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vaarya

@Vaarya53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Omg...wat a twist...yaar r u planning to kill us?? This wqas beyond expectation n i m much more eager for ur further parts...but its a request plzz update one of ur previous story!! Continue asap...luv ya:*

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princesshelen

@princesshelen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Wohoo... Another OS
It was an amazing update
Luved it
Luved all ur works too
Take care
Thnks fr the pm

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Dik

@Dik..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Both the updates are really gud...
Thanks for pm...

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Anu one more story from you.. and double update.. Yaay!! Im loving it 😃..

Loved the concept.. You are an amazing writer 👏👏👏.. Its really very interesting.. Virat is completely shattered.. He is trying to get rid of his loneliness.. But he's failing miserably.. Loved the FB moments very much 😳.. But why she left is still a mystery.. Second part was quite shocking.. Manvi and her 2 kids 😲😲.. I guess they are Virat's kids.. But what exactly happened between them.. Eagerly waiting for the next part and try to get some sleep Anu 😛.. Thank you so much for the pm.. Take care 😃

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sreshta90

@sreshta90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

wowww Anu another wrk of u.. kyaa yaar hame maarne ka iradha hei kya...? first of all im being crazy behind ur sacha pyaar, two left feet nd my umbrella... daily waiting fr u to update them but u startd a new one...?? glad that u startd this OS.. otherwise we would have missed such a beautiful concept.. its really very intrsting nd i startd loving it too.. u portrayed virat's situation very well👍🏼... nd wat that manvi moved on nd she had no place fr virat...?? please donn say that she is with someone please... please clear our confusions as soon as possible...

thanks fr such lovely os...

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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

You started another story, wonderful!

What an amazing start, Virat is depressed and broken because Maanvi left him... I thought she died, but no she is alive...

He went to meet her and find her with her children.

I really want to know why Maanvi left Virat.

Do keep your stories going 👍🏼

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mika17

@mika17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

interesting story wonder whose kids they are

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

O damn you cannot stop there pleasee continue soon...

Thanks for your PM..

update soon cant wait for your next update and PM...

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ramanirani

@ramanirani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Virman part was superb.
Thanks for the pm.

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naina

@naina927

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

hey anu great work again...!!!! you are just mindblowing...!!!! wowww... i really love the story line... virat trying everything just to forget manvi but it backfires on him and he misses manvi more n more... it happens when one is irrevocably in love with someone...

i felt really bad for virat but why did virman got separated... i have so many questions but i think waiting patiently for the story to unfold is the best option... so i will just wait...

read the 2 parts back to back and they are freaking awesome...

loved the small moments you explained - embroidery on virat's shirt, manvi stitching his shirt's button... dafodil flowers and everything...

but are those kids virat's...??? wait a second i dnt think they are virat's kids... infact i have a feeling that those kids arent manvi's...

kuch aur hi chakar hai boss...

thanks for the pm n cont soon... tk cr