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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

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firstly let me get over with the update it was just awesome fab amazing and everything really its like jigsaw puzzle at the end all the pieces in its place the mystery solved and everything sooo clear you have just written it sooo beautifully and perfectly just like a professional you are just perfect anu 👏

the action packed scene perfectly written how virat managed the whole thing gosh it exactly felt like am watching an action movie 👏👏 and manvi's emotions and thoughts for her family her kids her hubby concern for all the very well expressed you are the master in it ...👍🏼

next virat consoling the kids how easily he distracted them and said it as a videogame the perfect daddy ria in deep shock and the way she screamed " i hate video games'" looking at nikki i dunno why i cuddnt stop laughing that funny 😆😆

then the happy ending part where shwetha and virat the most important people in manvi's life are finally frends that will be such a relief for manvi then the most awesome news for virat he is gonna be a dad again and the way manvi broke the news looking soo beautiful and virat's reaction to it everything soo beautiful happy that he can live all those moments which he missed from ria's and nikki's life ...soo finally its the perfect hum paanch family 😃😃

anu just cant believe that this awesome journey of addicted is gonna end no more of the soo loving overprotective having soo many shades of characters the best love best hubby best dad virat no sweet confused loving and caring the best love the best wife best mom manvi and their most adorable cutie pies the two angels of virman nikki and ria will miss their nautankis dramas fights cute dialogues the family moments all this is gonna end you wont believe am really getting over emotional now dont wanna cry ...i am really over addicted to the addicted of yours and gonna be real hard for me to get over this addiction 😃😃

manvi my all time favourite character but all than to your addicted i equally adored virat the way he could do anything to keep his love and family protected and my most favourite even more than manvi is ria she is just sooo adorable she is mini manvi the dramas the cuteness the overacting the understanding i love everything about her 🤗❤️

addicted is really special to me even though i have not spammed for updates or kept bugging you for updates still i alwayz kept waiting for updates and can just leave anything for reading your updates its that special and also giving comments on each an every update 😃😃

anu i am seriously saying this you should surely publish books start with addicted am sure it will be the best selling books and you the best writer am so damn sure about it am seriously saying this ...

plz plz plz i dnt wanna bug you for season 2 even though i want it soo badly coz i understand you wanna continue rest of your stories tooo but plzz atleast an epilogue plz plz plz 😃

i love addicted i love virman i love ria and nikki and anu you are my fav writer 😃❤️❤️

i dnt wanna stop this comment but i have tooo coz its getting way long dnt wanna bore you with my emotional stuff...

expecting an epilogue atleast,,,😃

bye ..take care 😃

Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago

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_Shru_

@_Shru_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

anu!!! i dnt knw wat 2 say abt u...

dis is one story which i cn read even if smeone wakes me up in da middle of da n8 2 read...

nd i wanna tll u dat "U R AMAZING!!!!!!!"

i still remember wen u posted da first chapter of dis os... i was so mesmerised by it...

i read it almost 10 tyms till u updated again...

i hated manvi dat she left virat nd went...

bt as da story proceeded u brought in 2 sweet lil munchkins...

i fell in luv wid dem instantly...

especially ria... she is such a sweetheart...

da story was so beautiful...

no one wud hav ever thought abt a story lyk dis...

it had romance, mystery, comedy, sweetness everythng...

i became sooo addicted 2 dis story dat i used 2 thnk abt dis all da tym...

in skul, at home everywhr... i used 2 bug ma frnds nd tll dem u updated... i used 2 read ur updates chupkese in skul...

all dat was fr gud... i wanted 2 do smethng rf u also...

so i thought of spamming da last few pages... which was a very small thng...

da second thread brought many interesting twists...

frm virat's accident 2 ria's 'please'... (everyone on ff became mad after dat update.. )

nd till da last update...

wow wat do i say... da mystery behind everythng...

peter's evil plan.. nd he including tanya nd karan...

superbly written... i am short of words r8 nw 2 describe hw im feeling...

nw i feel lyk spamming ur inbox nd everwhr possible 2 ask fr another season or atleast epilogue...

plzz do smethng... im craving fr another update...

anu u r one of da bestest writers i hav ever read...

da bestest virman story ever... "ADDICTED"...

plzz do consider writing as a profession.. im sure u'll excel...

i luv u anu.. fr such a wonderful story... will really miss it...

nd thnx fr da final pm fr addicted...

