#3:VIRMAN FF*kyu DARD hai itna*PART 22*PG.135

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#681

Shilpa nice update!! 👍🏼 I loved the name of the chapter :).. So VSV is having trouble in controlling his emotions in front of his wife ;).. Yeh toh hona hi tha.. Who can resist such an amazing girl like Mannu :p.. So they are back to farm house.. But I want Virat to be little bit nice with her.. He was too rude.. :( For Manvi it must be very difficult to stay in that house where she had the most painful experience of her life.. Hope he will try to understand her pain in future.. His is torn between his mind and heart.. Hope he listens to his heart this time.. His thoughts are very well portrayed 👏👏.. Precap sounds good.. Now what is he upto?? Loved the song selection <3.. Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care :DP.S.- Congratulations for completeting 100 pages 😃 👍🏼

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saathana

@saathana

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#682

Hey shilpa as usual wonderful update.Your update was awesome and fabulous.😛

Loved virat's dilemma,control of desires,anger and frustration.Slowly slowly melting towards his wife but not able to admit that he is madly in love with his wife.😃😃😃

The part where you explained virat's control of desires and the line " I HAVE SEEN MORE THAN THAT " was superb.😊😊😊

Loved manvi's dilemma towards their relationship and I think she is a bit confused whether she is in love with her husband or not.Her anger and fear towards going to the farm house was justified.overall an awesome update.😲😲😲

Coming to the teaser it seems to be a bit romantic.Eagerly waiting for the next part.Congrajulations 👏👏👏for reaching 100 pages in 3rd thread of this ff.😉😉😉

continue soon and pm me.please send me pm.i'm not receiving any pm's from you.sorry for mentioning it.Anyways thank u so much for such wonderful update.😛😛😛

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virumanu

@virumanu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#683

crying ..u made me cry so i m angry on u ..yaar u did u stop at te wrong time.
Anxway i loved the update ...mindblowing

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#684

Awesome Teaser..~! Waiting for the Update..!

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Faria12345

@Faria12345

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#685

R U SLEEPING????? Or working on it????????? Update karo naaa

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Viratmanvifan31

@Viratmanvifan31

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Posted: 12 years ago

#686

congo ...:) yayyy 100 pages on 3rd thrd ... yipeee !!!!

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maahiya90

@maahiya90

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#687

when u update???tell me fast...m waitng egrly...treasr is too much confusing..

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Viratmanvifan31

@Viratmanvifan31

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Posted: 12 years ago

#688

shilpaaa awesum teasr ... i guess ahem ahem parts kuming up!!! 'dont go please.. i will ...' virat said huskily ... seems lyk our bad boy has gottn little soft ... :) i love virat in ol shades... bad, caring, gentle , monstrs, soft, possesve ... virat <3.. i hope dis tym no phn cals n dat idiot karan distrbs them.

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kriyasree

@kriyasree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#689

Argg first shilpu y u have to stp in wrng n nw tis teaser pls update kardo yar

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Faria12345

@Faria12345

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#690

This is not fair... I'm hovering in ur thread refresing every 10
Mins just with a hope that this jalim shilpaaa will update but nei kamini haiii tu...
Sunraha hai naaa... Rorahi hu maiii... Sun raha hai na tu,...
That's my melodramatic me .. Now my evil mind say sadddaaa haq ithheee rakh!!! Updateee updateee >.< I'm so gonna kill u!!!! Tu Kyu apna supari dwne ke liye mujhe majbur kararahi hai madam??? Since I making us wait we deman for a big update n dare u to stop at wrong time ... >.<

Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago