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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Wow I missed Eva's long comments.

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Amii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

@Neha: Finally about time I am here!!! Apologies for being super late with my reply; just didn't have adequate sources in motherland thus had to wait all this while to return to Pluto! Now I don't even know to what to say- great! But I guess for starters I can express my gratitude for such an amazing birthday gift which is nothing but a pure form of love incorporated in an innovative thought! Its a mix bag of cuteness, emotions, love, and much more- amazingly crazy!!! And Neha, trust me when I say this that only YOU can pull this off!!!! I read this on my birthday first thing in the morning and lets just say it was the second best thing that happened since the day 9^th June rolled in!!! I have been meaning to rush back and post a comment to say it all and it obviously didn't happen but I guess all the wait made it even more special. I probably read this like 10 times if not more ever since then though! Like you I was also awaiting for my arrival to Pluto so I can finally jot down my thoughts!

Props for coming up with this idea first of all- how do you actually come up with all this lol?! And the way you compiled this OS is just something else ' you are an amazing writer no doubt but for something like this, not only you need your skills but also have compassion and emotion to make it what it exactly is right now- brilliant! And all of that shows in your work and it is also apparent that our conversations have contributed a lot to this as the details that you have mentioned about my personality and much likes/dislikes hits the target accurately! Again it is one thing to know another and their likes/dislikes etc and is another to understand them on a deeper level for the things that they probably never mentioned! You have done exactly the same with how you depicted me as a person, my reactions, interactions, and emotions ' it was as if I had told you all this and honestly I don't even know how would I have reacted or react if I were in this exact situation but it definitely would have been something similar if not exactly the same!!! And this is exactly what became the highlight of this OS and what stirred me emotionally ' superbly narrated! Loved it the most!

Obviously like any fan, I would love to meet the Behnas someday and also give a personalize our online/phone interaction by meeting you but I would say that this OS has fulfilled that wish to an extent that I have carved this scenario in my memory as if it has really happened! Lets just It is more beautiful than the reality and for me this IS the reality- I guess this is biggest form of compliment that I can think of to equate your work and love behind it!! So, thank you for making my dream come true; both for meeting the Behnas and your lovely self! My comment might not be so extensive as usual because A) words cannot express it all and B) It has left me speechless!!!

Once again, a huge THANK YOU and a big virtual hug from Pluto resident- your Duchman!!! ❤️

PS: & We just talked - how AWESHOME is that 😊

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shine123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

My comment... and i finally thought to comment on it today asi wanted to comment before Amii di... but then m late again...lol
and as i said i m a big late lateef .. i comment really really late so sry bout tht...

Jeeman celebrating a jeeman fan's bday wid another big jeeman fan...never thot tht i would read a story like tht but then thts u when it comes to them and writing stories!!!- hats off for tht story and idea...

Typical mannu and di ...<3
haha the way u wrote "the girl gave them THE LOOK once and settled keeping her jacket over her iphone this time in case they again spill something on her iphone..." lol...😆

Bumping game...😎
"Kisko..? ohh.. sorry bhi bolte hain kya..?" Manvi giggled
exact mannu...lol
Awww jeevika's convo wid amii di ...

Keeping a straight face, Manvi spoke- "Di bday hai uska, MUJHE SHARAFAT AUR SWEETNESS SE BDAY WISH KARNI NAI AATI.." While Neha and Ami laughed at her Jeevika shouted back at Mannu.. "Chuppp karr.." turning to Ami and Neha, "Ignore her..werna khud toh pagal hai hi...aap ko bhi kar degi."

Ami smiled, thinking in her heart "Pata nai aaj iss boat mein iss anjaan shehar mein akele hoke bhi akela feel nahin ho raha... yeh ajnabi mere saath baithe kisi ke bday ki baatein kar rahe hain aur khushi mujhe ho rahi hai bohat apnepan wali...''

AT ka rishta!!⭐️

lol...and Jeevika hid her face in her palms muttering- She is not with me..

hahaha 😆
IF ka khulasa ...😎 dost mile paris main...⭐️ <3

the bday wishing ...awww ⭐️

chocolate plus kurkure...👍🏼

Superb story and idea...and the way u write is just awesome... you are an amazing writer..!!❤️

@amii di: wishing u again belated Happy birthday!!... and Welcome back to pluto .!!

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Amii

@Amii90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Read everyone's comments and birthday wishes :) A heartfelt thank you to all of you for making the day even more special!!! Sorry for late replies!

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Amii

@Amii90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: -Pj-

Happy birthday AMI- 9th June, I remember my depressing notes. :D
Have a fantastic day dude and enjoy it all. Hope all your dreams and wishes come true not only for this year but for the many ahead of you.

Thankkk You soo much , Teacher Ji 😊 I think we did chat that day on my birthday but still need to reply here (already late enough lol) Thank you for such amazing wishes!!!

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Amii

@Amii90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: nobo

The concept is something only Bafee can think of ... SO TRUE!

Undoubtedly- absolute highlight!!!

& Everything was on one side & the JMians Fact was on one side in this Shot ...how we meet on an online forum, discuss our Fav ( & fictional ) characters & get along so nicely without even meeting personally that the bond is kinda unbelievable. I don't think any of us ever thought that we'd have such friends in virtual world who'd mean so much.
How we come from such different backgrounds , with even different tastes , habits , cultures with Some bits in common ...the biggest of them being JeeMaan & then chatting away like with known of years...is beyond me ...

In short 😆I loveddd itt, every bit of it as it had somewhere the glint of relations we have made through IF

Wonderful work bafee...& Happy birthday Amii ( go unres your comment lol )

^^ You said it all, Priya!!! and this OS is a perfect example of it!!! And Thank You for all the wishes mate :)

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Amii

@Amii90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: *Eva*
Amii, a very very very happy belated birthday!!! 🤗 ❤️ 🥳 Hope you had a blast!!! God bless you...keep partying hard, eat loads and loads of cake (see, that's why I got you a 25K pound cake) and keep smiling your beautiful smile!!! 😃 As soon as you come back, we have to resume our never-ending chats 😛 Very sorry that I'm late ji 😔 I have to make up for this...any ideas? 🤣

Why, THANK YOU, Eva - my fellow Pluto resident 😊 No worries about being late- I still beat your record lol! I think there was more cake on my face than on my plate lol but yes it was a good day indeed!!! Thank you once again for such sweet wishes and yes we need to make up for this but I will leave all that to you!!!!

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Amii

@Amii90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: shine123

My comment... and i finally thought to comment on it today asi wanted to comment before Amii di... but then m late again...lol and as i said i m a big late lateef .. i comment really really late so sry bout tht...

Okayy atleast I did beat one person lol- just kidding- no worries!

Ami smiled, thinking in her heart "Pata nai aaj iss boat mein iss anjaan shehar mein akele hoke bhi akela feel nahin ho raha... yeh ajnabi mere saath baithe kisi ke bday ki baatein kar rahe hain aur khushi mujhe ho rahi hai bohat apnepan wali...''
AT ka rishta!!⭐️

^^^ Mirrored my exact sentiments :)

@amii di: wishing u again belated Happy birthday!!... and Welcome back to pluto .!!

^^ Thankkk Youuu so much, Shaina 😊 and yes back to Pluto it is!!!

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