VIRMAN FF* kyu dard hai itna...*PART 9*pg.130

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bebo

@Vibhu3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1001

Originally posted by: shilpa09

OMG BEBO... thats really one long comment...😲😆😳
thnx dear:):):)😳

aww...so sweet of u...i m really touched... this was ur first long comment...
thnx a lot bebo...🤗

i would try my best to keep on giving palang tod updates everytime...but not this long...😆😆
really yaar i was so frustrated yesterday night...litrally i felt like crashing this forum...😡😡😡

but dont worry now i m normal...not to worry...forum is safe now...🤣

Hahaha!!! Pheuuu its safe LMAO 😛 but seriously it happens!!! Day before I updated my ff!! N that shows some inappropriate words are there!! BUHHAHAHAHA!! :P I rechecked 4 times!! But there nothing even near to that !! Really if acts gay sometimes!! RIP Our fingers!! ROFL :P n yea!!! U deserves that!!! Really but still everytime I just want to read more n more!! N now m reading ur EMAET m on manvi's delivery now!! Will give a longgg comment on that too!!! But really love ur ideas!! n ur writing skills!! But fact is I like arrogant virat!!!!!!!!!! 😉 That's why this one is my favourite!!!!!!! Lallalalalal!!! I have many things to say but RIP Dictionary not showing any word which is appropriate foe ur writing skills!!! M following ur fb page too!!!! :)

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shreeya121

@shreeya121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1002

hey shilpa 😊 m new here...

ur writng is jus so awesome dear...👍🏼

m a big fan of urs...

jus started readng dis ff of urs...

poor manvi she is suffrng 4 no fault...

i really pity hr... wil commet as i read frthr...

plz pm me as well for frthr updates...

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Nandita

@Nandita217

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1003

Read your last three updates!!!!
God!!!! They have turned the story upside down!!!!!😃😉

The tracks were just amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

The change with manvi has got in herself to change her fate is so brilliantly presented!!!!!! Just amazing man!!!!! Awesome!!!!!👏👏👏

Lol...the way she was irritating virat...hahahahaha...that part was so funny & hilarious!!!!!!😆😆

Finally virman are coming close to each other!!!!!!!
But that slap, virat deserved that!!!! Seriously man! how can he think about her like that!!!!!!!

Sanjay's pov easily conveyed that virat has gone through so much in life, thats why he has converted himself into a monster!!!!!!!!
Still lot of story is to be yet to be revealed!!!!!

But shilpa, you again left me tongue-tied!!!!! The way you have brought the changes & presented it...its unbelievable!!!!!!!! Absolutely fantastic!!!!!!👏

Do update soon, will be waiting!!!😊

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Akay1692

@Akay1692

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1004

Heyy !!

That was A very good 'negative' ff I have read in sucha a looong time!

Great work.. update soon and can u please pm me frm nrxt time. thanks!

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taanisha

@bluemehra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1005

gosh, what an amazing update...u r one the best writers on IF...i swear 😃

do cont soon 👏

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monikaksl

@monikaksl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1006

awesome update👏

manvi is funny😆i want dem to be together

update soon

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SmartyBoy_

@SmartyBoy_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1007

Hey i'm new reader just read it now all chappy in one go!! i most say what a awesome writer ur!!loved the update it was hot + emotional feeling bad for both!!interesting story Looking forward!!can't wait to read more!! Continue soon!!

Edited by 1lyf1luvdance - 12 years ago

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maahiya90

@maahiya90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1008

wow...it awsm...awsmest..grt...blasting shilpa...wow...b'ful...lovly...plzzz continu soon... plzzz...and make it long...all the best for next update...waiting egrly...and sorry for late...next time se nahi hoga.