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Vaarya53 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
I hope u had some sleep yesterday baby!! The update was totally beyond expectation...hawww virat slapped her!! N moroever wats up with manvi now?? God!! Plzz update soon ...cant wait for the twist to unfold!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update...! Virat is a Mad elephant in this update...u have still maintained the suspense...would wait for the next update..Thnks for the PM Anu~!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Omg Anu..u have leave me speechless...
It was too good yaar...the way u have described the emotions were fab... 👏 ...the feelings of virman was clearly written..
But i dun't understand why is manvi behaving like this..?what had happen?who is Rahul?
Ab sabar nahi hota yaar..continue soon...will be eagerly waiting for it..thank u so much for the pm.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
yar m dying to read d next part
ur story is amazing.. Just wondrful
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Superb!!!luvd the way u potrayd their emotions...everything was just in the rite place...waiting eagerly for the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
everytime i tred to comment on your updates i just couldn't come up with right words.even now i don't know what to say.u just leave me speechless everytime.u leave me spellbound.but today i'll comment.even if it may not make any sense.the intensity,the aggresiveness in virat is so humane.his reaction after manvi saying rahul is her husband is so perfect.the only one you ever cherished,ever desired betraying you...even the thought of it makes you go outrageous.so how could he not behave like that??waiting eagerly to know manvi's reason for leaving him.what had he done??and what to say about you.you are gifted.gifted with this amazing talent to make people crave for more.bless you.❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Awesome dear its fab...manvi is married with rahul? But who is rahul? Why she did this with virat?...so many Qs n only 1 ans that is next updt...i know i m so mean fr asking u next updt...but wat to do yar? I cant wait pls cont soon...n pls dont end it very soon...its fab story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Virat was thinking they had some arguments regarding his work timing..

Manvi was thinking he crused her in worst way...
I really dont know... Why cant they just share n discuss their problem???
Everyone has lot of time n patience, when are in love or relation to wait for other's response
But when they are going to break a relation they are not all ready to hear other POV... I agree when u r emotional, it tends to happen... But if u r wrong.. then u r losing a precious relationship
Edited by qwerty012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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***part 4***

"Manvi??? Are you ok?" Rahul bent down and asked her. She was still rooted in the corner digesting the happenings of the previous few minutes. She was in a very deep shock.

"Mommy!!!!!!!!!!" she heard her daughter call her. She wiped her tears and got up rushing to her babies. She opened the door to find them both sitting before the computer, playing games. She hugged and kissed them. She looked at Rahul standing over her. "I am sorry Rahul, are your alright??"

"Uhh, I am fine, don't worry about it. Are you Ok? That's looks bad." He pointed to a small cut near her mouth. She blotted it away and nodded that she was ok.

"Do you want to talk about it?" he asked.

"No, please just finish up with Ria. I am sorry to trouble you so much always. Its just that Ria hates hospitals and she will raise hell, you know how it is" Manvi took her in her arms and sat before Rahul who started with his routine check-up. Ria was born with a rare congenital heart condition, she had a hole in her heart. This needed constant medical supervision. But, Ria was scared of hospitals, she would be very agitated and disturbed in them, ironically.

"ohh that's fine..I am used to it now. What's that cut?" Rahul asked.

"She fell down from the swing today. This girl is so accident-prone." She chuckled. Just like Virat, she couldn't help thinking. Virat used have so many bruises and cuts that she couldn't keep track of what had happened when. He was very absent minded, so engrossed in his work that he always had something bad happening to him.

"Alright, everything seems normal." Rahul smiled. "Manvi, should I call Priya? Maybe you should talk to her." Rahul asked her hesitantly as she walked him out.

"Uh, no, I will call her later. Don't worry, I am fine." Manvi smiled.

"That's Virat I am guessing?" He asked her.

"Hmmm. Thanks Rahul! Sorry about the way he pushed you and sorry I had to lie." Manvi told him looking down embarrassed.

