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Aayushi Sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

awesome...update soon n pm me...

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sapphhire

@sapphhire

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

lovely. I can't wait to know jeevika's reaction at seeing manvi.

Edited by sapphhire - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

**** PART 8 😉 ****

virat bechara driving from last 3 hours.

..N reached Delhi..

.Both gone to sarojini ngr market.

.(manvi used to shop from sn wid Tanya when she was in college)
Guyzzz sn is my favorate place to shop..so used dat) :P
Virat-manvi utho hum Delhi bahuch gye.

.Came out of the car..

Manvi also came out..sn ????

?Virat tum mujhe sn lekr aae ho...

ohh god thanq so much Love U.

Virat'heart skips a beat when manvi says I Luv U.

.N virat maharaj apni duniya meh khoye hue Aankhe band

Dil pr hath rakh k bole..

.Virat-haye..:P

Mqnvi wiz a weird look..

.manvi-chalee...

Mujhe toh bahut sari shopping krni h...

Virat-ha chalo..

Both of them roaming in d market.

.N then shopping over..

2 bags in manvi's hand..

.n 6 bags in virat"s hand...

Virat-yr tum ladkiya itni si ho aur tum kuch zada hi itni si ho..

Miss ded fhuriya.

.Aur kapde joote inte sare..

.Hum boys ko Dekho 10 min meh shopping krke chalo bhai ho gya kaam.

.Manvi-virat.

.Maine sirf Apne liye thodi liya h...

Sabke liye liya h..Virat-acha ????

Toh mere liye kya liya???

?Manvi-oopsss kuch b nahi.

(again virat ka pachka

)Virat- making a sad face n moving towards d car..

.manvi-virat..

.Virat-hmm..abh kya h????

He turns n saw manvi standing very close to him n she gave a choti si cute si kissy to virat...

Manvi-kaisa laga gift..

.Virat (smiles)

N manvi blushes..

Virat-world best..:)

N suddenly manvi saw a gol gappe thela..

Manvi-virat rukkoo..

.ek Min..Bagss car meh rakho jaldi se..

Virat-manviii !

!Abh kya hua??

?Manvi-virat mujhe gol gappe khane h..

.Tumhe pata h...

Maine 2 Saal se gol gappe nahi khaye.

.Mujhe khane h abhi issi waqt..

.Virat-okay meri maa.

.Hey bhahwan use bandariya se bachooo

Manvi-kuch kaha tumne ????

Virat-naaa...

chaloo abh.

.Both ate gol gapppe n went to the car.

.n straight away moves to d doctor...

doctor-doc

both entered to d doctors clinic...

Virat to reception

Excuse me humne dr rasthana se aj 3 baje ki appointment Li h

..Recp- yes sir U may sit now.

.Abh sir ek patient ko dekh rahe h.

.Virat-okay thanq.

.Moves to manvi

-Virat-manvii..

chale.

.Manvi-holds virat's hand..

Manvi-virat doc injection toh nahi lagarnge na????

Virat-manviii dekho zarurat padhi toh laga denge..

Bt dnt worry when virat is here not to fear.

.both smiles N went to doc. Cabin.

.Virat-hello doc.

.Me virat vaderaa..

.Remember Maine aapse kuch din pehle ek case discuss Kara tha.

.Manvi k bare meh.

.Doc-yeah..maine case study kra..

Bt Hume manvi k kuch test Karane honge...

manvi-virat m ja ri hu..

Virat holds manvi's hand n make her sit again..

.doc-sister...Inke blood samples n x ray le lo.

.Manvi-doctor uncle...

Mujhe injection se bahut dare lagta h.

Plzzz zada dard mat krna..

Virat-manvi kuch nahi hoga..

Manvi-virat tum b chaloo mere saath.

.Virat-manvi tum chaloo m aah ra hu.

.Mqnvi-pakka???

Virat-pakka vala pakka..

Okayy U go I m coming...

Sister takes manvi N virat talking to doc..

Doc-dekho virat manvi abhi thik lag ri h bt Manvi k andar bahut sari neg.

Vibes ghum ri h ...

Jo use spirit k aas pass rehne se Hui h..

Tumhe usse ek kisi ache schycaterist

(guyzz I forgot spell so I m sorry)

Ko dikhana chahia n yeh neg vibes sirf healing k through manvi k body se niklengi

Virat-okay doc.Doc-mere frnd ka beta h...Doc aditya khanna..He will surely help U..

Yeh unka card h.

.n luckily vo abhi India meh h...

So U may go there.

.Virat-doc kuch serious baat toh nahi h na..

.Doc-nahi beta serious baat toh tab hoti jab manvi ko kuch ho jata toh...

She is fine..

Manvi-virattt..

.tum nahi aaye na...

she was fumming wid anger.

.Dr. Haahha manvi beta virat yahi h.

.Tum ek kaam kroo Bahr reception per baithoo m virat se kuch baat krke usse bhejta hu.

.Manci-virat tum Bahr ask Bahr nipati hu tumse.

..N she moves outside .

It was 1 hour aftr test...

Manvi was toking to d ward boys.

.N every1 entertaining her.
N inside doc cabin..

.Doc-virat..

.Dekho bilkul tension mat lo...

She is a brave gal...

That she Neva tried to die.

.N sister comes..

wid reports..

doc-yelo virat reports b aah gyi...

Agar go through reports doc smiles..

Doc-virat manvi is apsolutely fine..

Bas intestine meh thodi gadbad h..

I mean usse acha khana pani nahi mil paya so.

..bt she will b fine...

