Virman FF...- Secrets! Part 8a UPDATED PG18

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shilpa09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

hey madii... again a wonderful update from u!!!!!👏👏👏

i thought virman may get into fight in this chapter... but they became friends... lovely yaar!!!😉😆

i think virat is falling for her... would be interesting to read more about them in next chapters...😳😉

i was wondering... title of this ff is secrets.😛.. but i find no secrets around.😕..please madii... let me know those scerets soon.😉.. waiting for ur next update...:)😆

love u... thnx 4 pm:):):)🤗

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preetipc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Loved the update .Loved the way Manvi was not bothered much abt virat and Virat finding her interesting .Loved the whole update.Pls continue soon and pls pm me.Thanks for the pm

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

nice story...want manvi to be with more attitude..
Pls update soon and do pm me

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Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Sorry for being late
Its getting interesting
And i m loving it lol cont soon

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Sorry for commenting late..
Loved both parts..
It was awesome..
Loved manvi character..
It is getting really interesting..
Continue soon if possible..
Thank u so much for the pm.. 😊

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Madhiya

@HalkatJawaani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Hey Guyz Thanks For The Wonderful Comments
Sorry I Ahve Not Updated Bit not Feeling Well got An Ear infection Camt Go To Sleep
So I May Take Time To Update!

Shilpa U R Darn Right Tjere Is An Secret But for Now here is A Small Precap!

Precap:
Jeevika Stood At The Door Outside Maanvi Bedroon She Got To Her Room At 2:40am As She Did Everyday.

Maanvi- "Aahh Aahh, He Is Coming Someone Plz Help" Maanvi screamed.
Jeevika came running to her like she did before
"It's Ok Mannu Ur Di Is Here Nothing will Happen to U It's Okay He is Not Here" Jeevika said as she tried to put Maanvi back to sleep!

When will she stop screaming she can't stay like this all her life

There u go Guyz U Can Knoe Think Whole I Take Some Rest

Good Night Love U Xxx

Madhiya X

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Don't worry bout the update jus get better soon

really hope u feel a lot better as quick as possible

the pre cap seems really awesome

nw thats the secret part!!! update once u get better properly 😊

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preetipc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Please take care of ur health.We will wait.Once u r fully alright, then give us the update.Loved the precap.Pls take care of ur health.Take care

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shilpa09

@shilpa09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

take care of urself madii... u can update it afterwards..

oh... i was ri8 theres a sceret... i m jumping now... 😆please update as soon as u get well...

bye!!!!!!!!😊

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Madhiya

@HalkatJawaani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Hey Guyz Sorry I Haven't Been Updating But I'm Back Now With Part 3 So Enough Of My Bak Bak! ;)

Part 3
Maanvi Was Looking At the File Viren Had Handed Them.
Virat Couldn't Keep His Eyes Of Her She Was Quite Unusual From The Other 12 Girls, She Was Different From So many Angle He Could Notice it.
Suddenly Maanvi Looked Up As She Caught Virat Staring At Her "What" She Said To Him."Nothing" He Replied.
"Look, Mr Vadhera I Understand That All The Other Girls May Have Been Starin At U Non-Stop Nad U Giving Then Attention But I'm Not Them Type If Girls So Can U Plz Get On With TheWork As I Also Need Help From U" She Said In One breath!
"Oye Hoye Tu To Barri Sherni Hai" He Sai Grinning, " Shall I Tell u The Truth I'm Not Really Interested in
Them Type of Girls, Woh Toh Time Pass Hai" He Leaned Forward To her Chair. " Mujhe Toh Sherni Types Pasand Hai" He Sai An Went Of To Viren. "Bro I'm Takin A Break!"He Said And Went Off.
Maanvi Was Sill Trying To Understand What He Said" Sherni Yani Ki Mein And He Said He Likes..." A Small Smile Crept On Her Face.

"Maanvi" Viren Called, " Can U Come Over Here Plz"
Maanvi went up to him and sat down on the chair. " Look Maanvi I know Virat is kind of a flirtviraat is used to girls flying around him and then sticking to him like glue' viren said, 'you are the first after a long time, if not the first time ever, who has not given him a lift,' a smile creeping over his face as he said this, 'his ego seems confused if not hurt, but maanvi the best advice i can give you is stay away from Virat, my borther is not a bad guy but i know for a fact he can not stick to one girl, it is not in him to do so'..
"It's Ok Sir I Don't Like Guyz Anyway" She Said.
Viren Grinned And Said "Good oh yes call me viren" "Kyun Sir" She said lookin confused. "You'll find out very soon" he said " Okay That's Enough For Today Ill See U Tomorrow and U Will Have 2 visit ur first site with Virat" "Okay Sir" Saying That She Left!
As maanvi walked thorough the big front doors, she breathed in the fresh air and then looking up at the sky she smiled, life was going good..and then suddenly she sensed someone standing in front of her, she looked foward and saw Virat.

