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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nobo

🤢 🤢 🤢


😔 😒 😔 😒 😒
Aisa kiya bafee mere sath,.. Meko nai bataya...link b nai Diya 🤢 huhhh



thappad maarungi...
sabse pehle tum logon ko hi Pm karti hun main..ab check ni karte toh main kya karun... HUH !!
tere kinne saare comments pending hain.. 🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Neha we are all the same :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Neha.K.



thappad maarungi...
sabse pehle tum logon ko hi Pm karti hun main..ab check ni karte toh main kya karun... HUH !!
tere kinne saare comments pending hain.. 🤢


😲😲

Abi check Kiya dabba ...mil Gaya pm 😕 I swear it was not there before...chamatkar 😲

aata toh Hota nai yahan par Ab...befaltu ki PMs Pade the kafi...apki wali 2nd page par pahunch chuki thi Jo Mai kbhi nai dekhta
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Pj-

Neha we are all the same :D



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Pj-

Neha you are totally pagal. You and Ami in Paris, with fictional Jeevika and Maanvi. Hat off dude! But I did think you were going to throw them off the Eiffel tower!



I was actually preparing myself to read that ...the girl in black being the mastermind completing the task Alongwith the IPhone girl buwahaaa 🤣 🤣 JeeMaan byeee...hamesha ke bad bhi

But this onez sweeter ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yad e nai rha reserve tha...Ek aur Kar Diya...aur Usme sab kachra ho Gaya. .quote hi nai hua thik se maybe
Edited by nobo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Neha.K.



thappad maarungi...
sabse pehle tum logon ko hi Pm karti hun main..ab check ni karte toh main kya karun... HUH !!

aapne mujhe nhi kiya pm...:(:(:(:(

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shaina you might have got it, but Neha doesn't title her PMs.

Priya I wanna read your bak bak seeing as my bak bak was strange.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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How can someone be so creative 🤔 😳 Haila Amii & bafee in Paris with Jeeman 😲 What you girls are upto eh 😉
The concept is something only Bafee can think of ...SUCH A TREATT TO READ...
JeeMaan + JMinas = magickkk

I was shocked at Amii's intro Lolz but then kinda figured abt what it would be. Lol at your entry I thought pakka JeeMaan ko Marne ka plan banayenge dono 🤣 🤣

But really this was much better than the expectations we develop while reading..Khaaskar ye wale portions



Originally posted by: Neha.K.

and settled keeping her jacket over her iphone this time in case they again spill something on her iphone...


Amii is Hilarious 🤣 ...Hmmm caution is best when dealing with Mannu 😎


"Hi.. m Ami..."

"Hi.. Jeevika."


😲 😲 😲
THIS WAS A SHOCK...
So the girl who gave THE LOOK was Amii 🤣



The Girl in Black turned around and looked blankly when Ami requested her to click a few pictures of her around.

I KNEWWW THE GIRL IN BLACK IS BAFEE...PAKKA SE 😎 😎





"yeh tere haath se purple sa dhaaga kaisa latak raha hai..?"
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"Kisko..? ohh.. sorry bhi bolte hain kya..?"
Manvi giggled

Amii's Purple Obsession & typical mannuu😆




"Kya hua..?" Neha came to shake her but instead of responding Ami started walking with her but just as she was about to trip Neha caught her hand saying "Kehdeyan khyaalan tenu patteya.. dass tu ki pyar vichon khatteya" hearing Neha sing such sooo dramatically and badly Ami laughed along with her..

"Punjabi gaanon ka shauk hai..?"
Ami asked..

"punjabi ka Zyada nahi.. par baaki gaano ka hai... I mean I can spend all day with my phone naye-purane, rotlu-comedy, sad-romantic.. har gana pasand hai mujhe.." Neha said making Ami smile at her exaggerated explanation..



This passage was 2nd best in the shot..your & Amii's interaction. Can so imagine this. Such an apt description of you both ...& A known attraction towards an unknown. Beautiful ❤️



" Pehli baat to yeh, Jo tu tik-tok tik-tok chalti hai Maana ye saari teri high heels ki galti hai" Manvi sang, doing a little bhangra on her seat turned her face towards neha and spoke- "Ruk toh jaa tu hang on.. yeh toh bata tu hai kaun.. kahan se aayi hai kahan ko jayegi."

Ami and Neha looked at her disbelievingly and Jeevika hid her face in her palms muttering- She is not with me..

Mannnuuu ...I lovvveddd this one 🤣 🤣 🤣


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Jeevika looked at her and unknowingly spoke- I LOVE YOU..