Medicines continue krni padengi.

.n she will b absolutely fine..

N she is a brave gal usne use spirit ko Apne upr havi nahi hone diya...

Virat take a deep breath..

Thanq doc..

Doc-virat mujhe manvi se kuch puchna h...

I mean uski body pe koi chot vagahra toh nahi h..

.Virat-offcource doc..

M abhi bulata hu..

.Virat takes manvi in..

n manvi sits on d chair beside doc..

.Doc-manvi tumhari body pe koi chot lagi h..

Manvi-jii doc..

N shows her marks on nails n some were very deep..

Doc touches dat Manvi-shhh.

.doc dard hota h...

Virat can't tollerate her pain n moves out of d cabin...

Doc-mqnvii m tumhe oientment likh deta hu..

N tum unhe pakka in ghav pr laga lena..

Manvi smiles n takes d prescription slip n move out..

Virat took manvi to d car both get settled in d car n moves...

Virat was nt speaking a single word...

Flashback scenes of clinic room..

.Manci's wounds coming into his minds..

.N he suddenly stops the car...

Manvi- (with a blank face)

Kya hua virat..

Gadi kyon rok di..

.virat-manci...

vo aaisa kaise kr skta h..

Uski himmat kaise Hui.

.Manvi-virat..relaxxx..

M thik hu

..N virat turns to her side he was crying..

(awww <3<3)

Mqnvi-virat.

.abh ro q re ho.

.Tumhe pta h ladke rote hue bilkul ache nahi lagte aur tum rote hue bilkul tomato lagte ho..

Aur roye toh bilkul langoor lagoge.

.Hhaah.

.Virat-acha.

.m langoor...

Miss bandariya.

.Hahaha..

Abh chale ghumne..

Manvi-nahii

..mujhe bhook lagi h abhi.

Kuch khana h.

Virat-manvii m tumhe yaha khilane nahi laya hu..

Hum ghumne aae h .

Aur tum bas thoosne lagi ho.

.Dekh lo agar tumhari yahi haalat rahi toh tumse acha m kisi buffalo se shadi kr lunga.

.Vo b tumse kal khati hogii..

Manvi-acha.

.aur tum.

.n punch him on his muscles

Lol :

P

manvi-aauchhh..-

insaan ho ya pathar..??

?Virat-hahha..

aur Maroo

Yahi hoga.

.Abh chale..

N first virat n manvi gone to eat something..

N then water park..

manvi-virat..thanqq.

.mera itna Mann tha waterpark ane ka..

Virat-kyon 2 saal se nahaiyi nahi kya..Hhahahha :P

Manvi gone red coz of anger..

Manvi-virattt..

Mujhe mujhe tumse baat hi ni krni..By...ja ri hu m..

:( :'(

N virat at d back..started singing

N both virman dancing on d song.

.N aftr dat both went to bangla sahib gurudware n then.

.Full on mastii in palika bazaar then..chandni chowk..

N aftr full on masti.

.Virat-manviii.

..Manvi-kya??

virat-Tumhare pass naye kapde h???

manvi-ha liye toh subah.

Pakao mat sone do.Virat•

manvii prso viren bhai n jeevika bhabhi ka roka h.

.Mamvi-wot?????

Aur tum mujhe abh bta re ho..

Virat tum kitne bade ghadhe ho...

ohh god mere pass toh kapde b nahi h.

.virat-chale shopping

.Manvi-aur kya chalo na.

.Virat-ohkayy..

Chaloo..Both gone to rajori.

..N virat took a kurta sherwani for him.

.(same dat virat wore in virika's roka..

•

Manvi shouting on virat..

.Virat m kya Lu. ???

virat-mujhe kya pta????

Yr tum ladkiya na ek no.

Ki..Aalsi hoti ho.

.Koi itna tym lgata h

.Mujhe Dekho..5 min meh dress pasand..

2 min meh RTry krke le Li.

.aur abhi tumhe pasand b nahi karii.

.Manvi-virat plzzz help kro na yr..

Virat-manvii vo red vala le lo

..Puri bandariya lagogii..

•

Manvi punches him on his chest..

.Virat-ouchhh..

.manvi.

.Acha sorry.

.Yeh purple n cream ka combo acha h..

Yeh bahut suit Karega Tumpr.

.Manvi-pakka

..Meri heroin :

PManvi smiles n gone to try d dress..

She came out she was looking super stunning..

Virat-oye hoye.

.koi toh rok lo..

N raises his eyes brows..

"perfect"

Manvi blushes Virat-hayeee..

meri sharmina tagore..

Manvi-pakka na..

Virat-ha chaloo abh isse pack kra lete h.

.Manvi-chaloothik h.

Dono neh dresses pack kra Li.

.n move to d car..

•

Manvi to virat.

.both reaches to d hotel..

Check in..

N goes to d room.

.Manvi goes to d bed.

.manvi-virat mujhe gana sunna h.

.Plzzz sunaoo na..

virat started singing a song !!

•

N virat took manvi's hand n both stated dancing...

N aftr that..Laughing badly

..N virat got a call..

N tell manvi to b quite Dat was viren

virat-hello bhaii..Kya haal chal h..

Viren-tu vo chod..

Tu kaha h..

Virat-bhaii m Delhi meh hu.

.Viren-Delhi????????????

Tu Delhi meh kya kr ra h..

Aur tu dobara shantivilla nahi jaega..

Shambhu kaka pta nahi kaha gayab ho gye h..

Virat-(remembers sk's words..N he handles d situation

.Virat-bhaii.

