sleeping with my enemy part11 pg 17 new update - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
fantastic update 😊
waiting for u to con't
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
wow loved the last two part, hope we can see romance, dont want virat to think much about karan...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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continue
i want to meet karan virat said manvi .Manvi you know that karan wont talk to us and espeacially what he saw today he will never listen to us virat told her.He wont listen to you virat but he will listen to me i know him let me call him. Virat didnt know why but he felt bad. Manvi called karan and he picked up the phone after her conversation with karan she kept her phone aside and got into the bed.What did karan say asked virat confused.He wants to meet me tomorrow.Virat didnt reply and slept.
manvi woke up in the same position as always her leg was on virat and virats hand was on her hip both cuddling eachother she got up took a shower and went to meet karan.Virat woke up not finding manvi next to him he got confused he saw a chit on the side table"VIRAT I AM GOING TO MEET KARAN"he got angry and went took a shower and headed to his office.Karan was waiting for manvi in the garden he turned and saw manvi and started smiling
karan how are you
karan:how can i be without you i really love you manvi but that ba****ed snatched you away from me
manvi:see karan virat didnt do anythin it was a mistake
karan:you know what manvi virat does not exist in our life he wants to use you manvi i was suppose to get married to you 2 years god dammit i loved you and when i got you my so called bestfriend married you
Manvi:karan i know you hurt but dad forced me to marry virat and even virat didnt want to marry be what ever happened at the disco was a big mistake karan i want my best friend back please forgive me karan
karan:he holds manvi and says mannu i am not upset with you i am sorry that i agreed with maya and left you i am sorry
manvi hugged karan its okayy
manvi:you even forgave virat right manvi asked
karan:i can never forgive him manvi but arent you guys taking divorce
manvi:we want to btw karan i have to go for work
karan:manvi you must be kiddin you and work
manvi:karan virat cut my credit cards and told dad not to give me money
karan:no problem how much do you want
manvi:no karan its perfectly fine
karan:manvi take it
virat:nahi karan she has has a husband who can give her money
karan:oh so mr virat vadhera is here
virat:dekh karan agar tu manvi ko maaf kar sakta hain tau mujhe kyun nahi
karan:tu yaha se jaa mujhe tujh se koi baat nahi karni
manvi:virat chalo yahan se karan hum bad mein baat karien ge
karan:manvi just take this ba***red from here or else ill kill him
virat:karan shutupp and he pushed karan .
karan in defence slapped virat both of them were fighting manvi tried to stop but during that both of them pushed her and she fell and got hurt both of them rushed to her
karan:manvi are you fine i am soo sorry
virat:manvi lets go to the hospital
manvi looked at karan and said i am fine karan ill just go home.virat please end this i wanna go home befpr looking once at karan virat took manvi in his arms and went
karan:ITS TIME FOR REVENGE MR VIRAT VADHERA
virat took manvi to their room and placed her on the bed and called everyone
jeevika:mannu tu theek tau hain na mein ne mom dad ko bhi khe diya hain wo aarahien hain
manvi:dii why did you call maa papa
viren:manvi you are fine abhi how did this happen
virat and manvi looked at eachother
manvi:woo i tripped
ram:princess kya hua tumhe he ran and hugged manvi priya came and sat next to manvi and caressed her
ram:virat how did this happen did you call the doctor ohh my god infection na ho.
priya:shh mr kapoor stop it yeh apka ghar nahi hain jahan sab apko jhelien apki beti ka sasural hai aur ek ka nahi dono ka
priya told everyone:wo actually manvi mr kapoor ki ladli hain na issliye wo tensed hojate hain
manvi:agar ladli hoti tau mujhe kissi cheez ka mana nahi karte
ram went near manvi but she started talking to riya
ram felt really bad jeevika went and hugged him
priya:i think we should leave
avantika:no priya khana kha ke jana kyun harish
harish:haan golu khana kha ke jana aloo ke parathe bane hain
ram:chal theek hain they all went down leaving manvi alone
virat:mein manvi ka kahna leke upar jata hoon
ram:ruko virat wo mein manvi ke liye kahana upar le jaon ga
virman room
manvi had her dad and her picture saath mein
she was talking to her dad
manvi:dad why did you do this to me you know i really love you and miss you i dont want to ask virat money cause of my ego and thats why i asked you but you refused cause of virat i lost you my dad who is my best buddy my saviour my angel my life my king i really need you dad
ram:even i need you princess i am sorry aone dad ko maaf kardo
manvi went and hugged ram and said i am sorry dad i love you baba
ram:i love you to my jaan my princess come sit and eat now
the both fed eachother
ram:manvi how did you get hur
manvi looked down and said dad wo i tripped
ram:manvi you cant lie to me sach batao
manvi:dad i went to meet karan to apoligize and virat came the both got into a fight and i tried to stop their fight and unknowingly they pushed me
ram:WHAT how could they ill talk to virat if anything happened to my daughter then
manvi:dad i am fine and virat ki isme koi galti nahi hai
ram:acha bacha now you rest i am leaving and yaa take this money
manvi:no dad you were right i am virats responsibility ill use his money
ram:thats like my daughter and hugged her
manvi:thats like my father and the said to her self virat vadhera just watch how ill get money you gonna regret it baby
ram:bye princess
late night virman room
virat came and saw manvi was wearing her night dress(she was wearinher pyjamas and tank top and was lying on the bed looking at her wedding pictures
virat came and sat next to manvi
manvi looked towards virat and both shared an eyelock
manvi i am sorry because of me today anything could happen to you i am sorry virat said
virat it alright i am fine
(guys imagine them in their night suits)
virat hugged her tightly and manvi to hugged him back virat slowly moves her hair and kisses her neck she holds him tightly virat slowly brings her face near to his and he leaned down and kissed her. The kiss was hard and manvi didn't struggle .She let virat kiss her and when she moaned he slowed down releasing her hands. Manvi kissed him back placing her hands on his chest. Virat groaned. He couldn't even begin to think straight as he pulled her close and kissed her hungrily. manvi ran her hands through his hair pulling him closer. The fight, the credit cards,she forgot everything