"No, That's fine. Please take care of yourself." he patted her back and left.

~~~

"Swetha, Virat is here." Manvi called her best friend Swetha.

"What? What are you saying? Are your for real??" swetha jumped out her chair.

"Yes, why would I kid about something like this? I am falling weak Sweths. I don't know what to do. I lied to him that I have married someone else. He even saw Ria and Nikki." Manvi burted out anxiously. "I don't want to him to come back Swetha, He still affects me. Even more than before. And I cannot go back to that place I was again, I have small babies to take care of."

"Ohh my god! Ok, I am coming over right now."

She went and sat beside her sleeping babies. They had kept her busy until now. This has been her life ever since they were born. As long as they were with her, she would forget everything. They needed her full attention when they were awake and by her side. Sometimes, she shudders thinking about what her life would have been without them. She would have probably killed herself after that fateful night. She closed her eyes and the dreadful images appeared back in front of her.

She wanted to go for a volunteering camp for cancer patients with Swetha in Boston, a few hours away from New York. She was interested in these volunteer works, that Virat always thought was a waste of her time. He was upset that she was leaving him for a full week.

"But, you don't have time for me anyways. I see you for like 5-6 hours everyday. You are sleeping for 95% of that time and the rest of the time, you yell at me for keeping you from going to work. If I am not here, you will get a break too. Nobody will annoy you." Manvi said sulking.

Virat hugged her from behind "What are you saying baby? I love it when you nag me and fuss over me. Its cute." He was kissed her and went back to his work.

"I nag you, I fuss over you???"

"Most certainly"

"Virat!??"

"Alright, if you want to go, go. Don't expect me to be happy about it." He said without looking up from his laptop.

"You know, you are such a baby" she threw a fit.

He didn't reply, he seemed busy.

"Virat, don't be mad. I really need this. I am so bored at home. I cannot even paint anything. I need a break from the routine. And I like helping them out." She tried to explain.

"Alright baby. It is upto you. Its fine." He replied still not looking at her.

Manvi with a puppy face "I will make it up to you."

"ummm.."

"Virat?!" she sat in his lap putting away the laptop.

"Manvi! I am working. It's very important."

"Virat, come'on cant you spare me five minutes?"

Virat took a deep breath and smiled "Alright five minutes. What is it?"

"Virat, I am sitting here, so close to you and you don't seem even remotely interested in your wife. When was the last time you took me out? I know you are really busy, but it really hurts that I don't figure in your daily schedule or even weekly or monthly schedule."

"Manvi, not again. Listen, the company is going public next week. Do you know how big that it?"

"Yes, thats one your major goals."

"Yes.. and after that, we can relax. Tell you what, I will take you wherever you want after that."

"Really?"

"Really." He leaned in close to her, putting his hands around her waist. She felt so happy that she was finally getting some attention from her super busy husband. Atlas! He hands went around her and grabbed the laptop. He chuckled and kissed her lightly. "Your five minutes are up!!"

"You are the boring husband ever, in the history of husbands, you know that?"

"Yes baby, I know that. Now hustle. I need to focus."

She looked at him dejected. She missed her Virat, her crazy lover, who couldn't get enough of her, who used to spend hours outside her art school cafeteria to catch a glimpse of her and talk to her for a few minutes. The crazy romantic who sat with her for hours watching all her favorite romantic movies, who used to go shopping with her and watch her in awe, as she tried different clothes. The guy who would cuddle with her and listen to all her chatter very attentively, even though he thought it was silly, laugh and tease her about it.

"Maybe he is having an affair?? Did you ever think about that?" Swetha laughed at her silliness. Swetha always thought that Manvi was too naive and innocent with childish concepts.

"What? Are you out of your mind. No, Sweths, Virat can never do anything like that. He loves me crazily. He is just busy with work." Manvi told her proudly.

"That's what all wives think before they find out about it babe. Just saying" Sweths replied.

~~~

She heard on the news that Virat's company had gone public and had recorded the highest stock price in the recent few years. She wanted to call Virat and congratulate him immediately but she thought of a better plan. She was waiting to break the news to Virat for a while now. But, whenever she wanted to talk to him, he was never relaxed and she wanted him to know about this when he was free from all his tensions. She went back home early after getting food from his favorite restaurant; a really nice bottle of wine for him and sparkly cider for herself. She would wear his favorite saree and it would be the perfect evening and the perfect moment for tell him that he was going to be a father soon.

She tip-toed into the house, it was dark inside. Maybe he didn't come back from work yet, but she didn't want to risk it. She went into her art room and changed. She hit her head hard when she realized that she had forgotten her party bag with food and everything in the car. She was about to go get it, but she heard someone, a girls voice coming from their room. 'Who could it be?? She walked slowly to her room and in there she saw the scariest horror movie of her whole life. Virat was lying naked on top of some woman, having s*x with her on their bed. She could hear their moans and cries. Her mind went numb and a lone tear rolled out on her cheek.

Her whole world shattered in front of her own eyes. She didn't know what to do. With tears streaming down her eyes, she drove back to the camp. She couldn't get the ghastly image of him out of her head. He cheated on her, betrayed her trust, stabbed her in the heart.

That night she nearly missed a fatal accident. As she tried to swerve off the approaching vehicle, her car went off the road and hit a tree. She couldn't help not wishing that she had rather died than face the light of the next day.

She wasn't hurt physically, but she couldn't get herself up from the car. Her heart was shattered into thousand different pieces. She was just drained. She was drained of her life, her passion, her love, her vigor. She was destroyed. She didn't know what to do. She stayed like that for probably a few hours.

Her phone rang. She answered it sobbing helplessly "Swetha? Please take me away from here, far away."

<<<part 3

>>>part 5

Edited by bluebolt - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...amazing superb yaar...so finally the suspense is over...but i still dont get it why virat had cheated manvi...sumthng's wrong for sure!! But seriously it was fantabulous...no words to explain..feel so sad for that little girl!! Luvd it..keep updating!!

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