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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 11

Guyzzz it would b filmy moment..All d rasme will b going on Virman romance in dis song..No1 is noticing..N please listen dis wiz d update

Aankhon Ki Gustakhiyaan Maaf Hon O Aankhon Ki Gustakhiyaan Maaf Hon virat singss...staring at manvii...Actual meh toh he was dreaming Ek Tuk Tumhein Dekhti Hain Jo Baat Kehna Chaahe Zubaan Tumse Vo Ye Kehti Hain Aankhon Ki Sharmohaya Maaf Ho Tumhein Dekhke Jhukti Hain Uthi Aankhein Jo Baat Na Keh Sakin Jhuki Aankhein Vo Kehti Hain

Aankhon Ki Manvi blushes ??Aankhon Ki Gustakhiyaan Maaf Hon Kaajal Ka Ek Til Tumhare Labhon Pe Laga Loon La la la.. Haan Chanda Aur Suraj Ki Nazron Se Tumko Bacha Loon Hmmm.. Oh Palkhon Ki Chilman Mein Aao Main Tumko Chhupa Loon Aa.. In dis moment...roka finished N all were dancing..Manvi was also wiz KC n viren wiz jeevika..Then he thought he was dancing lyk dis...N moves manvii...Glairing at her..Smiling n moving around her ??Khayaalon Ki Ye Shokhiyaan Maaf Hon Har Dam Tumhein Sochti Hain Jab Hosh Mein Hota Hai Jahan Madhosh Ye Krti Hain Aankhon Ki Sharmohaya Maaf Ho Ye Zindagi Aapki Hi Amaanat Rahegi Ay Hey Dil Mein Sada Aapki Hi Mohabbat Rahegi Ay Hey In Saanson Ko Aapki Hi Zaroorat Rahegi Is Dil Ki Naadaniyaan Maaf Hon Ye Mere Kahan Sunti Hain Ye Pal Pal Jo Hote Hain Bepal Sanam To sapne Naye Bunti Hain Aankhon Ki Aankhon Ki Gustakhiyaan Maaf Hon Sharmohaya Maaf Ho.n someone patted on virat's shoulder...Dat was shlok...Virat bhaiya..

Virat bhayiya..Kya hua aapko????V-h...hann...han bol shlok??Sh-bhaiya aapka phn. Baj ra h..bahug der se..V-ohh..acha thik h tu ja njoy kr..Virat goes to d balcony n attends d call. doc.-hello..is dis me virat vadera???V-jii..m hi hu virat aapkaun??

Doc-hi virat m doc avasthi..Asp miss manvii ko leker aaye the na mere pass..Maine ek doc. Recomend kra tha na..doc. Sharma...aditya Sharma..Actually do chandigarh meh hi h...then suddenly KC comes...Kc-virat yaha kya khade ho...Doc-Dekho virat...Hume manvii ki heeling jaldi se jaldi karani hogii..nahi toh vo negetive vibes

Uski soch ko capture kr legii..Aur vo uske liye bahut khatarnaak ho skti h...Even tak k..Uski brain ki nerves tak burst ho skti h..yaha tak ki vo Apne aap ko Marne ki b soch skti h..

doc-helloo..hello virat..V-dr m aapko baad meh call krta hu yaha awaz ni aah ri h...Ghar meh funtion chal ra h..sorryy..Doc-hello virat meri baat sunoo plzz..Virat cuts d phn. M moves to d dance floor..Doc inhis cabin-ohh god..Mujhse aaisi galti kaise ho skti h..Flashback..aftr Virman left his cabin..Sister comes to doc.Sister-siSi-dr..Yeh rahi MRI reports..Sorry..Dr-sistr...vo log toh chale gye .Koi baat nahi m reports study kr leta hu...another sister comes..An. Sis-dr..dr..Plzz jaldi aaeye ek emergency case h..Doc left those reports n left...Nxt day in aftrnoon..Doc. Came to d cabin..Dr-omgod lemmi study dis reports n tell virat Dr was stunned aftr checking d reports. Dr-oh my god.yeh kaise possible h..lemmi study again...Wot..In reports..Svollen nerves Hypertension Lake of blood..(guyzz I dnt know abt dis...so thoda darane k liye. Bt conclusion is-she is in very critical condition...dr-mujhe iske bare meh dr aditya se baat krni hogii..Calling bt he is nt picking Then calls virat..N flashback ends...*******All were dancingg..Suddenly manvii got severe pain in her head...She left from there..jeevika notices manvii going out...She was abt to go when aditya ask jeevikaAdi-jeevika di kaha ja re ho??J-adi..vo manvii..bahr gayi h..m usse leke ATI hu..Adi-di abhi aah jaegi tension mat lo..Now its abt 15 min. No sign of manvi in d funtion...Adi notices something unusual he went outside..N saw manvii lying on d floor..Adi-manviii !!!!!Manvii utho kya hua tumhe..By dis tym all d guest left..Only vadera's n chaudarys were there