.shambhu kaka gao chale gye h.

.Unhone mujhe kaha tha.

n dnt worry m dobara vaha nahi jaunga.

.jis kaam se gya tha vo ho gya h..

Turned towards manvii.

.n both smiles.

.Viren-dekh virat mujhe Teri koi baat samajh nahi aah ri h.

.Tu bas kal ghar vapis aah

.Jeevika aur uski family aj riahikeah se aah gye h..

•

Virat-ohhh ho ho

..fir b tym mil gya.

.bhai ko call krne ka?????

Koi toh rok lo.

.vaise bhai m aapki hone vali BB UFF meri bhabhi ji n unki family k liye bahut bada surprise la ra hu.

.jisse vo log shock ho jaenge n aapka Roka rock ho jaega.

.Viren-oyeee...aaisa kya krne ja ra h tu mujhe bahut dare lag ra h..bhaii..

•

virat-dnt worry when virat is here not to fear.

Viren-bhaii aj tujhse hi dar lag ra h..

dekh agar kuch gadbad krne vala h.

.toh pehle hi bta de.

Badi maa aur dadaji ko maska lagane ka bahana lgana padega.

.bhaii...

•

Virat-dnt worry bhaii unko shock kuch tym baad lagega.

.Abh toh bas.

.Chalo chodo kal sham ko m surprise k saath pahuch jaunga.

Thik h.

..Chalo bye take care..

Viren-chal by.

.Virat cuts the call..

N turns to manvi she was already slept.

.Virat smiles at her innocent face n went to sleep..

Again manvi holds virat's hand.

.As she was scared of something Virat gave a small si cute si kissy on her forhead.

.N both fell asleep.

.In morning again virat wake up 1st N started waking manvi up.

.Virat-oyeee..

.Miss suttad miss aalsi utho Hume chandigarh k liye nikalna h..

Manvi-kya ??????

Okay uthri hu.

N both started getting ready..

•

N check out from d hotel.

.Manvi-virat...

I m so happyy

..aj m apni se sabse milungii.

.Thanqq thanqq thanqqq...I luv uhh.

.(n now virat...fir laddu phootne lage uske Mann meh.

.Virat stops d car..

.Manvi-aahhh..!!

Virat kya kr re ho????

Virat-koi toh rok lo.

.Manvi-abhi gadi chalaoo..

Virat-yr..manvi tum hamesha I luv uh unexpectedly Krti ho.

.No signal seedha dil pe pe vaaar krti ho.

.Manvi laughess.

.Virat tum kitne bade nautanki ho..

Hmm..

virat-gives d most killer look..

.Raises his eyebrows

Tum aage dekh k gadi chaaloge.

.Accident ho jaega.

.Virat -vaise ek baat bolu.

.Aj toh Maya ko b peche chod diya tumne.

.Manvi-kya matlab???

Virat-mera matlab h aj kafi hottt lag ri ho meri hott sherni.

.Manvi widen her eyes..

.Kya ????

Tumhe Maya Hot lagti thi????

Virat smikes.

.as manvi was getting too jealous

virat-aur kya ek vahi toh thii..Hot sexy ladki LSR meh

Baki sab toh behenji type thi..Kyon?????

Now it was limit virat called her behnjii.

.N now manvi's sherni avtar..

•

Manvi-virat gadi roko.

.Virat-kya???

Tumhe yaha jungle meh kya krna h???

Manvi-virat Maine kaha issi waqt gadi roko.

.Virat now tensed..

.vurat-manvii..M sorry sorryy...

Mazaak kr ra tha m yr..

Chill Maro

Manvi-virat gadi roko ni.

Toh m gadi se issi waqt kood jaungii..

Virat stops d car..

-manvii kya hua???

Manvi ignores virat...

came out of d car n start walking.

.Virat following her..Vurat-manvii

Yeh kya nautanki h.

.Hum late ho re h..Chaloo..

manvi-m nahi chalungij tumhare sath pair h mere m khud ghar chalk jaungii..

•

chali* jaungii

Huh..Tum jao apni super hot sexy Maya madam h pass.

.I dnt need any1

virat-(mad at her

)Manvi tumhe chalna h.

.m akhri baar puch ra hu..

Ha ya na.

.Manvi-kahi ni Jana mujhe tumhare sath..

.By m khud chalk jaungi.

.virat turns towards d car.

.N heard manvi's voice..

She fell.

.manvi-aahh..

Mera pair..(nautanki)

Virat-manviii..came running towards her.

.virat-manvi ur okay???

Manvi-kuch ni hua mujhe .

Trying to stand.

.N again fall..Lol :p

Bt virat catch her..

•

virat-madam kahaa??

chaloo abh..

Aur karo nautanki

He smiles..

N manvi turns her face

.Manvi-huhhh..

Virat-last option chalna h.

.Mamvi-nahii...

As she said nahii..Virat neh manvi ko utahaya..

virat-as ur wish..

Edited by vibhubebo3 - 12 years ago

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Its funny...but pure delhi ke shopping centers ki sair karva di

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Nice update...mixed emotions...it was funny at the same time quite emotional...Eager to see family's shockk...!

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

nice and sweeet update :-)
thanx alott for the pm :-)

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

i have reda this one... as i told u earlier... but every tym u pm me...i read it again...

it is that awesome u see... 😃

and this avinash... i just hate him...!!!!! 😡

today shopping wala update... lots more coming up... 😉

u know bcos of ur story i actually watched haunted... 😆

naina

Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago

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deepika03

@deepika03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

i hv read much ahead than this on myedunia r u gna update beyond wat u wrote there or ws dat da end?

