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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update...ria and nikki were really cute...loved the way u write the story its really wonderful...everytime u write the scenes which includes cuteness,happiness,fun,mistery...etc...so different...ur amazing...continue soon...take care😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update, the kids teasing and fun... Vanishika mom confiscated Virat toys... lol

I really like how Virat teased Maanvi about nursing him and then took her mangalsutr just to give it back for a kiss


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
virat is njyng family tym...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved it..!!! Niki n Ria is so damn adorable..Virat doesn't realize he is as well is Moma's boy...But superb update..smiling while reading...damn sweet n both played well in terms of ruining their moment but Maanvi for good reasons...Waiting fr next n Thanks for the PM Anu..!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Love Virat and the kids part..
Virat and his mom are alsoo veryy funny...
Thanks for the PM..
Pleaseee update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update
ria n nikki r so cute..like typical pissing bro sis
vira back in cherry mode...manvi as usual cool...
waiting for more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a complete package??? dere was a great family time,, sweet romance & delivery of the mystery..

something dat i always adore in addicted is manvi's pov.. her thoughts are heavenly & different.. she studies a person through her eyes, tells us watever she feels thru her thoughts & explains us her moves & their motive.. i adore dat alot..
dis lovable thought of her towards virat :-
His voice suddenly becomes all mellow and butteryVirat was unusually quiet thinking about something
I don't know whats up with my husband, he has been joking and smiling and laughing non-stop since the time he came back home''
Virat is shaking his head, without taking his eyes off his laptop
Virat raises his eye-brow and looks at her curiously
he is trying hard to stop grinning looking at my pissed off face
I know he is thinking about all kinds of tactics in his head.
manvi & the way she sees virat is awesome!! like a perfect wife, she keenly notices him & every move of his face muscles,, its so adorable to read dem.. she knows his smile, the length of his smile, she knows his silence, she knows every movement of his & judges him in an adorable manner
all these prove dat she's so into him & she is very wel aware of his moves & motive.. such a wife..

then vt her kids :-
with all her focus, she was drawing something on the cast on his hand with sketch pens.
Ria's face immediately lights up
Nikki comes running in and hugs my legs
Ria walks in slowly and gracefully
This was completely opposite to her normal demeanor everyday,
Nikki sulks, saying the word polite like it was a bad thing.
I know she wants to sit with her papa.
She is just adorable... I decide to pull her leg a little.
like a perfect mom, she judges her kid's move correctly.. she adores every action of them
wat i love is dat,, manvi silently observes things.. its clear it is to enlighten the readers,, but particular words u use, the way u describe deir exact behaviour, dey are the ones dats driving me mad towards addicted

my di seems into a romantic mood these days.. the moments virat & manvi shared are heavenly.. the way she blushes can be seen by us,, its so sweet wen she is being teased by virat.. the tears dat flew allway without her knowledge wen seeing her husband's wound was so emotionally overwhelming,, they prove dat she's in pain wn he feels d pain & she is somewhere worried dat she is the reason for all these, after all she looked similar to Mr.Burns' daughter,, but is it her fault? never.. this is reality,, u deal alot vt it & i love it

Ria's polite avatar presented us a comedy show.. really i was laughing like hell at all her antics.. she like a perfect cute kid is behaving 'over politely & over smartly' dats wat kids do ryt,, wen dey are taught something & are complemented for it,, den they'll dwell in it until the one who taught it thinks 'y did i teach her dis?' dats wat is happening here,, this cute little muchkin is showing her politeness everywhere, its adorable, cute & at the same time hilarious.. Nikki on the other hand, exactly like a boy never bothers about politeness, more over pissed off at Ria's antics.. & like a boy shows his possessiveness & overpowering towards his sissy too... the reason why all of us love Ria & Nikki is dat dey are perfectly kids,, i mean, deir antics are not mature, dey do wat dey think, dey speak watever they feel like, as u write from deir perfect point of view, addicted rises to its peak..
"Why this kolaveri, kolaveri kolaveri di…..." Nikki sings
"It's a song about girls, eyes and cows." Ria enlightens us
really??? dis song is about cows & eyes??? see u got down to a kido's point of view,, i love u for dis fact diii... & yeah never make a child to enlighten u about a song,, fact learnt from Ria..

anddd thanks for saving Meredith's son.. dat vl enlighten things hopefully in upcoming chaps.. though most of the things were cleared,, to here it composed from virat satisfied me & enlightened me... the only thing dat awaits is 'WHY shud tanya & karan support pete & plot against virat?' is money the only reason?? waiting for the answer..

u are so gifted with the art of writing dii.. the perfection of this update is just mindblowing!!!! always wat i think is, can Ria get any cuter? can Nikki get any smart? can virat & manvi be any more perfect dan dis??? but u used to show me, 'u judged me wrong' and make dem more & more & more perfect the next time.. dey maintainig deir own character, rocking more again each time is something very beautiful,, u are magical in doing so..
do bring in swetha next time, u know why? i always see her with a suspectful eye & never got a chance to adore her,, so give it a try pls..

and dats it... so as usual, get my hugsss, kissesss & love & love only
hatsoff for the person u are my SS!!! ❤️

PS now i can say dat virat is back to old virat, all thanks to manvi,, he's not stiff anymore ryt??
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Posted: 12 years ago
I usually dont know what to say after your long sweet reviews. I just become overcome in bliss 's and I get a writer's glow, I believe. They are awesome and like I keep saying u never forget anything. I actually forgot Swetha today. Stupid me, I was in a hurry, when I posted in the morning and u noticed and the whole purpose of this update is to show Virat is back! with a bang! the old naughty Virat!! and I always wonder if that gets conveyed to the readers. Your comment just answered that!!! luvyaaa too SS!!


