her skin. She decided not to raise her head and ignored.

It came again and again and then speaker banged his hand on the desk.

Sorry i did not hear ', answered Kalpi calmly removing head phone from her ears. ' Did u say something SIR'.

Raghav was surprised at her composure. To him her calmness was more like peace before storm.

'I asked u to come to my office ', he said equaling her calmness.

'Well i don't feel any need of that Sir. U r not my head whom i have to report. Once Sammy sir comes i will report to him.Raghav could smell the seething anger in Kalpi . he needed to calm her down or she would keep hurting herself .He needed to explain her.

'Kalpi ' he grabbed her hands tightly 'we need to talk '

Kalpi lost her control. She felt like filth by his hand touch. The touch she had so loved , desired and cherished had suddenly become a filth for her. Something she wanted to purify herself from, just immediately..

She tried to free her hands but Raghav was reluctant so her second hands did by reflex exactly what any girls hand do in such calamity.

She slapped him hard .Raghav was not at all ready for it. His face turned red while others in office watched their mouth open.

Nobody expected Raghav Singhania grabbing hands of an office assistant and none expected him to be slapped so red!! This was going to be a well talked Gossip in Singhania galore for years.

It took few moments for Raghav to realise the

staring eyes and Kalpi who was still struggling to free her hands from the grab which had become even tighter after the slap.

Somehow Sammy succeeded in freeing Kalpi's hands ,while both Raghav and Kalpi stared at each other like some sworn in foe ready to kill at any moment .

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Sammy stared at Raghav who sat hunched in his office chair . he felt disgusted. Never in dreams had he thought his friend raghav will have such a double face too.

He had felt that Raghavs love for Kalpi was true but after reading the morning news and his adamant behavior to Kalpi , he realized that Raghav was more of an obsessed for Kalpi and his Revenge.He neither wanted to give up on Kalpi nor his revenge. He did not know how to stop the revenge game Raghav had started. He was playing with lives of three Himself Kalpi and Paaki .

Raghav was in his own deep thoughts. Kalpi was never out of his mind right since he first saw her. Her thoughts and impact had already done enough damage to his revenge plans. He had always tried to keep distance but that night he crossed his limits. No girl would be normal after
what he did to Kalpi but he did not plan it this way. He wanted to explain his plans to Kalpi and take her on his side. But things happened so quick.

The moment he woke up with Kalpi tucked by his side sleeping peacefully in his arms ,he realised what chaos was it going to be. If he went for peace by her side he would never be able to take away peace from those murderers who lived so peacefully after killing his parents and making him orphan.

Today he saw no love in Kalpis eyes ,it was disgust . Kalpi who had melted in his arms just a night before was now disgusted in him. His touch irked her, his nearness suffocated her. He saw how desperately she wanted to free herself from him. For her was nothing but aplayer who used her and tossed her aside. Was it only this much she understood him. he had expected some maturity from her. He expected her to at least listen to his explanation , listen to his plans .

May be he expected too much from her.

Did I', he looked at the mirror questioning himself.

Suddenly he felt warmth of Kalpi's breath on his chest and then next moment he realised her eyes staring at him disgustingly . He so much wanted to see love in her eyes . He sighed as realisation struck
him.

Realisation that no woman wants to share her man just the way he won't share his kalpi with with anyone. Realisation that Kalpi had no love for him but disgust. Realisation that now Kalpi will have to go through same pain and torture which he will go through while implementing his future plans. Its just a start then, he has to prepare for some more hatred, disgust and slaps!!

'Fine so be it . I will play my game and win. Hate me or love me ,I won't let u go in either case. Now explanations will be done ,when u demand it yourself Kalpi ', ,he smiled cynically as he looked at Kalpi through the glass doors.


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Writers Note:

Dearest Readers,

I am continuing this FF only for my avid readers and RagNa fans who have loved this FF so much.Do Like it and leave your comments as how u liked it and how u would like the story to move forward. Feel free to read the previous chapters to have the re grip of story.

with lots of love

Shana


Edited by ShanUlas - 10 years ago
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Welcome back dear. I was waiting for this story to move ahead from ages 😆.kalpi is hurt ,betrayed and felling disgust. Kamla is so lost in the happiness of her so called daughter that she is unable to see Pain of her own daughter 😕. Now after everything happened Raghav decided to explain to kalpi and want her on his side. Is not this little too late for him.Prem is stupid jerk here.
Kalpana slapped Raghav Singhnia and that too infront of everyone 😲. Chanta lagaaa😆 hai laga.
Well he deserves it. Want to know what will kalpi do now as Raghav decided to get both revenge and his love. ...
Amazing update dear. Please continue soon 👏
Edited by riaka - 10 years ago

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