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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome yaar...
Loved it...
Love the last part it was really good...

Its just sad that you ended...
But hope you will continue your others story soon...

And keep PM me by your storys alsoo...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg!! This was the last update!! I cant belive it!!
I am almost in tears!! I have been reading this ss from the beginning!!
Coming to the update!! Awesome as always but scary 2!!
Maanvi pregnant again!!Luved this ss!!
Thanks for the PM for this story!!
x Avika x

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMGGG...I SERIOUSLY CANT BELIEVE DAT IT WAS D LAST PART WEN I READ D HEADING WITH D TITLE DAT ITS LAST PART I DIDNT KNEW WHETHER I GOT D PM OR NOT I JUST OPENED IT QUICKLY TO SEE WHETHER ITS TRUE OR NOT I THOUGHT MAY BE IT WUD BE D LAST PART OF DIS THREAD BUT DEN I GOT D SHOCK!!! DAT IT WAS D END...NOOO I REALLY DONT WANT IT TO END...
U NO M ALSO AS EMOTIONAL AS U R ITS MY FAV STORY WENEVER I GOT FREE TYM I USE TO READ D PREVIOUS CHAPTERS AGAIN...REALLY IT WAS D BEST STORY EVER...
I HAD 3 BEST STORIES 1 IS DIS ND D OTHER IS OF SHILPA JAB WE MET ND LAST 1 IS PERFECT LYF BY NISHA...GOSH I REALLY DONT WANT U TO END IT..
Lyk Nisha after ending her story contnued with 2 more parts i really want dat u shud also do d same lolzzz nd really ur writing is just authentic... i truely loved each nd every part...dere seperation...love..fights...possessiveness...nd wild romance :p everything was out of d world m sooo gona miss it plzzz dont end it...i no u will not listen to me but atleast gv an epilogue coz i really wanted to see virat feeling his new born baby ..nd den dere happiness plzzz anu try an updatre atleast or epilogue...plzzz do it fast i cant wait plzzz.z.z.z...

this was my biggest comment on IF i think lolzzz coz u deserve it for d best story ever...plzzz anu do try to think over an update or epilogue...thnxx for d lovely story luv u<3<3<3 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

no words to say .jst tht -I LUV IT...

i'm addictd to ur story tht i'm really sad u r stopping it...
u r truely a fab writer anu
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is a one in a million ending. But m really getting too emotional to think that no more waiting for addicted update *wipes tears*
i had been following this from day one and now with a heavy heart will bid a goodbye. Will miss ria and nikki like hell dey ruled the story. So on an ending note it was a BOLTISH Update. Will wait for a sequel or 2nd season of it only if u think of it for a addictd soul like me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
For the first time I have nothing to say...I'm speechless.. Eyes r kinda teary..it's been a splendid journey Anu.. I had an awesome time reading addicted..first thing that hooked me into ur story was ur title "ADDICTEd" since I loveee Enrique n this song in particular, I had to read that no?
Hell ya I was so right... U showed us every damn line of addicted.. No one noticed but I did :).. I can write a whole summary for it..

Oh Anu u have no clue how awesome writer u are... Ch 1 - last chapter there wasn't a single portion of ur story where I felt it was lame or eeh can skip it... He'll no... each n everything was perfect, bang on, marvelous beyond exceptional... In this little period of time, u took us to new world of love, pain, hatred, betrayal, torture n more...
Each n every event Of ur story was special n I visioned every single line.. Believe it or not I did.. U see when we have a brilliant writer like Anu I have to go inside the story n feel the emotion.. Get connected...
In the beginning of ur my central attraction was the bad boy virat.. As u Know how I love my bad boy <3
I loved how u started the story.. It was different.. U started with pain n ended up being happy... That's how life is.. U don't get happiness unless u have been through pain n suffered enough to rejoice ur life...Hardships, consequences, struggle, waiting, craving n broken heart...all the shades of life was described beautifully... Oh god I am recalling all the parts now... How virat was drunk n was destroying his life, then a hope of new life showed up he went back to India to find his lost love... And when he found it there was no way he was going back or leaving manvi alone... From there till the end ur writing took my breath away.. I alwys smiled after finishing each chapter.. I never wasted my time reading ur story... N I won't mind reading untill I'm tired of reading... U Know u guys r changing my hate towards reading >_< screw u... Will thanks Pari for introducing this story to me... N I love it from whole heart...

Gosh the kids... I wanna adopt them... Riaaa n nikkiii!
Addicted's lime light was the kids for me.. They were the sign of happiness n everlasting love... gosh I remember their dialogs, tantrum, their innocence, sweet adorable talks n mood swings.. Aaah god so gonna cry now... Give me season 2 plzzz
Each n every character was awesome! U did justice to all of them.. From driver to security to villains to the main leads each of them had a special characteristics n loved that about addicted!
Honestly speaking, whenever I read a story I don't pay attention to manvi lol call it biase or watevaaa but I love my boy way to much to pay attention to other characters... But no this time I was paying attention to manvi heheh.. This manvi I adore n I love the fact that she was beside him throughout the journey...after fake fianc virat, addicted Virat will be my second dream boy <3 he have all the shades of a perfect partner... Lovable, naughty, passionate, encouraging, straightforward, harsh, cold, n a bit of Bad boy... U name the human traits I have it in him.. So I can't thank u enough for giving him all the characteristics ..it's just makes ur story special n makes me go gaga for him more n more...