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Maria

@neha fan1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Omg 😭 so we have reached the end! What a beautiful journey it has been. This update was perfect. Everything from the first word to the last one... Even I'm so emotional. It has been a pleasure to read ur work this ff will remain my favourite for eternity. The amount of tym that I will keep reading is beyond counting lol! All da very best for the future cnt wait to read ur future work I know u r going to be outstanding!!

Edited by neha fan1 - 12 years ago

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Sumana123

@Sumana123

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

I seriously don't know how to make a final speech ...It's one of the most thrilling stories ...its started with such a bang on track ...I really used to feel for Maanvi and her past the pain she had to go through while bringing up her child ...Quietly It Transformed into a passionate Love Story and but it caught my attention from the point you started revealing the thick plot behind everything and I got to know why this story is called "Addicted" ...Last 3 -4 edits was like watching Mission Impossible Series for me ...really I felt Tom Cruise doing all those actions in front of my eyes ...and Maanvi was Cameron Diaz 😉😉 ...Well Your story surely has something too hidden that its one of the most loved FF in this forum...and the Something is RIA AND NIKKI...without mentioning them ...No one qualify to be called an Addicted Reader...😆😆😆 ... I Stand by my wish to keep Ria and Nikki with me always ..they were the sweetest thing in this story. Another man I loved in this story has to be Blanco ...man of few words and great character...You know this story just gave us everything and fulfilled everything a reader wants ..and that is the reason ...even if it ended today ..though I m sad about it ..still I feel this is a story which came to its end smoothly and aptly ...Truly a brave and heart capturing work ...

Round of Applause and My Words won't do much justice to the amazingTalent u have I know ...But still Anu u are great ...<3

Love

Sumana

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virumanu

@virumanu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#525

hey plzzz dnt end dear...i love this story a lot...plzzz

plzzz ...i would always like to read this story...

i just love it...

ur stories are very close to ma heart...

plzszzz dnt end...

i loved this update...

plzzz continue soonnn plzzz

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Niaksharma

@Niaksharma

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Superb...
Awesome...
Bt in in rush...
Loved it..
Fab one...
I wann read more...
Fab story all time...

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fanfare.1

@fanfare.1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

Actually, I was a silent reader. Created an account just to give a word of appreciation to ur work. First of all I'm sorry that I was not able to comment on each of ur updates. I'm extremely busy for sometime now. Do forgive. I used to read all ur stories whenever I get some freetime and I must admit that you are an amazing writer. A writer par excellence. Keep up the good work and do write more. You really do have a future in writing... All the best...😊

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Anaida

@iamanaida

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#528

Wow, beautiful, amazing, awesome, mindblowing, uncomparable...falling short of words for today's update. Loved everything about the update. Wow one more addition to the family. Glad that Virat will be present during Maanvi's pregnancy which he missed out on.

Well written. Im gonna miss everything about this FF. I have been hooked to it from day one. Hope you get a chance to come up with Season 2. Really looking forward to it.

Anu you are an amazing writer and I am so glad to have come across your stories. They really make my day.

Muah to you babes. Stay happy and keep writing. Thanks for taking so much of effort to keep up to our unending demands.

Anu👏❤️

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ramanirani

@ramanirani

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#529

hey anu its really amazing...
the way you carried out the whole story was awesome ...suspense, love ,emotions ...
i really liked your all storys...
i am going to miss this ff like hell...
thanks for this amazing story...