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little.angel56

@little.angel56

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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh god!!
This was so beautiful and it touched me immensely
Like am seriously out of words,

With a very simple yet powerdul title you gave it full justice!
The Rishikesh part was so funny at the same time so mesmerising

And virat manvi haha one cant get enough f their nok jhoks!

The best part was Mein sharabi, how she sang it for her di. Totally different
I always thougt it could be sung by a boy for a girl
Lol.

This was really really well written!!!! 😊

👏 👍🏼

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urmil

@urmil

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

beutifully written...loved it...thnx for pm

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swasti tiwari

@sanjana_cool

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow
superb
excellent job
loved the way u expressed each n every thing!
🤗

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Amna

@-Cutyee

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely OS...

Naha its really very beautifull...😊

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NiraliVirika

@NiraliVirika

Explorer

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow!

It was really emotional!

I loved every bit of it!

The bond between Jeevika and Maanvi is pure and amazing!

Lovely OS

Thanks for the PM

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saranya

@saranya.saran

Explorer

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Posted: 12 years ago

Neha di i hav already told u tat i'm a big fan of ur writings but then too y r u making me to fall for ur writting again and again...😉

u simply rooocked👏

on seeing jeeman's bonding only i feel for the show...(which i'm missing now)

but u filled it...😎if we get to see this as a part in ehmmbh...,i'm sure i would be on cloud9

plsss do fill us with jeeman again...

oops i forgot to tell...thanks for the update..😛

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Ayesha

@--Ayesha--

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

Neha di awesome update.
Such beautifully written ,luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG!!!!!!!!!! welll written...i had tears in my eyes while reading this..esp..the last 3 para!!!! ahhh..wt to say/...im speechless...hats off neha..

reallyy awesomeee updateee... loved each and every line of the storyy...do continueee soon!!!!

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Hina

@Hinu786

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow neha u r awesome it was really nice keep writing more n do pm me

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Mansi

@2189mansi

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

So nicely u hav shown the sisterly love and emotions between them. Its so true. I feel some connection wid ur os.

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