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saemeen

@shabsem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Nice update. .eager to see manvi meeting her family...

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bebo

@Vibhu3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

PART 10

Virat puts mqnci on d front seat n put d seat belt

Both were quite all d way.

.Manvi was jst blushing..

Then virat said something..

.Virat-manvii dekhoo tum do saal baad sbse milogi tum kisi ko kuch b mat btana plzzz .

I beg U

..M kuch b kahani bna dunga bt tum meri ha meh ha milqna

..M nahi chahta k tumgare character per koi b ungli uthaye.

.M bol dunga k Maine tumhe Delhi meh dekha..

.Tumhare accident ki vajah se tumhati memory chali gyi thi.

.Bt now U R fine.

.M nahi chahta k vo log itne shubh time meh aaisi baatien soche.

So plzz Mqnvi-okay virat...

I will Both exchanged smile..

N aftr 30 min.

They reached vadera mantionVirat stops d car..

Virat-manvii tum yahi baitho m sabko Bahr leker Ata hu..

Jst w8..

.Virat went inside..

Vurat-bhaii..Maa

bua???

Dadaji..

Sabg log Bahr aayiye jeevika bhabhii..

Beejii..Dabbu sab Bahr aayiye

.Jeevika-virat kya hua???

aap sabko kyon bula re h..

.viren -oye hua chilla Kyon ra h..

Virat-ek min.bhaii

.bhabhii..aapke liye ek surprise h..

I mean bahut bada surprise..

.Aftr dat U will b really really shocked bt happy too..

Jeevika-shocked????

aaisa kya h virat????

Virat-pehle aapko apni aankho pr yeh Patti bandhni hogii.

. Jeevika-Patti..baat kya h virat??

Virat-shhh..bhabhi chaliye..aap sab b aayiye.

.All of them came out side...

N jeevika n viren came forward wiz virat.

.Then manvi comes out of d..

Car Manvi came forward n she had..

.Loads of tears in her eyes..

.N she touched jeevika's hand..

Jeevika-felt something unusual...

She got flashback of her n manvi's past.

.Suddenly she said..

Jeevika-(had tears)Vi...vi..virat. Yeh kaun h???

Yeh aaahsas meri man..ma..mannu ki yaad dila ra h...She suddenly removed d cloth n saw her heart her soul..

.Her 1 n only sister.manvii

.Manvi standing in front of her..

She was super shocked...

She didn't utter a single word .

Manvi-dii..

Jeevika-blank face..

She was remember dat day when d police brought a dead body n said its manvi..

N now manvi standing in front of every1..

.Manvi was in tears

bt jeevika had no expressions..

.All d moments coming to her mind.

.N suddenly she collapsed!

!Manvi-diii...(crying badly

)Diii plzz utho Dekho aapki mannu aah gyi h.

.Aapki manvi di aapki bodyguard aah gyii.

.Di plzzz uthooo..Di uthi na.

.Dadaji comes -viren beta..Jeevika ko andar leke chaloo..

M doctor ko phn krta hu...

Viren took jeevika in his hands..

.N put her on d bed...

All of them were there n jeevika's room.

.Then beeji n all rishikesh vale comes n hugs manvi.

.Beeji-beta tu kaha chali gyi thi.

.All cried n hug manvii..

N no manvi goes to badi beeji wiz a naughty face b still crying..

. Manvi-badi biMeri taraf Dekho na.

.Bb-huhh..mujhe iss chudail se koi baat nahi krni.

.Mamvi-aapne kya socha tha..

Abh toh manvi Marr gyii..

Apke sone k kangan Bach gye..

Hmm yahi socha tha na.

.Bb-(turns wiz tears in her eyes)

Kha chali gyi thi..mujhe chod k..

.Pta h tere bina toh meri jeene k chah hi khatam ho gyi thi..

.m toh yahi soch ri thi.

.kabh upar vala mujhe meri chudail k pass bulaega..

. Manvi hugs bb again..

.Abh khush.

.abh na m kahi ja ri hu na aap.

..Dono saath meh mil k beeji ki naak mehdam krenge.

.Both gigling.

.Doc comes wiz virat...

.Doc checkes jeevika

Doc-dekhiye ghabrane vali koi baat nahi h.

.Badhai ho yeh maa banne vali h

...Hahahha.

.laga na shockk.

.I thought abhi tak rona na shuru kr diya ho

..So thoda entertainment k liye bol diya

..Abj serious N

continue.

.Doc-dekhiye ghabrane vali koi baat nahi h...Yeh shock ki vajah se behosh ho gyi h...

Nthng else.

.Maine injection de diya h..

.Thodi der meh hosh aah jaega..

dnt worry...Abh m chalta hu.

.Virat-aayiye doc. Uncle m aapko Bahr tak chod deta hu.

.Doc smiles

N now

every1 left.

.manvi n jeevika.

.Every1 sitting in hall..

Virat comes

all were glairing him lyk he is a ghostt

.Viren comes-virat !! Tujhe manvi kaha mili.

.Virat-v o..vo..bhaii Delhi meh..

