Virman FF...- Secrets! Part 8a UPDATED PG18

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Madhiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey guys Look I Have Updated Very Quick! Well the reason is that I was gettin bored so I thought I will update my ff!

I will update my nishal ff soon!

Part 4

Virat ran outside the house slamming the door shut! His eyes were searching for Maanvi everywhere but didn't see her anywhere, the roads were empty! He was so worried he didn't even have her phone number!

"I know" he said "I'll ring Bhai he'll know what to do" he took out his phone and dialed viren number.
"Hello" "Hello Bhai Urm I kinda got a problem" "what have you done know Virat" viren said "we'll Urm Bhai I lloo--sstt Maanvi" he said cursing him self. "YOU DID WHAT" viren stood up causing the chair to fall. Virat told exactly everything that happened. Viren nodded "ok Virat u keep looking for her and I'll make some calls" "Ok Bhai" he felt a little relaxed but still was sweating like a pig. 'Are Maanvi kahaan kho gayi'

Viren nervously dialed her phone number. "Hello" "Hi it's me viren look I know u might freak out but I need to Tell u something" "What" viren told her everything that happened. "WHAT" Jeevika shouted from the top of her voice. "Omg What has happened, I wonder where Mannu has gone I knew I Shouldn't have let her do this job" "Look Jeevika Plz calm down do you know where Maanvi might have gone? U know somewhere she might like to be when she is upset. Jeevika wiped her tears and said "yes Central Park she will always go there and sit down on the bench near all the red roses" "Thanks Jeevika Don't Worry We Will Find Her"

Viren told Virat where to go and Virat set off to Central Park!
Virat walked in the park it was so peaceful he smelt the fresh sent from the plants.
He walked down to the beautiful red roses and looked over at the bench and saw her! There she was he slowly walked to the bench and sat down! Maanvi looked to the right and saw him she quickly turned around and cleaned her tears with the edge of her dupatta. Virat gave her a tissue which she slowly recived.

They were both sat down Maanvi lost in her own thoughts it was a beautiful scenery.
"The reason wh" "shh" Virat interrupted her " u don't have to tell me" he said softly!
"I don't" "no you don't I know there is something bothering you buy you are going to tell me yourself only when you are comfortable"
"How can you be so"
"Dramatic" he asked.
"No Understanding"
"It's All part of my skills" He said
Winking!

She Chuckled "Phirse Flirting" (Again Flirting)
"It's a beautiful place how can you be depressed after coming here?" "It Cheers me Up" She Replied.
"itsso peaceful nah, you must come here alot since you live here and since you have so many people to bring here" she said now grinning
He smiled while shaking his head " This place Is to spend time with special people not time pass ones"he said grinning!

Maanvi looked up at him, as he looked down at her, she shook her head and looked away.
the silence was very bewitching, as they both took in the view, lost once more in there own thoughts.
Maanvi shuddered as she remembered what she had just done, how could i she thought, scream at a client like that, how stupid can i get virat knew she was thinking about what she had done he cold tell from the watery glint that was returning in her eyes.
"I'm sorr" she said but as always Virat interrupted "you don't need to say sorry" "no I do whatever I did out there was completely wrong and I'm sorry" "it's ok"
"no but what i did was bad, im so sorry" she said and het tears once more began to flow, 'i dont know what came over me, i just can't stand anyone saying things about young women like that, it really hurts for some reason aur phir main bhi toh (and then i too)..and she quickly cut off realising what she was going to say, 'i mean that woman doesn't understand that she was once a young girl too, she also had to face all the things that society puts on young girls, she knows how easily a girls izzat (honour) gets tainted" she said openly crying out loud.
Virat was Totally confused. He didn't know what to do. Unknowingly he took her into his arms.
Maanvi quickly pushed him back
"Don't Touch Me" she said

"Urm I think you should go I mean we should go" Virat said. Maanvi Nodded and stood up as she was walking toward the jeep she tripped over the rock she was ready for her head to hit the hard surface until Virat held her right hand and rapped his arms around her waist. Perfect Fit! They had a eye lock and let go of each other. "I think your hand like me" virats said Maanvi Laughed! But quickly moved "I'm sorry it's not you it just that I don't like guys" she said as they both walked towards the jeep !

As they got in the car Maanvi spoke " how did you find me" she asked!
Virat quickly realized that he had forgot to tell viren he had found Maanvi!
He rang viren and told him he found Maanvi and that he would drop her off to her home!

"You told half of Chandigarh that you couldn't find me" Maanvi said as she rolled her eyes!
"No Yaar I only Told Bhai than he just told me you were here" Virat explained until he stopped the car "wait a minute how did Bhai no where you were?" Asked confused Virat! "Hetold u where i was?" Maanvi asked.

"well not told but he said this is one of the places you liked to come to" Virat said shrugging his shoulders
Maanvi thought for a minute, "but only jeevika di knows i like to come here" she said, "in fact i've only been here with her before, no one else"

"oh that's weird" virat said but without reading into it, he started thinking about something else
he was getting attached to her, he had only known her for a day and he was getting attached to her, i shouldn't he thought, i can never stay with one girl for long and she doesn't deserve to be treated like that, neither does she look like the type that will be treated like that, he grinned, sherni kahi ki!

They had reached Maanvi house. She got out the jeep. "Thanks for the lift" "no prob"
As Maanvi was going he quickly called her "Maanvi" she turned around!
"Can i have your number" he said shaking a little, as he saw her face he quickly spoke, "no not in that way, its just in case we're in a situation like this, i mean"
Maanvi began to laugh as she saw his worried "Dont Worry I wont Eat U" she quickly recited her number which he put into his phone
"bye virat" maanvi said.
"Bye" and he watched her go, smiling, not getting attached to her, now that was going to be a hard one!

Hey Guyz That's All form Me Im am Damn Tired !
Note Guyz I Think Im Not Doing Really Good I Think I Should Dis-Continue Should i ???
Precap is the same as the 2nd precap on part 3 ;)

Edited by Madii786 - 12 years ago

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

nice and sweet update :)
Jeevika and viren sumthng fishy haan manvi's past kinda sounds scary..
Thanx alott for the pm :)

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Nice Update...! like Virat here he is such a sweet person he did not ask for explanations...Thnks for the PM~!

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_Shru_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

hey an awesome update as usual... virat is so understanding he didnt ask fr any explanations at all... nd i mgettin curious day by day 2 knw abt manvi's past... plzzz continue soon nd thnx fr da pm😊

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rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Nyc 1 virat is so understanding...cont soon

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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Wooow superbbb update...
Now m sooo curious to no manvis
past hope manvi had not mudered sum1
update soon..

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preetipc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Loved the update.So thereis some mystery past attached to Manvi. Virat wa so understanding.Love him so much.Loved Viren too.Waiting for the next update .Thanks for the pm and sorry fro commenting late.Thanks for the pm