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karankrysle

@karankrysle

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Nooo words Karina!

U have left me speechless!

Absolutely speechless!

I could imagine all that happening in our show coz both our Virika are actually like that!

And their love is just what you portrayed in the story! Purity to the core!

I am actually blushing as if all that happened to me! 😳

I think oyu should write more os's!

You write them much better than other writers!

Anyway!

Love always!

- Anushka! 😊

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mehwish123

@mehwish123

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awww
So beautiful
Ur r amazibg at writing os
Seriously believe me
I loved reading ii eas just reading again n again
Words wre just drooling n dancing in my mind

I lived it and yet wad enjoying

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Shaza (Atma My LifeHeart)

@Saba_Pari

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Karina karina karina how could u be a sooo perfect writer its an amazing updates i have no words i am just speechless after reading it hats off to u dear its superb updates love u yaar:-)

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Shicksha

@romanticgurl070

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

mind blowing one

loved it

aww loved the kiss, the way viren calling jeevs 'my love' n he stayed back in rishikesh for her

AWESOME

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Jujuk

@Jujuk

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Wow. This was simply amazing!

I particularly loved the ending bit.

😳

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PEACE4Life

@PEACE4Life

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Wow this was new
Excellent job
I never thought u would write an os
But it's great
Continue to write stories like these

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Aaliya

@-Aaliya.KryAn-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

karina i really wonder if this was your first os

it was hell amazing 👏

you are an absolutely mindblowing writer no doubt!!

loved each and every bit of it!!

viren calling jeevika every day...

viren's sudden appearence..

their first hug...

viren's gift..

their holding hands...

the surprise party..

virika desperate to talk to each other...

their kiss...

jeevika's wish...

and finally the last part...

seriously no words to describe them 😳

hats off karina🤗

superb!!!

do write more like this often

love

aaliya

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karanshalaka

@karanshalaka

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Okay this is AMAZING!! During reading this whole OS only one thing was escaping my lips that is "awww"... everything was BEAUTIFUL n PERFECT! U r just Fabulous *hats off* *bows down*
I want more n more n more OS plzz!! Cant stop saying u r awesome!!