Actually 2 saal pehle manvi ka accident ho gya tha..Jab manvi khai meh giri toh car toh blast ho gyo bt manvi usse pehle h... Car se nikal gyi thi...N jab vo road pe chal k ja ri thi..You suddenly ek car neh usse Thok diya..N unn logo neh mqnvi ko apni car meh rakha aur doc. K pass le gye.. Manvi was in comma..Foe 1 n half year...vo log Delhi k the unhone manvi ko b Apne saath le liya Delhi meh..N jab manvi ko hosh aya toh usse kuch yaad nahi tha..Bt jab m last tym Delhi gya tha toh manvi neh mujhe pehchan liya tha.. Bt vo vo...vaho behosh ho gyi..So I thought vo mujhe janti hogii...So m dobara Delhi gya..n n n..manvi ko sab kuch yaad aah gya..Aur vo jo Delhi vale log the..Vo log toh US shift ho gye manvi ko b leke ja re the..bt end tym pe m vaha pahuch gya n manvi ko leker aah gya... Pheuuu...

Virat thinking (virat beta bahut Paap chadega...Inta bada jhoot ek hi Barr bol diya :(

Beeji comes n bless virat..

Beeji-virat beta.

..Tumhe aaj hamare ghar ki khushiya vapis Lauta dii..jeete rahoo..Tumhe bahut achi jeevansathi mile...

Virat talking to him self bt a little loud..

Beeji..chinunga b m hi..

kyonki manvi hi meri sab kuch h..

.Partner lyf partner sabh kuch...

Viren had a doubt so he thought he will clear dat to virat aftrwardss.

. Scene shift

Jeevika -mm..ma..ma..man.

.Manvi cuts-hh..ha..di m..manviii..Aoki manvii.

.Both hugged each other.

..N started crying...

Jevika-mannu tu kaha chalk gyii thi.

.Pr mujhe bhagwan pr vishwas tha.

..Bhahwan itna berem nahi ho skta.

.Thanqq bhagwani..

I m sorryy..

Abh se no kattii...

Manvi-diii abh aap rest kro.

.M sabhse milke ATI hu..

.Jeevika-nn..nhi mannu tu mere pass rukk

Manvi-di m ATI hu na..jeeju n unki family se mil k

Aap tension mat lo..M aapko abh kahi b chod k nahi jaungii..Jeevika pointing her finger Kabi nahi..Manvi-kabhi nahi di..Jeevika-kabhi bi nahi...Manvi-dii..kabhi b nahi..Both sis. Smiles..N hug each other .Now manvi moves to d main hall..Jeevika slept...Virat brings manvi down..Virat-manvi yeh hamare dadaji h..Manvi greets them..Manvi-namaste..dadaji..I mean...Dj-beta tum mujhe dadaji hi bulao..Behnji (beeji) manvi b jeevika ki tarah bahut pyari bchi h..Jeeti raho beta..Bahut khushi Hui k tum aaise shubh mahurat pr vapis aayi ho..N smiles..Virat-yeh hamari bua h...manvi-namaste buaji..Bua-hello manvi..NYC to meet U..Both smilesDen vanshika maa..Virat-manvi yeh meri maa h..Manvi-namaste aunty..Vm-namaste beta...n hugs her..Bahut Khushi Hui tumse mil kr..sach beeji aapki dono potiyan bahut pyari h..

Then...Virat-yeh h hamare ghar ki one n only madhuri dixit.Kc-hatt pare..manvi m hu virat aur viren ki chachii..manvi-namaste chachiji..Kc-oyee manvii..ji mat bula m toh abhi bahut young hu..Virat-(singing )Abhi toh m javaan hu..)Kc-hatt moya..Virat-haye haye chachi jaan..

which makes manvi smile..Virat-san ham ham..Manvii..tum Apne soon to b jeeju se toh mili hi nahi..Manvi-ha virat tumne main membr se toh milvaya hi nahi..Manvi-hello jeeju..Viren-hello manvi..NYC to meet U my soon to b sali sahiba..manvi-vaise jeeju..M chahti toh thi di k liye ek raj Kumar dhundu...Smart handsome Virat cutsOye madam toh tum kya kehna chahti ho..Mera bhai handsome nahi h..Manvi-shhh..yr virat tum itna chep panti kyon krte ho puri baat toh sunn liya karo.. Beech meh bhan bhan krna shuru kr dete ho..Acha toh jeeju..M kaha thi..Virat again cuts..Smart handsome..Manvi-shhh..Virattt (sweetly)Virat-jee manviji..(softly)Manvi-meri jooti ka no. Pta h??Virat confused Virat-nahii..M-toh dikhau..(being mad on him..)Virat-aayii..Bhai m khisakta hu..Nahi toh yeh bhooki sherni mujhe halal krke chodegii..Then shlokShlok-virat bhaiya..Lemmi correct U..Shernu khati h..Halal toh Kasai krta h..virat-ohhh.Bas kr gyan devta..All stated laughing on d kiddesh convo. Btwn 3 of them..Virat covers shlok's mouth..Abe ohh joote khane h kya chal yaha se...Now manvii..Pheuuu..Abh m apni baat continue kru????Viren nodded in yes. Manvi-vaise beeji ki pasnd toh meri pasand se b achi Nikli..winking to virat..N virat giving her a tumhe toh baad meh dekhta hu look to her.. Manvi-jeeju aapke roop meh di ko bahut acha life partner Mila..viren hugs manvii.. Then she meet all of them..N jeevika went down aftr 1 hour..Manvi-di aap neeche Kyo aah gyi doc. NEH aapko rest krne k liye bola h na.. Chalo..Jeevika-nahi mannu...M aj bahut khush hu. Tu vapis aah gyi meri zindgi mujhe mil gyi..

Manvi-jeeju dekh lo aapki competitor aah gyi..Hahah..KC to vm Bhabhii..manvi bilkul Apne virat jaisi.h na..Vm-haha !!sach kadambari..Pahut pyari bachi h...jaise ek damm se ek khusi si aah gyi ho use ghar meh..