Coming to the critic.. All the technical stuff u did throughout the story was good.. Brief n with perfection.. Sometimes I wondered if u joined FBI or Wat... Like for real all the mystery behind burns n his will stuff god ... Hey it wasn't lame at all in fact I loved it alot.. Like the inside story.. It was like story inside a story n all
Mystery bubble ;)
Somewhere I wanted sweta to be a culprit one too lol as u know how evil I'm :) but no u kept her clean, avoide ur story to look cheesy n normal ;p

Last part was dhasu.. I loveeed how virat saved his kids without thinking twice for his life or Wat will happen if he can't save them? He was determined n full of confidence n makes me adore him more n more... Gentleman should be like this no? Hai...
Even manvi was good tooo.. She was struggling between a mom n a wife lol listening to his instructions n going Wat he said.. Good!

Awww my kids they were shock n all but haha when virat is here y u fear?
One confusion was how did virat figure out the game plan by the cookie ... Well in lat chapter I kinda guessed how he figured out with that he found the game plan with the cookie but can't come up with te solution yet so u gotta clear the confusion!!!!!

Oh now my complain comes .. Ahem.. U have always given me all the scenes I craved for or wanted to read EXCEPT! Kaminiii aurattt GO DIE >_<

U didn't make the kids say I love papa moreee >_< kill u right now!!!

Coming to love making scenes.. Ahem *faria controls* it was sexyyy, saucy n sizziling <3 how many we got unmm don't remember but was enough for us to go oolaaa laaa n batamiz dil mane na mane naaa <3

Now new twist new babyyy finallyyy wohooo my boy will relieve the precious moments that he have missed due to sum cranky people ;)
Which leads me to end my back back that IT DOESN'T MATTER HOW U DO! I WANT season 2 next week!
Character sketch, prologue or even a theme will work just give it a shot baby..cuz u can't escape from addicted... Idk abt others but I won't read any of ur story untill I hear the confirmation that u r making season 2! With ria n Nikki in it <3 or new story new twist.. :)

Oh man emotional now... Was listening to addicted n it's making me more emotional .. Hate endings so pretty plzzz make season 2!!!
Asking u politely .. Lol screw polite in Nikki style.. If u want to stay Alive thn make one cuz u got no options baby... With that just wanna say

If I close my eyes for evaaa.. Wud it ease the pain of losing u??? Baby in addicted to ur addicted n all I really know u r giving me season two soon n I'm gonna enjoy all the demand, complain n waiting moment soon... N Incase u don't then ummm good byeee forevaaa <3 love u girl stay blessed.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I wont say anythng n update coz we awl knw the depth of ur writing i just wana say smethng n ur note at the end, bluebolt believe it or nt bt i am cryng aftr readng ur note, 1 coz i will miss addictd a lot and 2ndly coz
Of ur passion of writng, u mentiond tht u have gven ur best 4 ths story and let me tel u swetheart cnt say abt othrz bt i am ADDICTED of ur writng nw God bless u with the best and MAY U GET MORE N MORE SUCCES IN UR LIFE AMEEN
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am speechless Anu, but I will try my best to give you a long deserved comment for this story. The only word that describes it is perfection. It had suspense, romance, jealousy, the cuteness of little kids, and most important of all it mera Virman 😆. It was an outstanding end. I am so happy for Virat that he gets to be with Manvi through her pregnancy this time around. I can't imagine how scary their lives must have been with all those people after them. It was the perfect ending, it gave Virman back their happiness, they were safe and ready to start a new life, a life with their new baby. I know you are extremely busy and wanted to end this, but if at all possible, you should definitely write an epilogue to this story, I would love to see Virat handling Manvi's pregnancy and his love and care for his new baby. I really loved this story. I am really sorry I was a silent of it for so long, but like I promised in the PM i sent you, I tried to comment on most your updates after I got an account. I am sad that this story had to end, but the ending you gave was really mind blowing. I can't wait for the updates to umbrella, two left feet, and but I love you. Please continue to PM me updates to your stories. 😊
A WELL DESERVED THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS STORY ❤️
You are really an excellent writer, please continue writing more. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVE UR WRITING TO THE CORE... UR REALLY AMAZING WRITER...SERIOUSLY ADDICTED WAS A AWESOME FF WILL MISS IT TO THE CORE...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Anu...
This is it... Today is the last update of ur one of the beautiful ff ADDICTED... This ff has made me get addicted to the word ADDICTED...!!! Bow down to u for giving virman a new meaning...ur ff had everything from love to hate to understanding to jealousy to friendship... EVERYTHING... All mixture... I never read a story like ur story... No other story has interests me to this addiction... U made virman a couple that i could never imagine of... And thr little munchkins RIA & NIKKI... Ohhh my my... the highlight of the ff... I got an attachment with these kids... Two little treasures of virman !!!!
U hav done it all... Ur writing skills is just like a perfect author... Ur narration makes us feel like watching an imaginative movie... All what u hav added is beyond Amazing... Truly one Perfect writer u r..
Hats off to u girl... Today i feel like my fav show is ending..
But as we believe "every gud thing cums to an End" but i would like to add plzzz if possible start season 2 we all will be really happy...
And thank youuu so muchhh for giving us this story... Really thank you...
👏
Love u girl...
Take care..
And Yes..i m waiting for ur other story updates.. 😊
Do update soon...

Thank you again...

Love,
Sarah.
Edited by princess_sara - 12 years ago

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