It was odd.. Jeevika didn't know why she said that.. Manvi didn't know, what happened to her Di, And Neha looked around to understand the things.. Ami got down to Jeevika's knees and said- I love you too, hum aise milenge, sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha... its my best bday and best bday gift everrr...

Neha shouted- YOU ARE AMIII... my Duchman!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Neha immediately hugged Ami and expressed her all happiness through that one hug.. Jeevika kissed Ami's forehead and said- Happy birthday..

Thanku Di, ''Ami mumbeled unknowingly

Dii?, 'Jeevika asked

Pata nahin..par muh se nikal gaya apne aap.."
Ami replied smiling at Jeevika

Ami turned to Neha and said- "Dooron baith duawaan kardi Ammi... saanu na kujh ho jaye dardi Ammi..." While Neha grinned recognizing the song and its relevance..

"Aap nai aaoge wish karne?" Ami said to Manvi..

Manvi came forward, hugged her and said "Happy bday Duchman"

Duchman?'' Ami looked at Manvi with wide eyes
"Haha woh maine Neha ko kehte suna hai.. i mean dekha hai IF pe tumhe kehte huye" Manvi giggled...

& here comes the best part...loved each & every detail here. Be it that unknown & natural relation of didi & Amii or be it Mannu & your's fun bits ...everything was beautiful
This is a rare quality of yours bafee...even when we know what's coming in broad you surprise the reader with smallest of things or gestures..& they leave an IMPACTTT


And all laughed and Ami cut her fav Diary Milk chocolate as a bday cake with kurkure fixed on it as candles..


Kurkure on Chocolate 😲
Innovation at its best man...so sweet ❤️





& Everything was on one side & the JMians Fact was on one side in this Shot ...how we meet on an online forum, discuss our Fav ( & fictional ) characters & get along so nicely without even meeting personally that the bond is kinda unbelievable. I don't think any of us ever thought that we'd have such friends in virtual world who'd mean so much.
How we come from such different backgrounds , with even different tastes , habits , cultures with Some bits in common ...the biggest of them being JeeMaan & then chatting away like with known of years...is beyond me ...

In short 😆I loveddd itt, every bit of it as it had somewhere the glint of relations we have made through IF

Wonderful work bafee...& Happy birthday Amii ( go unres your comment lol )

Edited by nobo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*OH EM GEE* - *O M G* - *HOLY MOLY* 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

N E H A P I E 😳 EK SAWAAL PEHLE...CAN I HAVE YOUR AUTOGRAPH????? 🤓 🤣 ☺️


Hai hai Nehapie...aap ki penmanship ki WAH BHAI WAH 🤓 🤣 Inni googly eyes aur fancy "N"...main mar jawaan ☺️ 🤣 OMG, look at me go...phir se bakwaas kar rahi hoon 🤣

NEHAPIE!!!! OMG, this is E P I C 😳 Such a wide smile on my face throughout the whole thing...ab toh my face is permanently like this ---> ...KAMAAL HAI The concept is sooo cuuute!!! JeeMan toh JeeMan hai...our weirdos 🤣 ❤️ I toh already love the Nehapie and Amii that I bother so often...but fell in love with you both again in this OS 🤣 Aapki 32 teeth waali smile aur Amii's khoobsurat awaaz...kya baat hai!! Sachi, your dosti toh is absolutely beautiful...DUCHMANNN 🤣 Sounds like a superhero na...it's not a bird, it's not a plane, it's...DUCHMAN 😎 🤣 Lekin seriously...so many things I absolutely ADORED in this masterpiece: how cleverly you incorporated you and Amii in JeeMan's lives 🤓, the awesome songs , how you kept JeeMan's characters intact ❤️, "bacchi hai meri ," Amii getting down on her knees ☺️, dairy milk with kurkure 🤣 and the Eiffel tower...HUMARA SAPNA 🤣 For a second, like Priya and Pooja, I thought ki you'd make them jump...was about to scream out of joy 🤣 Lekin koi baat nahin...THIS WAS EVEN BETTER!!! 👍🏼 Sweetest birthday present ever ji...absolutely wonderful!!!! - your secret admirer 🤣 Keep writing ji...can't get enough of you and your work!!! You're totally gifted!!!

Amii, a very very very happy belated birthday!!! 🤗 ❤️ 🥳 Hope you had a blast!!! God bless you...keep partying hard, eat loads and loads of cake (see, that's why I got you a 25K pound cake) and keep smiling your beautiful smile!!! 😃 As soon as you come back, we have to resume our never-ending chats 😛 Very sorry that I'm late ji 😔 I have to make up for this...any ideas? 🤣

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