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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

superb part dear
Emotional part and u written so well
Thanx 4 the pm dear
Waiting 4 ur next part

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sha19

@sha19

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Wow awesome and beautifully written 😊
Feeling sad about Maanvi n kids
So excited about next update
Plz continue soon

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kateyes

@kateyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Sorry 4 late comment (net prblm😡) ok leave it starts my comments n congo 4 d 2nd thread🥳
Part 20(i) : dat was a lovely update 👍🏼 👍🏼 kids were very adorable specially ria she wants a magic wand n want 2 turn rob into spider so cute 😊😊 she is very much like her mom n nikki like his father 2 much protective , virman convo was really nice in car n auction thing was really interesting
Part 20 (ii) : brilliant update👏👏👏 i luved auction part very much how virat secretly told waiter 2 told manager about his wife was lovely he made her comfortable by describing her qualities 2 every1 n his jealousy 2wrds chris poor maanvi both boyz r behaving like she ia s trophy who dey want , dance moment was really nice😊 n last part i got confused when meredith wants 2 kill maanvi den y virat don't say anything 2 her dere was concern n calmness 4 her even after seeing him meredith drop her gun insist of shooting him 😕
Part 21 : mindblowing update 👏👏👏👏 meredith confusion is solve after knowing d truth she was trapped by dose people just 2 save her son may b now virat can find sumthing with her help , u portrayed maanvi's emotions very well her concern , fear , pain , insecurities , anger restlessness 2wards him she luvs him like hell , swetha is back again but in bad condition poor grl maanvi console her like she had done when maanvi was going through dis situation n virman moments were really nice n romantic😳 he assure her dat he will cum back but i hav a doubt 😉
Part 22 : hatoff 2 u grl 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏d way u written d emotions was very beautiful it was really a emotional update maanvi n kids parts was heart touching dere fear , pain of losing virat again portrayed beautifully kids r so innocent but dey understands situations dey showed how much dey luv dere father n flashbacks part was superb n i hope virat is back its not maanvi illusion

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nida

@mystery75

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

oh god what a shocking hell shocking update😲😲

why did virat went to meet mr.burns in the first place

i was soo scared just like manvi in the whole update while reading

thank god in the last u decided to show some mercy on us by showing up viart atlast

love the kids insecurity of again loosing their father and their ways to contact their father👍🏼

the thoughts which manvi was having abt virat and his love and concerned towards manvi...which she was remembering was sooo emotional and was making me cry😭

u write flawless dear...while reading im always completely mesmerized by ur writing and...love ur way of describing even the little little things...just one word for u PERFECT😃

and thanx for the pm too🤗

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Tejeswy

@kushal90

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

This was sch a wonderful update..!!

Evrything is described extra-ordinarily fabulously fantastically nd amazingly 😊

The kids were jst tooo mch adorable... awww hw mch they missed their dad 😔

Manvi was going through sooo mch...

I hope seeing Virat at last was nt jst a illusion *fingerscrossed*

Update soon nd do pm me 😃

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@wanderlust09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

SHOCKING n emotional update...😭

Virat missing...his chopper crashed ...😲 😲Anuuu,... u almost ...no no no...u seriously gave me a heart-attack wid dis unexpected twist...

U hav beautifully portrayed Manvi's fear n pain of losing him again...n those flashbak words by Virat...😭

Hav always felt dat Nikki- Ria as mamma's babies...Bt nw seeings the kiddo's desperation to c their dad ...n even their fear of losing him ...hw well they hav bonded wid Virat in such a short span of time...

"Both of them were sitting inside Nikki's fort - hugging each other." "They had my phone with them and Ria was dialing Virat's number repeatedly." dese were truly heart-breaking scenes 😭 😭

Atleast Virika n Vanshika ma r there to support Manvi nw...

The ending wz clearly a cliffhanger...wot did they see abt Virat in news😕 😕

Well for sure...nothing cud hav happened to him rite ...he has to cum bak for his love n his munchkins😭

Anu plzz update sooon...plzzz...n thnx a loot for the pm!!!😊

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Rachel19

@Rachel19

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

hey awesome update

but i really missed virat in it

i was shocked to read that virat is missing😲

the kids missing their dad was so sad

i really felt bad for them all and manvi ohw my god

such a strong woman 👏

the end made me so curious is virat safe did he came home?

please continue soon and thank you so much for the pm😃🤗

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

kids are really missing there father and she thinking all the memory about her and him the way he trying show his love to her she is really missing him and last his mother take his name so he came or not update soon