'kya hai, why are u looking at me" she said the smile not moving from her face
he edged closer which caused her to move back
'sometimes maanvi, everything you hear is not necessarily true' he said softly
'what, what are u talking about' she said although she fully knew"
'kuch nahi, see u tomorrow' and get ready its going to be just us and a horrific case' he said grinning
they stood staring at each other with the wind blowing softly around them, maanvi's hair flew around her face, seeing this Virat softly moved his hand across her face and pushed them behind her ear, causing her to flinch, his hand sent the a warm feeling through her body
she remembered the hands on her face two years ago, since then no guy has ever been allowed to touch her face.

'Dont touch me, mujhe haath mat lagao, i dont like it' she said quickly and moved back and started walking
Virat grinned as he watched her going.
"U May not Be That Type Of Girl, But Ur Defiantly My Type If Girl" Said Virat.
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Maanvi Entered her House she saw her di and hugged her.
" How was ur first day at work" Jeevika said with a huge smile on her face.
"Wait how do u know I got the job" Maanvi asked as she saw a small blush appearing on her di face.
"Well..umm.. I mean look at the time Mannu all that type u were at work" Jeevika said playing with the end of her dupatta.

'Hum Di is hiding something I gotta did out' she thought. "Achaa tha, It was good, Viren sir was very nice"
"And Virat" Jeevika asked!
Maanvi held jeevika's hand and made her sit on the bed, she then sat on the floor beside her and put her head in her sister's lap.
"I'm scared Di" Maanvi said as tears were dripping down her face.
"Scared of what Mannu"
"I'm scared of my past Di, what if anyone finds out"Maanvi cried.
Jeevika felt like someone had stabbed her heart out, she had tried so hard, so so hard to protect her baby sister from every kind of evil there was, until he had come into there lives.
Jeevika comforted her Lil sis "It's ok Mannvi no one knows us that's y we haves moved and left all the bad memories behind us" she said as she wiped of the last tear on Maanvi face.

After a while Jeevika fed Maanvi. " Maanvi" "hummm" "When I asked about Virat u did I go uncomfortable, did he misbehave with u" "No Di he is very nice"she said as she remembered the way he put her hair behind her ear, she had felt warmth, it had felt right but reminded her, reminded her of something she had been wanting to never remember!
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Maanvi got u and got ready the way she normally did.
She arrived outside the building and was just about to enter until she heard a car horn. She turned around and saw Virat.
"Come on let's go" he said.
"But lets ask viren"
He interrupted " No it's okay I got every detail the only thing I'm missing Is u" she was still hesitating
"Listen madam u haven't got scared have u, don't worry I won't bite"
She got into the car "I want to tell you something" "wat is it" he was getting worried!
"Virat I'm scared" She said.

Maanvi looked down at her knees uncomfortably, "This whole case thing i find it very uncomfortable' she said softly
virat peered at her intently, "Uncomfortable?" He Asked!
Maanvi looked up at him and saw the worried expression on his face which brought her back to reality, "no it doesn't matter, im just being stupid' she said shaking her head, what was she thinking, she had only met virat yesterday,and here she was all ready to open up to him, he who couldn't even keep hold of one girl for longer than ten minutes and who was nothing more to her than, her co-worker
there was one thing she couldn't deny though, she felt some kind of comfort that made her want to tell him eveyrthing

Virat looked at her as she once more looked down, he decided it was best not too push her, if she didn't want to say anything "dont worry, it can be a little nerve wrecking but trust me its not as bad as you think aur waise bhi main hoon na" Maanvi looked up surprised, that these comforting words were coming out of his mouth, " What happened I'm not only good at flirting" he said smirking, " I'm a very nice guy too you know" this brought an immediate smile on maanvi's face.
"oho Dont be that modest" she said, "Kisne kaha tum acche flirt hoh, tum cheap kisam ke flirt hoh, cheap lines and all" Maanvi said now grinning.
'oyye hoyee, ek minute mein innocent ladki se phir se sherni' he said, happy to have at least make her smile if nothing else, "flirting main kitni acchi karta hoon, woh toh tumne abhi dekha hi kaha hai" he said, pushing the accelerator down and started to drive. "Mere skills ke saath toh main kisi bhi ladki ko pata sakta hoon" and with that he brought a rose from his back seat.
"Oh really, these skills don't work on me I hate all guys" she said but she couldn't resist the rise so she took, this made him smile. "Who said i was going to try on u" this made Maanvi blush, "Don't even try u wont achieve anything" "Wanna bet" he said.
Maanvi once more became uncomfortable, she didn't know what to say
'hate all guys huh, well we're going to have to do something about that' virat said grinning cheesily at her.
Maanvi just gave a fake smile.

