Virika FF:Friend Wala Pathi#2 Ch30 PartA:B PG96,97

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

reallyyy awesomeee updateee..loved each n every bit of the story... but im reallyy disappointed tht..u ddnt send me PM :((((( even though i liked n commented... :((((

anywyasss... i lovedd this updatee...realyy cutee virika nok jhoks... hehehe... esp..loved the dialouge " ''What am i doing, between this traffic-jam?''

HAHAHHA... COULDNT CONTROL MYSELF FROM LAUGHINGGG... :D

plsss PM me..wen u update next..thnku so muchhh

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

nowww i got ur pm... thnkuuu so muchhh... but i read befor u sent me a pm... :D :D

great going..kep continuinggg !!! :D

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sweets1126

@sweets1126

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

heey! CONGRATULATIOONS for the 2ns treat!:) and nice updaate!D:

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kryanvirika05

@kryanvirika05

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

first of all congrats for ur new thread!!!!

and now here goes:

NAHIII!!!!!! This update was too short!!!!!!

NAVYA!!!!!!! just when it got to its peak you stopped!!!

😭

anyway...

LOOOL Viren doesnt realise that everyone thinks hes talking about jeevs pregnancy and not her jealosy!!!

even jeevika! lool at the way she tries to remember if they 😳

and aww he wants to spend time with her on the terrace but obviously cant! the song is so amazing and suits virika so well!!!

yuvraj??? im fine with him as long as he behaves himself! and gives virika their private time!!!

ALL IN ALL THIS UPDATE WAS TOO SHORT FOR ME BUT BRILLIANT AT THE SAME TIME!!!!

UPDATE SOON!!!

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TeriMaaa

@TeriMaaa

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

WTH ...
m soo late 😡😡
after 4 pages ..😭😭
cant believe this 😭😭
sryy ..😭
hating others who commented before me ...🤢😡😕

first thanx alot fr my adding my name ..😃😃
bt we cant stop ourselves because this story is the best ..😃😃

coming back to the update ..😆
starting was ok ...😊
haha viren evil smile ..😆
whn he asked "any help sweety" i loved this dialogue ..😆

loool🤣
the virka convo ..
hahahahaha..🤣
jeevs thinks he was talking abt pregnancy ..lol🤣
the most funny part ...🤣

then my poor viren with the snores 😆
lmaooo😆
traffic jam 😆
how dare the aunties disturb my viren 😡😆
bt thanks to those snores my viren get a chance to meet jeevs👏

and then finally fight is over ..
this scene was sooo sweet..😉😳
virika were just so adorable ..😳
cute bed scene awww😳
thanks alloot fr making the fight over ..😆
i was eagerly waiting fr this moment ..😃
thts why its my fav part of the update ...👏👏

then the song wala scene😉
romantic ..😆😆
bt tht stupid priya ..😡😡
then the yuvraj 😡😡
who is this guy ??
cant wait to see virenji jealous ..lol😆😆

bt is jeevs really pregnant .. ????😲

over all again an amazing update ..👏👏👏
continue soon sweet heart👏
and congo fr the new thread ..
ur an amzaing writer ..👏👏
love u ❤️❤️

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karankrysle

@karankrysle

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Congrats!

New thread!

I want the jealousy track too!

and soon!

very soon! 😛

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Surbhi Jain

@surbhi1994

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

what a amazing n fab it was

jst loved it

njoyed reading it out

loed d cute lovely romantic moments between virika

continue soon

lovin out yuvi n continue soon as d track sound awesome

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876723

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

i was literally smiling from ear to ear when i saw the pm lol

great update fantastic work as usual!

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876723

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

He went her room and layed her down on the bed, he smiled at her and was about to go, just then she stopped him by holding his hand.

Jeevika: Kaha ja rahe ho? Please don't go!

Viren: [surprised, sat beside her] It's morning now...

Jeevika: So, i want u to be with me always... I can't miss u Virenji!

He looked at her and hugged her tightly, she too hugged him back. He kissed her in her forehead. ''I'll be always there with u, in every problems and every happiness. I'll never let u alone.''

Jeevika: Promise?

Viren: Promise!

I LOVEEED THAT PART IT WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING

AND btw congrats for starting this new thread!👏