Adi took manvii inside...Everyone shocked to see manvii unconcious Jevika-manvii..mannu kya hua teko?????manvii..Virat-adii kya hua manvii ko..Adi-ek min. Pehle manvi ko room meh le jate h..Adi lay manvii down on d bed..checking her temperature..Dat was normal..Adi to every1Dekhiye aap sab Bahr jayiye..Bas jeevika di andar rahengii..Every1 leftVirat-adi m b yahi rukunga..Adi-virat..Chalo thik h..M apna bag leke Ata hu..he brings his bag. N took sthetoscope..N checking manvii..Den he got a msg..he took out his phn. N saw 15 missed call of dr avasthi..N a mail..He called him back..Adi-helloo ji doc uncle..Kaise call kra???

doc-beta where were U ek bahut critical case h...Maine reports tumhe mail kr di h..Check them out..Adi-okay doc. Lemmi check..I LL call U later by...He cuts d call..N open d mail..N he was super shocked aftr studing d reports...dose reports were of manvii..n he was getting weak..Adi-ohj god..Manvii manvi ko yeh kya ho gya..I can't believe yeh manvi ki reports h..Yeh kaise possible h..N he came inside..manvi was now consious Adi-manvii...ur okay now...Kaisi tabiyat h tumharii..M-adii m fine now..Bas Sat meh thoda dard ho ra h...Hwww...maine Sara funtion kharab kr diya na..?????Kya yr mujhe dance kra tha..N made a puppy face..All three of them started laughing .Bt adi was in a huge tension..Adi-virat ek baat krni h plzz Bahr aah na yr. V-Kya hua ???Adi-aah toh yr..V-okayy..chal..Adi-virat..dekh jo baat m btane ja ra hu vo sunke tu shayad Apne aap ko sambhal na paye..Bt I hav to tell U ..V-kya..kya hua adii..manvii thik toh h na????Adi-dekh virat...mujhe dr avasthi neh manvii ki MRI reports mail kri h..n reports -ve h...V-what do U mean???Aur dr avashthi tujhe manvi ko reports kyon mail krenge..adi-kyonki m hi dr aditya Sharma hu jise dr avasthi neh manvi ki heeling k liye recommend kra h..V-kya????Bt manvi ko kuch ni hua..Uski sari reports normal aayi thi..Adi-virat dekh...manvi ko kuch ni hogaBt reports b toh galat ni h..N adi tells all stuff abt d reports to virat..N virat cnt balance him n hug adii..V-ad..adi plzzz meri manvi ko bacha le..kuch b krke manvi ko bacha le..Adi-virat sambhal Apne aap ko..Manvi ko kuch ni hoga..bas ek baat ka darr h..Virat-kya????

Adi-I mean heeling k tym aaisa b ho skta h manvii..thik ho jae bt agar uski sigh uspr havi ho gyi toh manvii kp bacha bahut mushkil h :(

Virat-adii tu yeh kya bol ra h..Manvi ko bacha e plzzz..Adi-virat..relax U jst relax..Okayy m manvii ko kuch ni hone dunga..m manvii ko thik kr dunga..Aur usse fir se normal krna hoga..Bt uske liye. Mujhe yeh check krna hoga k usse exactly hua kya h :/

V-adii jo krna h kar pr manvii ko bcha le..Usse jaldi se thik kr...Adi-sunn virat..Ek baat bta..Avinash se manvi ko tu dur leke aya..Iska matlab uski presence ka manvii k mind pr asar pada h..aur uski negetive vibs manvii k mind mrh h..aur vo manvii ko dhere dhere khatam b kr skta h..Like agar tu manvi k pass raha toh vo manvii ko dard dega..Tujhe manvii se door rwhna hoga..Aur vo manvii k mind se tabhi niklega jab manvi tujhse nafrat krne lagegii... Nahi toh vo manviii ko andar hi andar maar dega..

Virat-andar hi andar toot chuka tha...Bt V-crying Adi..m tayiyar hu..m manvi k liye apni jaan b de skta hu..

adi-dekh virat tu himmat mat haar..Manvi bilkul thik ho jaegi..Hume bas yeh check krna h..k real meh manvi ki second thinking avinash ki h..Agar yogi toh vo tujhe uske pass ni ane dega...virat tujhe bahut sambhal k rehna hoga...Chal m jeevika di ko Bahr leke jata hu...V-chal..Adi-jeevika di ek base Bahr Ana...Mujhe aapse baat krni...Vo actually...N he takesJeevika out..Virat goes to manvii...v-manvii U okayy..Tum bta nahi skti thi..M-m sorryy...Virat mujhe ek hug nahi kroge...Virat-awww !!N he hugs her...M-buried her face in her chest...N her arms on virat's neck...Suddenly that grip became tight...Virat was feeling uncomfortable..V-manvii kya hua?????She was scraching her nails on his neck..N she wisperes...Aah gye tum fir se manvi k pass...V-quickly seperates her from himself...N saw anger in her eyes...V-manvii kya hua tumhe n shakes her..N manvi-huhh..huhhh..kya hua virat..Tum vaha kyon chale gye...Virat mujhe kuch ajeeb sa lag ra h...Virat mere saath kuch ajeeb ho ra h...N started crying..Aaahhh...N holding her head...Virat mere sir meh bahut dard ho ra h...N crying badlyy..N listening her...Jeevika n adi enters...Both get up to d bed...N j make her lay on d bed...

Virat -left wid teary eyes

adi-left behind virat...Virat goes to his room..Adi comes..Adi-virat..yr..Tu bilkyl tension na le Sab thik ho jaega trust me..mera shak bilkul thik tha..Vo avinash ki hi vibes h..Virat Hume sabko yeh sab btana hoga Taki sab humara sath de ske..V-koi sath nahi dega..Adi-virat...Abh m jo b bolu tu dhyan se sunniyooI know isse manvii bahut hurt hogii..Bt m heeling tab tak nahi kr skta jab tak manvii avinash ko Apne aap pr havi hone degi..Hume uske mind se avinash ko mitana hoga..

Aur yeh tabi hoga jab tu manvi ko hurt krega kyonki..Avinash tujhe manvii se door rakhna chahta tha..Toh hum yahi krenge..Jab tak usse tassali nahi ho jati k tu manvi se door ho Chuka hTab tak vo manvii k dimag se nahi niklega..Viren entersadi-v..vi..viren jiju?????viren-ha adii..m Aur virat tune mujhe b nahi btaya..Matlab tu itna bada bojh Apne dil pe leke ghoom raha thaAbh m sab samajh gya hu...M tere saath hu..viren hugs virat..N virat broke down on his shoulderVir-bhaiii..m manvii se bahut pyar krta hu..M usse kho nahi sktaN crying crying crying...

Viren-virat tu bilkul tension na le...Bas abh yeh sigh manvii ko thik kaise kre..Adi-viratt..sunn..abh hum use matter se out..Aur tujhe sochna h..k aage kya kre..Virat -okayy..N both viren n adi left him..In d room..Virat remembering those days which he spend wiz manvii..Those fights..N a manviii's condition now...A tear falls from his eyes..V-manvii..i m sorry bt mujhe yeh krna hoga..Tumhe thik krne k liye...N he saw his phone ringing..Name flashing Maya...Virat pissed up was about to cut her call bt then an idea stuck his mind..V-Maya..maya meri help kr skti h..Bt vo nahi kregii..coz she hates manvii.Bt she doesn't love me too.She jst luv her Carriar nthng else..he picked up d call

V-hello Maya...How R U???M-hello my foot virat..Tum samajhte kya ho Apne aap koi..Tum mujhse breakup kaise kr Site ho..pechle 2 saal meh..

What d hell U think of yourself V-Maya listen..i need ur help..Maya-foe what???V-Maya..listen manvii...M-what the hell is dat problem is abt manvii..Oh please virat I dnt care abt her..V-Maya..nthng..I want U back..Plzzz I beg U I love U( wiz a heavy heart.)I dnt care abt manvii too..I jst want U..nthng else. Okayy..Maya-u really love me viratt..V-(wid teary eyes )Hmm...maya I love u..N thinking of manvii...N cuts d call..N he turns saw manvi wid teary eyes..loads of tears..V-m..ma..manvii...M-mere pass mat Ana virat...V-manvii listen tum galat samajh ri ho..M-kya galat samajh ri hu m virat..v-manvii..listen 1st u relax okayy..Ur not well..U should rest..M-dnt touch virat..Dnt touch me..Abh kya bacha h...Tumne toh bas mujhe use krna tha..What u think I m...M I a chiiiVirat m abh tumhari shakal b nahi dekhna chahtii..Manvi left running..N virat behind her..She shuts d door on his face.

adi comes to virat n both knocking manvi's door..Adi-virat tu abhi ja yaha se m manvi ko sambhalta hu..V-adi bt m kaise chala jau..Meri vajah se manvi ki yeh haalat Hui h...

Edited by vibhubebo3 - 12 years ago
Syed695 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome twist...~! waiting for the next...~!
kulsum_virman thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx alott for the veryy lng update .,its getting really interesting
Virman ankh micholi viren doubting New twist and maya bke
Its going to very interesting
Thanx alott for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey bebo this is an amazing ff
actually i read it on myduniya
please cont soon
and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's a awesme story... amazing 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haunted stories...are always in!!!!
It was spine chilling!!!👍🏼

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