Kc-haan..Virat comes to manvi..Teasing her..Virat-uhu uhu..shhh..manvi mujhe kuch baat krni h..Uhu uhu..Manvi-kya hua virat..Winksss..Khasi Hui kya????pani piyoge???

virat-tumhe toh btaunga m ruko tum..Wispering..viren jst smilesss..Thinking..kuch toh gadbad h..Virat manvi ko sirf Delhi meh Mila ya kuch..Virat se baat toh krni padegii boss..Kahi bhaii..meri sali sahiba koi hi set krne pe page hue ho????? Viren-v..virat..sunn na bhaiii..Yaha behnmilap toh kra diya..Abh bhaii milap k liye chal Zara tujhse kuch baat krni h..Bahut IMPORTANT h...Chal toh..Virat got dat...Virat-b...bh..bhaii yahi bolo na kya baat h..winked.Viren-achaa..Nahi nahi nahii..chal toh bhaii...

Viren dragged virat in his room..Viren-aur mere bhaii kya chal ra h?????NaughtylyVirat-kya bhaii..kaoso batien kr re ho..Kuch b ni chal ra???Viren-acha mere bhaiii..Aur Maine jo dekha..????Virat-kk..k.k...k...kya dekha..Viren-ohhh..na srk ki aatma ghus gyi kya???Kya kkk laga rakha..Virat-bhaii point pe aao na seedha ????Viren-dekh virat tu ek lawyer se kuch nahi chupa skta so mere bhaii.. bta kya chal ra h..Virat-bhaii aap iss baat ko rubber band ki tarh kheeechh kyon re ho.. baat kya btaoo..Viren-Bahr kya ho ra tha abhi????Virat confused -kya????Viren-meri saki sahiba se nain matka ra tha..aur puch ra h kya??/? Virat -bhaiii..plzzz..Asp na kuch ni kr re time barbad kr re ho..go..Bhabhii k saath tym spend kro...Virat about to go..Viren dragged him..Virat beta...mera bakra bana k banana ra h..Beta tu chahe kitna bada ho ja m hamesha tujhse bada hi rahunga..So bta na..

KC comes..Kc-our hour tum dono yaha ho...

KC comesKc-oye hoye tum dono yaha ho..Bahr sare tum dono kp dhund re h...aur viren tu aaithe kya kr ra h..Kal Tera Roka h aur tu yaha h..Chalooo..Viren-chachi ek min. Hum aah re h..Kc-chalooo..Yr..She dragged both of them..into d hall..dadaji:beheji..kal roke k liye b

Sari tayiyaria ho gyi h..hamne socha Roka sirf gharwalo ki maujidgi meh ho..

Aur pandiji se roke k baad shadi ki naareek b pakki kr denge.. Beeji-jii vadera sahb jaisi aapki marzi..beeji -manvi beta Roka kal sham ko h..Kal subah tere liye shopping b kar lenge..Manvi-nahi beeji uski zarurat nahi h..Virat neh mujhe dress dilva di..Virat (hiding his face)Yeh pakka fasaegii..Manvi kya bol ri hooo..ABeeji-virat beta iski kya zarurat thi..Virat-beeji..Abh manvi meri bhabhi ki behna h...Aur mere bhai ki sali b toh khatir toh krni padegii..Winks at manvi..Viren noticed that..Thinking..Beta virat..sabh samajh aah ra h mujhe abh..kabh tak chupaega..aj toh sari baten nikalva k hi rahunga..Lawyer jo thehra..N smikes at virat..Virat noticed dat n his smile faints..When he saw viren noticed him doing dat...Virat thinkingKaha jau yaha yeh manvi neh beda gark kra hua h..vaha bhai neh..Kaha jau..kisse madad mangu...Hey bhagwan bachale..kaha vakeelo k khandan meh paida kr diya...

viren was njoying virat's conditin..Viren-virat !!Tu phn pe ek aur surprise ki baat kr ra tha na..Kaunsa surprise..Virat glares manvi n manvi to him

Virat-KKK..kuch nahi bhai. Vo..voo m bas..Mujhe nayi album ka offer aya h...Forget dat. Viren-are aaise kaise chod de ..Yeh toh khushi ki baat h. Vm-ha virat beta..Every 1 congrats him...dj-chalia abh hum sone jate h...Virat viren tum Chaudary pariwar ko guest house tak chod aao..Vv bro-jii dadji..Virat goes to manvi -do apna bag...M pkad leta hu. Manvi-(loudly) Nahi viratji aapne meri itni madad ki h...Aapse aaur madad kaise le skti hu..Aakhir mere didi k soon to b devar h...Virat-(raising his eyebrow)Ohhh !!!Manvi(wispers)-jada nautanki mat kroo..kisi ko hamare bare meh shak ho jaega...Viren comes -uhu uhu !!Virat chal na kya manvi ko pareshan kr ra h. .Manvi koi baat nahi uthane do uthana chahta h toh..N both left to drop them to d guest house...Virat msgs manvii..Kal subah 10 bje be ready doc k pass Jana h..N kisi ko kuch mat btana..Okk..tc luv uhh

manvi-(reading d msg)Smiling..

