For the first time I have nothing to say...I'm speechless.. Eyes r kinda teary..it's been a splendid journey Anu.. I had an awesome time reading addicted..first thing that hooked me into ur story was ur title "ADDICTEd" since I loveee Enrique n this song in particular, I had to read that no?
Hell ya I was so right... U showed us every damn line of addicted.. No one noticed but I did :).. I can write a whole summary for it..
Oh Anu u have no clue how awesome writer u are... Ch 1 - last chapter there wasn't a single portion of ur story where I felt it was lame or eeh can skip it... He'll no... each n everything was perfect, bang on, marvelous beyond exceptional... In this little period of time, u took us to new world of love, pain, hatred, betrayal, torture n more...
Each n every event Of ur story was special n I visioned every single line.. Believe it or not I did.. U see when we have a brilliant writer like Anu I have to go inside the story n feel the emotion.. Get connected...
In the beginning of ur my central attraction was the bad boy virat.. As u Know how I love my bad boy <3
I loved how u started the story.. It was different.. U started with pain n ended up being happy... That's how life is.. U don't get happiness unless u have been through pain n suffered enough to rejoice ur life...Hardships, consequences, struggle, waiting, craving n broken heart...all the shades of life was described beautifully... Oh god I am recalling all the parts now... How virat was drunk n was destroying his life, then a hope of new life showed up he went back to India to find his lost love... And when he found it there was no way he was going back or leaving manvi alone... From there till the end ur writing took my breath away.. I alwys smiled after finishing each chapter.. I never wasted my time reading ur story... N I won't mind reading untill I'm tired of reading... U Know u guys r changing my hate towards reading >_< screw u... Will thanks Pari for introducing this story to me... N I love it from whole heart...
Gosh the kids... I wanna adopt them... Riaaa n nikkiii!
Addicted's lime light was the kids for me.. They were the sign of happiness n everlasting love... gosh I remember their dialogs, tantrum, their innocence, sweet adorable talks n mood swings.. Aaah god so gonna cry now... Give me season 2 plzzz
Each n every character was awesome! U did justice to all of them.. From driver to security to villains to the main leads each of them had a special characteristics n loved that about addicted!
Honestly speaking, whenever I read a story I don't pay attention to manvi lol call it biase or watevaaa but I love my boy way to much to pay attention to other characters... But no this time I was paying attention to manvi heheh.. This manvi I adore n I love the fact that she was beside him throughout the journey...after fake fianc virat, addicted Virat will be my second dream boy <3 he have all the shades of a perfect partner... Lovable, naughty, passionate, encouraging, straightforward, harsh, cold, n a bit of Bad boy... U name the human traits I have it in him.. So I can't thank u enough for giving him all the characteristics ..it's just makes ur story special n makes me go gaga for him more n more...
Coming to the critic.. All the technical stuff u did throughout the story was good.. Brief n with perfection.. Sometimes I wondered if u joined FBI or Wat... Like for real all the mystery behind burns n his will stuff god ... Hey it wasn't lame at all in fact I loved it alot.. Like the inside story.. It was like story inside a story n all
Mystery bubble ;)
Somewhere I wanted sweta to be a culprit one too lol as u know how evil I'm :) but no u kept her clean, avoide ur story to look cheesy n normal ;p
Last part was dhasu.. I loveeed how virat saved his kids without thinking twice for his life or Wat will happen if he can't save them? He was determined n full of confidence n makes me adore him more n more... Gentleman should be like this no? Hai...
Even manvi was good tooo.. She was struggling between a mom n a wife lol listening to his instructions n going Wat he said.. Good!
Awww my kids they were shock n all but haha when virat is here y u fear?
One confusion was how did virat figure out the game plan by the cookie ... Well in lat chapter I kinda guessed how he figured out with that he found the game plan with the cookie but can't come up with te solution yet so u gotta clear the confusion!!!!!
Oh now my complain comes .. Ahem.. U have always given me all the scenes I craved for or wanted to read EXCEPT! Kaminiii aurattt GO DIE >_<
U didn't make the kids say I love papa moreee >_< kill u right now!!!
Coming to love making scenes.. Ahem *faria controls* it was sexyyy, saucy n sizziling <3 how many we got unmm don't remember but was enough for us to go oolaaa laaa n batamiz dil mane na mane naaa <3
Now new twist new babyyy finallyyy wohooo my boy will relieve the precious moments that he have missed due to sum cranky people ;)
Which leads me to end my back back that IT DOESN'T MATTER HOW U DO! I WANT season 2 next week!
Character sketch, prologue or even a theme will work just give it a shot baby..cuz u can't escape from addicted... Idk abt others but I won't read any of ur story untill I hear the confirmation that u r making season 2! With ria n Nikki in it <3 or new story new twist.. :)
Oh man emotional now... Was listening to addicted n it's making me more emotional .. Hate endings so pretty plzzz make season 2!!!
Asking u politely .. Lol screw polite in Nikki style.. If u want to stay Alive thn make one cuz u got no options baby... With that just wanna say
If I close my eyes for evaaa.. Wud it ease the pain of losing u??? Baby in addicted to ur addicted n all I really know u r giving me season two soon n I'm gonna enjoy all the demand, complain n waiting moment soon... N Incase u don't then ummm good byeee forevaaa <3 love u girl stay blessed.