Originally posted by: virmanhus

what a complete package??? dere was a great family time,, sweet romance & delivery of the mystery..

something dat i always adore in addicted is manvi's pov.. her thoughts are heavenly & different.. she studies a person through her eyes, tells us watever she feels thru her thoughts & explains us her moves & their motive.. i adore dat alot..
dis lovable thought of her towards virat :-
His voice suddenly becomes all mellow and butteryVirat was unusually quiet thinking about something
I don't know whats up with my husband, he has been joking and smiling and laughing non-stop since the time he came back home''
Virat is shaking his head, without taking his eyes off his laptop
Virat raises his eye-brow and looks at her curiously
he is trying hard to stop grinning looking at my pissed off face
I know he is thinking about all kinds of tactics in his head.
manvi & the way she sees virat is awesome!! like a perfect wife, she keenly notices him & every move of his face muscles,, its so adorable to read dem.. she knows his smile, the length of his smile, she knows his silence, she knows every movement of his & judges him in an adorable manner
all these prove dat she's so into him & she is very wel aware of his moves & motive.. such a wife..

then vt her kids :-
with all her focus, she was drawing something on the cast on his hand with sketch pens.
Ria's face immediately lights up
Nikki comes running in and hugs my legs
Ria walks in slowly and gracefully
This was completely opposite to her normal demeanor everyday,
Nikki sulks, saying the word polite like it was a bad thing.
I know she wants to sit with her papa.
She is just adorable... I decide to pull her leg a little.
like a perfect mom, she judges her kid's move correctly.. she adores every action of them
wat i love is dat,, manvi silently observes things.. its clear it is to enlighten the readers,, but particular words u use, the way u describe deir exact behaviour, dey are the ones dats driving me mad towards addicted

my di seems into a romantic mood these days.. the moments virat & manvi shared are heavenly.. the way she blushes can be seen by us,, its so sweet wen she is being teased by virat.. the tears dat flew allway without her knowledge wen seeing her husband's wound was so emotionally overwhelming,, they prove dat she's in pain wn he feels d pain & she is somewhere worried dat she is the reason for all these, after all she looked similar to Mr.Burns' daughter,, but is it her fault? never.. this is reality,, u deal alot vt it & i love it

Ria's polite avatar presented us a comedy show.. really i was laughing like hell at all her antics.. she like a perfect cute kid is behaving 'over politely & over smartly' dats wat kids do ryt,, wen dey are taught something & are complemented for it,, den they'll dwell in it until the one who taught it thinks 'y did i teach her dis?' dats wat is happening here,, this cute little muchkin is showing her politeness everywhere, its adorable, cute & at the same time hilarious.. Nikki on the other hand, exactly like a boy never bothers about politeness, more over pissed off at Ria's antics.. & like a boy shows his possessiveness & overpowering towards his sissy too... the reason why all of us love Ria & Nikki is dat dey are perfectly kids,, i mean, deir antics are not mature, dey do wat dey think, dey speak watever they feel like, as u write from deir perfect point of view, addicted rises to its peak..
"Why this kolaveri, kolaveri kolaveri di'..." Nikki sings
"It's a song about girls, eyes and cows." Ria enlightens us
really??? dis song is about cows & eyes??? see u got down to a kido's point of view,, i love u for dis fact diii... & yeah never make a child to enlighten u about a song,, fact learnt from Ria..

anddd thanks for saving Meredith's son.. dat vl enlighten things hopefully in upcoming chaps.. though most of the things were cleared,, to here it composed from virat satisfied me & enlightened me... the only thing dat awaits is 'WHY shud tanya & karan support pete & plot against virat?' is money the only reason?? waiting for the answer..

u are so gifted with the art of writing dii.. the perfection of this update is just mindblowing!!!! always wat i think is, can Ria get any cuter? can Nikki get any smart? can virat & manvi be any more perfect dan dis??? but u used to show me, 'u judged me wrong' and make dem more & more & more perfect the next time.. dey maintainig deir own character, rocking more again each time is something very beautiful,, u are magical in doing so..
do bring in swetha next time, u know why? i always see her with a suspectful eye & never got a chance to adore her,, so give it a try pls..

and dats it... so as usual, get my hugsss, kissesss & love & love only
hatsoff for the person u are my SS!!! ❤️

PS now i can say dat virat is back to old virat, all thanks to manvi,, he's not stiff anymore ryt??

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Originally posted by: bluebolt

I usually dont know what to say after your long sweet reviews. I just become overcome in bliss 's and I get a writer's glow, I believe. They are awesome and like I keep saying u never forget anything. I actually forgot Swetha today. Stupid me, I was in a hurry, when I posted in the morning and u noticed and the whole purpose of this update is to show Virat is back! with a bang! the old naughty Virat!! and I always wonder if that gets conveyed to the readers. Your comment just answered that!!! luvyaaa too SS!!



u delivered ur motive perfectly.. love is the one thing dat we are never enough of ryt?? love me like this forever,, dats enuf.. love u!!

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