Ws jst gng to reply..Jeevika-mannu..phn chod na..Chal mere saath..Manvi-di ek min..aayi..J takes her phn..Mannu..chal abh m kuch no sunungii..

both sister talks alot..N then sleeps..virat in his room..-yr ye manvi yaha aah k kitni change ho gyi ek dum se..Rply tak nahi kra Manvi beta tum agar itne nakhre dikha skti ho toh m b virat vadera hu... Koi kacca khiladi nahi hu..Abh aayega Maza aur manvi beta abh tum asli virat vadera se milogii.. Hahhha n he also slept .In mrng...All Chaudarys arrived vadera mansion..manvi searching virat...M-yr abh yeh virat kaha Gya kal raat ko rply nahi kra..Kya karega abh vo mera haal..BhagwN bachaoo..

Pc-hayo rabba beeji..Ghar kinna sona Sajaya h na..Bilkul taj mahal lag ra h...manvi-aap toh aaise bol re ho jaise jaise chachu aapko honeymoon pe taj mahal dikhane leke gye the.. Dabbu-mummyyy..aap mujhe Apne honeymoon pe kyon ni leke gye...Maine b taj mahal dekhna h..Pc-ohh..ohh beta vo vo..

Manvi wispers

Abhe dabbe vo dono honeymoon pe gyw the tabhi tu aya na..Samja kr na..

Pc-kyaa????Manvi-kuch nahi chachii..

Aayi jeevika diiPc-pta ni aaj kl k bacho ko kya ho gya h...

Manvi-Bach gyii..Pheuuu..N goes to virenm-jeeju..Aapne virat ko dekha h???Viren-veVirat-vrVe-virat !!Nahi virat ko toh nahi dekha kyon kya hua????

m-nahii !!Kuch ni jeeju bas aise hi..M dekhti hu..Okay bye N searching virat...Virat was there in hall..Vr-ha bhaiya..Vo lights. Yaha laga do..N bhai bhabhi ki entrence pe lights unpe honi chahia..N vo vala parda yaha lagaoo...M- (from d back)Virat..kuch help Karu..Viirat ignoring her. Ha bhaiya yaha pe red curtain n vaha pe white..M zara maharaj se milke Ata hu..virat was ignoring manvi purposely..Manvi-virat...Virat sunoo..Important kaam h kuch...Virat...suno toh..Virat-manvii..M kaam kr ra hu..Plz dnt disturb me..Manvi shocked..Kya??????Virat m b important baat krne aayi hu...Virat-plzzz manvi mere pass tym nahi tumhari faltu batien sunne ka... Manvi-kya???Abh tumhe meri batein bakwas lag ri h..kal raat ko toh bada I luv U bol re the..Virat-kyonki tumhe meri batien bakwas lagti h..

Manvi-what????Virat mujhe kuch samajh nahi aah ra tum Kya bol re ho..Vr-acha????Abh tumhe samajh ni aah ra???Msg padha aur rply krna tumhe yaad ni rrhta kuch Dino meh to mujhe b bhul jaogii..tum ryt.. Manvi-virat !!Plzz bahut ho gya bas kroo..

Virat-ryt !! Manvi bahut ho gya..M tumse baat hi kyon kr ra h..By..Buzz off.Virat left..m-(wid teary eyes)Virat..vo m jeevika di se baat kr ri thi..Viren was listening to everything..Viren comes..Ve-manvi !!Kya hua to kyon ri ho..Manvi turns. Wiping her tears..M-k..kuch Ni jeeju..Ve-acha???virat neh kuch kaha????M-na..nahi jeeju..Ve-acha??Jeeju se jhoot..Chalo mere saath..viren takes her

Viren takes manvii..Continue..Ve- (he wispers d plan in manvi's ear..)Manvi-pr jeeju aap meri itni help Kyo kr Re ho..???Ve-manvi !!Tum kisi se b jhoot bol skte ho pr ek lawyer se nahi..Manvi-jeeju aapko virat neh btaya????Ve-manvijii..Aaasi baatien btayi ni jati..Saamne aah hi jati h..Abh chalo chalooReady ho jao..Kuch hi der meh guest aane start ho jaenge..manvi-aye haye jeeju..badi jaldii h roke ki ..Kahi ni bhag ri diiHahha

Manvi goes to jeevika-Dii..Aapne abhi tak lehenga nahi pehna Kya di jaldi ready ho jao na..funtion kuch hi der meh start hone vala h..Jeevika-mannu !!M chahti toh thi k unn logo se milu jinhone neh tujhe 2 saal Apne pass rakha Teri dekhbhal kri.. Bahut sanskari log honge...Jo meri mannu itni samakhdaar ho gyi h..Manvi (thinking of her past 2 years)dii..haalat insaan ko chuti meh basal skte h.. Jeevika-kya???M-d...dii..aapka Roka shuru hone vaala h..aur aap abhi tak ready nahi hue. j-acha mannu apni dress toh dikha...M (thinking of virat)Ek min. Di abhi layii..Manvi brings d bag...J-waooo...mannu yeh toh bahut pyara h..NYC combo..Teri pasand toh bahut achi h..M-dii yeh toh vi...ohhh..Di chalo na ready ho jatw h ..They both get ready..

Both were looking damm awsm...Manvi brings jeevika down..Viren was looking at jeevika..Both had a cute eye lock..virat was standing wiz viren..Manvi comes to viren..M-helloo jeeju..Ve-helloo sahi sahiba..U R looking cute..Virat was facing his back towards manvii..He hasn't seen manvii.Yet..V (thinking)Yr Mann toh bahaut kr ra h...Bt kya kru..Dekhu ya nahi..Virat turns..To viren n saw manvii..N smick when he saw manvi was wearing d same dress choosen by virat.. Vr-looking at mamvii..Bhaii chaloo apka Roka h aj..Ve-(teasing virat)Rukk ja mere bhaii..Thodi der apni adhi hone vali ghar wali ghar wali se baat toh krne de..