The had reached their destination.
Virat got out of the car n went over to Maanvi side and opened the car door for her. "Come"he said and slowly extended his hand, Maanvi looked up at him, but his face didn't show the slightest hint of cheekiness nor any kind of flirtatious looks, it was a genuine look of concern and he looked like he wanted to help, Maanvi hesitated, she was torn between giving her hand or telling him no.
as he slowly pulled his hand back, she quickly extended her's and gripped his in return he tightly squeezed it and smiled at her, "Maine kaha na dont worry im here, and this is only a murder case" at the word murder Maanvi shivered and quickly got out of the car and stood close next to him, still gripping his hand, virat was slightly surprised, something was wrong with her, he would have to find out what it was.

As they made there way to the front door, maanvi let go of virat's hand what would people think if they saw, that virat had already and successfully tried it on with her,
"You think alot about other people" virat suddenly said, as if reading into her thoughts, she looked up at him stunned, how did he manage to do that.
Before she could say anything in reply, a tear ridden old lady opened the front door "Aap"
Maanvi looked at her lost not knowing what to say,
'hum Vadhera group of companies se hai' virat said at once in a confident voice, 'mere bade bhai aapka case handle car rahe hai, hum ussi ki liye information collect karne aaye ha, taake case court ke liye ready hoh sake' he continued.

The lady finally lost the suspicious look on her face and nodded , inviting them in.
As virat asked the lady questions about her son and how she thought it was definitely his girlfriend who had committed the murder, Maanvi was lost in a world of her own, she let virat do all the talking and occasionally, wrote the important points in the file she was holding
Whilst joining the company, she knew that she was going to have to do all this, go around, ask questions and she had even mentally prepared herself for it all but now she was actually here, her heart was neither into it and neither was it agreeing.

"Maanvi maanvi"
"Huh" maani looked up and saw virat peeringat her intently.
"maine kaha chale' he said softly, '
"some people are coming here for the mourning ceremony of her son, so i said we'll be back tomorrow"
maanvi nodded and got up dazed, as they were leaving, the old lady suddenly said, "Mujhe pata hai ussi churail ne mere bete ko maara hai, yeh ladkiya hoti hi aisi hai, pehle usse apne pyaar mein phasa ke, mere ghar ki bahu ban gayi, aur phir uski property ke liye usse maar dala"
maanvi looked at the lady and suddenly anger rose in her, "shut up, just shut up, tumhe kya pata hum ladkiyon ke baare mein' she screamed, "kabhi kabhi halat logon ko aisi situations mein dal dete hai" and with that she ran out of the house crying...
virat stood stunned, he didn't know what to do, "I'm so sorry" he said to the lady and ran after Maanvi!

Hey Guyz I Really Hope That's A long Update! Plz Do Comment And Like.
If U Want Pm's Plz Add me As A Buddy Thanks!

Here Are 2 Precap U Guyz !

Precap 1
"Can i have your number" he said shaking a little, as he saw her face he quickly spoke, "no not in that way, its just in case we're in a situation like this, i mean"
Maanvi began to laugh as she saw his worried "Dont Worry I wont Eat U" she quickly recited her number which he put into his phone
"bye virat" maanvi said.
"Bye" and he watched her go, smiling, not getting attached to her, now that was going to be a hard one!

Precap 2
Jeevika came and stood outside her room near three pm, and as usual the screams began, she ran inside and held maanvi close, "sshhh mannu, shh, im here now, shhh"
"Voh voh mujhe" cried out in pain and jeevika's tears flowed silently as usual as she comforted her sister as best as she could, telling her it was going to be okay, although in her heart she knew it would take some miracle to make everything okay Jeevika stayed awake the rest of the night, comforting maanvi and persuading her to sleep!

How was that!?

Love Madhiya x

Edited by Madii786 - 12 years ago

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