|| OS: The gift of love || - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
OMG its an amazing os i am speechless yaar super updates u r a great writer
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
so finally aaliya is back!! 😃

i was so happy seeing your pm 😊

i mean its really a treat to read your updates 😳

thank you for this one!!

now coming to the story...

i really dont know what to say..😕

i m already dead reading your update..🤢

so very speechless right now!!! ⭐️

the most awesomest story i have ever read...👏👏👏

really i mean how can it be so good???😊

words are less to describe your works aaliya!!

you are the best writer i have ever come across 👏👏👏

each and every thing described so beautifully...

"It felt strange to them that other people could hold her because, in their mind, Zaara was an extension of Jeevika. She felt like an appendage that should still be attached to her, and even though they were insanely happy, both were a little sad at the same time to know that they had to "let go" of her this soon. Both feeling a little jealous that other people might be able to hold her, even for a second, and feel her tiny hands or see her tiny little mouth open and close;

Viren wanted to be the only person who would ever know her, after Jeevika of course

And then, she opened her eyes for the first time, and they were absolutely entranced. Viren couldn't take his eyes off of her and Jeevika looked up to Viren with her eyes still wet."

this was probably the bestest part 😳

or may be not..😕

i m hell confused right now...😕 the whole story was the bestest..hats off girl really bow down to you!! 👏

and zara the most beautiful name ever...😛

no story could be better than yours!! 😊

absolutely beautiful...👏

And karina congrats once again!!🤗

Aaliya ❤️


Edited by krystu05 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Hats off to u for writing such an amazing OS!

You described all d emotions so nicely and perfectly:)

I love the name ZAARA!!

Please do write more ff's and OS's

Plz pm me when u write next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
loved it .it was just cute.
continue with more OS.
thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
That was so cute..i loved the name zara. And hats off to viren's patience level.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
it was a sweet, cute and beautiful update...i was feeling pitty for poor viren...lol he has to bear all tantrums of jeevika...wat to say about jeevika...loving the way she was threatining viren...thnnx for pm dear...love to read many more such os...but don't forget ur other stories...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waoo dear it was just awesome.. amazing.. what should i saymore.. u dedicated it to Kay94... congraxxx Katys94...

The love n the anger of jeevika towards viren was speechless...

Hope to see more creative writtings of your's...

Thanxxx 4 the pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
👏
it was that amazing!!
i think you should continue this
ahh how i love readind about viren- the perfect son, the perfect husband, the perfect father!
plzz cont
would love reading more
and thanks for the pm!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Amazing... poor viren was tortured sooo much coz of her tantrums... u r awesome... luved d name! Plz write more n more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
wow
no words 2 describe
loved it
brought a tear in my eye it ws dat emotional
u r d best writer
non veg line 😆
zaara name is d fab yaar
do write more os like dis
it was too big update
thank u sooo much fr dis awesome amazing mind blowing fab brilliant excellent story

THANK U :)
😊 👏 👍🏼 🤗

Edited by surbhi1994 - 12 years ago

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