sleeping with my enemy part11 pg 17 new update - Page 7

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anushayamersy22 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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will update the other 2 in a bit and then send pms
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update...plz dear cont asap...can't wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome..~!!! Both have soft corner for eachother...but none ready to admit first n ove their little moment initiated by Virat..Waiting for next!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome part❤️❤️
love this hatred b/w virat and manvi...lolzzz would never thought i would that i love virman's hatred towards eachother😆...but i know they are married na so they have no other way around😉...either they would love eachother or hate eachother😆
both are falling for eachother but still *sigh* their EGO
i want virat to fall for her first😳
hawww...he cut her credit cards😔
and love their small small intense interaction b/w eachother be it in party or in their room😳
cont soon the other parts too😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update!!!!! plz update nxt part asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
eeeks !! Update sooon plz plz plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow just read the whole FF! I absolutely luv it! Both are such crazy crackpots but I adore dem! Cnt wait for future updates! Great job
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 6

Manvi entered kapoor mansion.Mannu how come you came early I thought ke youll come with virat priya asked.why now do I have to take you permission to come manvi said.No mera bacha I was just asking waise where is you dii she was even coming to help me with the food.Listen mom I don't know where is dad.Baby he must be in his room priya said.

Manvi went to her dads room and hugged ram.Ram huuged her and kissed her .

Ram:princess how come so early

Manvi:dad I lost my credit card can you get me one

Ram:mannu why so careless beta but nevermind ill order abhi and yaa take some money until your card doesn't come

Manvi hugged her dad and thanked him

Manvi:dad I am sleeping for a bit love you bye

Virat entered the kapoor mansion with jeevika and went to meet ram after his conversation with ram he went down with him,Both of them were discussing about buisness.Manvi came down and saw virat and was really angry she was going to the kitchen when her dad called her

Ram:manvi I have told shashank not to get the credit card because virat told me what happened today and I think he has more right then me on you and he said hell get you a credit card.

Manvi was fuming with anger:Fine dad don't get me a credit card and yaa I don't want virats money do you hear that Mr vadhera I don't want your money. She opened her clutch took out the money her dad gave her and gave it to ram

Ram:mannu beta you can keep it

Manvi:I don't want anything from you I feel like I am adopted I hate you all you forced me into this marriage and now fine do whatever you guys wanna do I am going

Ram:where are you going manvi

Manvi: club with friends and they'll pay for me

Ram:your inlaws are coming go to the kitchen and help your mom and di

Harish and family came

Harish:golu agar meri bahu ko jana hai tau jane dein na infact sare bache club jayien

Ram:No pehle khana phir bhale jaien

Manvi went into the kitchen

She was sitting quitley staring her sister making kheer.Jeevika was about to put kishmish when manvi stopped her and told her virat is allergic to it.

Later food was served everyone was eating and talking.bhabhi you have made the kheer right. Virat asked .jeevika nodded.bhabhi its amazing.devar jee thanks to manvi app yeh kha rahien hain I forgot you are allergic to khismish but she remembered and stopped me saying"dii mere virat ko khishmish se allergy hai"virat was happy that manvi cared for him he wanted to apoligize to her tau decided to go to thye club.

Food was done and all the youngsters virat manvi jeevika viren riya and even maya went to the club

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Read all the parts your story is awesome
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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As the reached the bar everyone went in different direction viren and jeevika went and sat on the sofa staring at eachother they ordered drinks.Manvi went to her friends and maya was sticking to virat she apoligised to virat and was talking to him manvi was busy dancing when she saw maya talking to virat and laughing she couldn't handle and went their.Heyy maya what are you doing here said manvi

Manvi I think you forgot that I came with you guys maya replied.Ohh yaa I forgot actually important cheezien aur logon ko yaad rakhna chaiye manvi said smiling at maya.Maya asked virat for dance but Manvi is manvi she took hold of virats hand and told him to stay here.Maya I think you should stop hitting on married guy I mean tumhare liye mein aik acha larka dhoon deti hoon tumhare jesa desperate I mean scene on karne ke liye desperate manvi said giving a fake smile.Whatever maya said and went from their,Manvi unknowingly was holding virats tightly.

"What the hell was that?" virat asked shrugging out of manvis grasp. "That was justice!" manvi snapped. "You want to flirt with someone, by all means, but, first give me a divorce!" "I will not let you have your cake and eat it too." "Understand! " virat stared at her and then his eyes crinkled and his face broke out into a dimpled smile. "You were jealous" he said. "JEALOUS!" "Puhlease!" she said rolling her eyes. "First of all I don't get jealous, I'm Manvi Kapoor." "Second, what would I need to be jealous of?" "I don't care what you do with whom, once you give me a divorce." "But... before that you will not, absolutely not have relationships with these whatever girls." With a toss of her hair manvi turned around but virat pulled her back holding onto her elbow. "Let's go somewhere quieter." he said. "No, I don't want to go anywhere with you." Manvi said as virat half dragged, half led her to a far corner booth hidden by the bar . "Let go virat !" she said as he pushed her into the booth blocking her in. "virat, let me up." she said. ." "NO! virat replied. "Now let's discuss what just happened here." "You were jealous, you don't want me with anyone else, yet you're not willing to move ahead in our relationship." "What realtionship?" she yelled above the music. "We have no relationship." "But we could." he said with a smile. "We both want it." Hearing the way virat said that made manvi's stomach muscles tighten. She took a deep breath. He could tell she was wavering. "We'll start off slow." he said reaching out his finger and tracing her lips. manvi's mouth went dry. "Slow." she repeated. "Yes, very slow." he said as he leaned into her and kissed her lips. Slow, manvi thought as she returned his intoxicating kiss. As usual whenever virat kissed her she lost herself in him. Manvi had no idea how long they were in that corner, hidden from everyone else as viratand her kissed over and over again. They're hands skimming over eachother, and driving eachother crazy. "Let's go home." Vieat said leaning his forehead against manvi. Manvi slowly nodded. She wanted to go home with virat . As virat slipped out of the booth and grabbed manvi's hand to help her out he pulled her one last time to him and kissed her roughly. Pulling away Manvii stared up at virat and as her gazed shifted she stopped in her tracks virat, looked at her and and followed her gaze. "Sh*t he said. Karan stood infront of them staring at them with hatred and pain. They could see it in his eyes. Virat let go of manvis 's hand and took a step towards karan , but karan turned his back to both manvi i and virat.They both left and headed towards home.

They both entered their room manvi sat on the bed and started recalling all the incident.

gonna continue in next 15 min

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