virat moved his lips from her mouth to her neck. Manvi gasped as he kissed a particularly sensitive spot. Pulling at his hair she brought his lips back to hers. The kiss was wild and hot. Manvi felt virats hands under her tank top moving his fingers on her stomache as backed her against the wall. His lips now on her shoulder as her strip of the tank top fell. She moaned when she felt his hands on her stomach. Virat kissed her again as he pulled her tank top off and threw it on the floor. Now kissing her shoulder and neck. Manvi was on fire. She pulled at virats shirt trying to remove it.He pushed her on the bed and started kissing her stomache when her phone rang they both came back to their senses virat got off manvi and manvi turned and took out a t shirt from the cuboard and wore that she moved and picked up her phone

heyy karan she said yaa I am fine don't worry goodnight bye take care

she was going to the bathroom but virat took hold of her wrist and puuled her

virat leave me manvi said trying to get away from his grip

manvi I want to talk about us

Virat there is no us

There might not be an us on an emotional level but physically there is definitely an us manvi virat said

WelI think since we are married and we are attracted to eachother, I don't think it would be a bad thing if we maybe see where that leads." Manvi stared at him. "So let me get this straight." she said. "We hate eachother, but since we're married you think we should sleep together." Manvi asked "I have a lot more then sleeping in mind." he said with a smile. "You're disgusting!" she snapped. "I can't believe you would even suggest something like that." "You repulse me, I wouldn't sleep with you if you were the last man on earth." But baby you do virat said "Sleeping with the enemy is not something I plan on ever doing."manvi said ". "You want me, I wanted you." "I thought this would be the best solution to our problem but I see you're just stubborn btw I am off to bed wanna join me he winked she blushed and went to the bathroom.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Omg u updated all da parts wow ur a star! I was actually thinking bwt ur story all day luv dis FF it's really different. Both r so head over heals for one another really cnt wait for next update! This karan better stay away! Great job.
Edited by neha fan1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
OMG! This is Officially my new favorite FF! Its soo funny!! Virat's proposition to Manvi ☺️ lol...Cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
updates were absoloutely awesome im sooo getting into this story- its just tooo interestingwaiting to see hw exactly karan plans on taking revenge n naughty nuaghty virat wat will he do next- n will manvi giv in to him that quick really cnt wait- plz update quickly 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
it was too gooD. . Plz update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Awesome update...update next part soon...can't wait to read next part...
Plz update asap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Update was really fantastic...wowww...virat and manvi attracting to each other and their emotions were too intense...,hope soon they fall in love with eachother...i guess due to karan they realize their feelings for eachother...loved the ff very much,...please continue soon.,...take care...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
dear plz put up a index for chs

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