i am struck where to begin.. such a deep update..
owkaii,, first thing dat grabbed my attention was the title 'a bad dream or a pleasant illusion' den i decided,, this is not a good sign!!
i'll get back to dis later
now now.. the beginning with kids was too good.. i always keep telling u dat u become a kid to write nikki's & ria's dialogues.. here again.. the one thing that worried dem early morning is deir dad's absence.. ria pouting in disappointment dat her dad's not going to take her to school, nikki & ria questioning about deir dad's sudden departure,, how close dey have become with deir dad.. everything's so original..
the perfect timing of virat's call is awesome!!
the kidos are too sweet "Aha! I woke up momma."
"Yeah, but when will you come baaack?"
heavenly!!!
it was manvi d one who called her kids vt different sweet names, & i remember virat mentioning it to his family on web cam few updates back as a matter of fact of teasing manvi.. now here he is 'muchkins' 'buddy' 'princess' 'big guy'.. he unknowingly got settled & got immersed in the same boat.. he adapted himself without his knowledge as the best dad.. its the reason y the kids once feared to get near him are now in a fear to get away from him.. he has poured so much love dat v along vt kids are awaiting his return.. he is so fatherly!!
now i'll ask u wat manvi asked virat "Mr.Burns??????" wat are u upto???? that name killed me!!! y is dat man hidden all of a sudden, reappearing out of no where??? his disappearance was fishy.. his reappearance is even more fishy.. virat leaving manvi at such an incident was bothering me to the core,, i had the feeling its something tooo important & something to think about, but i didnt have the slightest idea dat it has to deal vt him, Mr.Burns.. my brain tells me dat dis is a trap.. a trap to get virat..
''Will call you after I talk to him''
''He hadn't called back after talking to the kids after today's crazy morning''
judging by this, i wud say he was never in the chopper.. if he was heading back home, he wud have given a call to manvi.. she didnt recieve his calls & no reply for messages.. den his meeting vt burns wudnt have had an end vch is not possible, so clearly he's trapped.. & some other side of my brain says, its virat's plan.. a plan to make the world to believe he's no more... wat the crap??? my brain is stupid ryt??? well u are responsible!!!
now i CAN be judgemental for SURE.. so forget wat i said above if i am..
i wish to be this manvi.. how can she have so much of beautiful thoughts?? one thing i admired in her (ofcoz in u) is dat, she's original (i mean u )
wen u are troubled, dat too becoz of the fear of loosing ur loved one, u vl never find ease in another person's words dat try to console u.. u can never ever get assurance unless or otherwise u see the figure u crave to see by ur own eyes.. here, viren, swetha, everyone tried to console her.. but her thoughts were sooo buried in reality.. i was amazed & was admiring it at each & every place.. here's the proof:
''Her gentle squeeze does not offer me any support''
''I try to give them an assuring nod, but I couldn't''
her state was so beautifully described by u dii.. wen blanco approaches her, she shatters & thinks dat she's not ready to hear anything worse, she's unable to slide a glass door, she's too weak to nod or speak, she gains her lost strength to cheer up her kids, but fails dere, she was smart in answering the kids but eventually fails & yells,, so original,, so realistic,, so like happening in front of my eyes,, so wriiten out of experience...
the highlight of the update is ofcoz ''"Then how come he keeps going away?" he asks with tears''
I thought kids were too young to notice these things, but I couldn't have been more mistaken!! I did not even realize that they have such a huge fear in them - of their father disappearing, again.
dats indeed a shaking question!!!! very clever of u to put such a dialogue thru nikki.. it delivered how much the kids are effected by deir dad's disappearance.. it delivers dey are observing beyond a parent's thought.. it delivers dat dey are too attached & can never bare a situation dat cud separate dem from deir loved ones.. u are too smart & too clever!!!! brilliant dii!!!
arrival of viren, jeevika & vanshika was unexpected but was helping the situation alot.. i expected something to happen to virat few updates back, but u made mer's entry,, i expected this chap full of kids funny moments, but this carried so much beyond thoughts... dats where u stand.. get going!! (um not expecting anything for the next one)
u made manvi to think of different encounters vt virat,, romantic, out of fear, tensionfilled, lovable, assurance filled moments dat d couple shared.. salute to u for the selection of apt dialogues!! excellent situation to recall.. very clever!!
now dats where i found the deep interaction between the title u gave for this chapter.. u were dealing vt the title thruout.. u made manvi to think of him at all places possible.. finally u concluded ur title thru her thoughts
'' his mischief, his affection, his passion, the way he tenderly kissed me. Is this all a dream? Maybe the last few weeks - all this time with Virat is like a pleasant blessing, an illusion, because god pitied me - my despair and granted me one last wish''
dat was BEAUTIFUL!!!! beyond awesome
& not to forget,,'' a punishment for having deprieved my husband of his rightful share of love and happiness''
u NAILED it!!!!! u are beyond my thoughts.. u are just fixing & joining things in a magical way... by this thought of her, u made us to concentrate on the plot u started, u took us to day 1 of addicted, the very place where it all began,, the very place where manvi left virat,, she is repenting... u are rocking!!! i am helpless to find words to praise u.. i love u alot diii
now the place u stopped,, u are not s'posed to stop here!!! u cant do this to us.. plsss continue sooonnn... um having too many confusions.. clear it away..
as usual, get my hugs & kisses & love & love only!!!
hats off to u dii!! thanks for coming in my life..
❤️❤️
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