Vr-kya????Kaun?? (confused)Manvi was enjoying virat's possesiveness..Ve-are manvii..Sali meri adhi ghar wali..Vr-bhaiii !!!ChaloooThen DJDj called every1Dj-aj hum viren aur jeevika ka Roka krne ja re h..Iss rasam k baad..Viren beta tumhari azadi k Dinn khatam..Hahah Every1 laughed..Virika blushing Abhi roke ki rasam meh samay h..Toh kuch fans bajana toh hona chahia..Roka itna rukha sukha kyon h???Then suddenly lights closed...A spot light on a girl..Every1 towards her..N dat was manvii

N manvi started dancing..

Gopiyon sang ghoome KanhaiyaRaas rachaiya Ragha na jaaye reAbb saanwra na bhaaye

N virat turns towards d stop light now..

Radha on the dance floorRadha likes to partyRadha likes to move that sexy Radha body (x2)Every1 started clapping.N cheering her..

Panghat pe aake saiyyan marode baiyaanAnd everybody crazy on RadhaChhedde hai humka daiyaan bairi KanhaiyaAnd everybody crazy on RadhaHoga woh lakhon dil ka chorHumka toh laage woh Hua hai aise baawla jo kehta jaaye:n comes to virat n keep hitting him on his shoulder..N then comes to viren..N then suddenly manvi saw her best frnd aditya Sharma from USA N he started singing..n dancing wiz manvii.."O Radha teri ChunriO Radha tera JhallaO Radha teri natkhat najariyaO Radha tera jhumkaO Radha tera thumkaO peechhe peechhe saari nagariya" (x2)n then manvii..singssRadha on the dance floorRadha likes to partyRadha likes to move that sexy Radha body (x2)

O o...N keeping glairing at virat..who WAs super jealous wid adityas arrival.. Maathe pe pankh moreKehte hain makhan-chorBajaye bansuriBada aaya chitt-chor(But Radha wants more)Dhoondungi charon aur milega koi aurDungi main haathon me mere dil ki ye dor(Cuz Radha wants more)

N den viren pushes virat towards d stage in virat goes towards...manvi n make her dance wid him.. O Radha Radha bholi deewani haiO Radha Radha do pal jawani haiO Radha ko sambhalo koi isey bata doKi milega na koi SanwariyaN pushes manvi..n then both aditya n virat started dancing..Manvi jst thinks..O Radha teri ChunriO Radha tera JhallaO Radha teri natkhat najariyaO Radha tera jhumkaO Radha tera thumkaO peechhe peechhe saari nagariyan then virat started dancing alone..Glairing at manvii..N saw Maya coming from d main gate..N started walking towards both manvi n viren smiling...Hey Radha Radha kaahe itna guroor bhalaChhodo bhi nakhre ye kaisi adaTune kya socha ek tu hi mash.hoor yahaan

N moves towards n maya was jst shocked n virat took maya's hand n pull her towards n then sings dis laakhon hain Gopiyan bhi humpe fida

N then moves towards manvi then hitting her by his shoulder..Ho saari hi duniya ye naari hai Shuru humse teri kahaani hain then manvi moves towards aditya glairing at virat..n then singingO rehne de re KanhaBhoolega tu sataanaJo girungi main ban ke Bijurian then both aditya n viratO Radha teri ChunriO Radha tera JhallaO Radha teri natkhat najariyaO Radha tera jhumkaO Radha tera thumkaO peechhe peechhe saari nagariyan manvi n Maya...Radha on the dance floorRadha likes to partyRadha likes to move that sexy Radha body (x2)

O panghat pe aake saiyyan marode baiyaanAnd everybody crazy on RadhaChhedde hai humka daiyaan bairi KanhaiyaAnd everybody crazy on RadhaHoga woh lakhon dil ka chorHumka toh laage woh Hua hai aise baawla jo kehta jaaye:

"O Radha teri ChunriO Radha tera JhallaO Radha teri natkhat najariyaO Radha tera jhumkaO Radha tera thumkaO peechhe peechhe saari nagariya" (x2)

Radha on the dance floorRadha likes to partyRadha likes to move that sexy Radha body (x2)

N Maya coming closer to virat..Manvi moves towards aditya...N hugged her..N both were laughing lyk hell..Virat glaring at manvii..N aditya wiz manvi moves to virat..

(guys lemmi tell U who is aditya...Aditya Sharma..he was in Virman's college...now he is a physcterist in USA N came to India to attend jeevika's Roka n marriage He is a good frnd of virat also..So it means a common frnd of virat AlsoN he is d same phycaterist who dat doctor prescribed virat for manvii...

Virat was too much jealous of aditya...As manvi was playing wid him...Laughing..Maya was such a chepShe coming closer to virat..Everytime..N virat took her out of d hall..V-Dekho Maya...Now plzz ley out of my lyk..I dnt love U..Okayy .Mujhe sab pta lag gya h .What U hav done wid manvii..N plzzz jst buzz offN left Maya stunned there..Manvi to aditya..Adii..Tum yaha??Adi-ohh..so abh mere yaha hone se b problm..Aur Maine sunna tum aur virat Teasing her...M-haanBt..Adi-bt what????M-aadii..yaha bahut shor ho ra h..Lets move outside...Adi-okayy..Lets go. Manvi n adi outside..adi-so madam..abh btaooVirat kaise???I mean college meh toh tum usse baat krne se b sharmati thiii...n manvi tells everything..N start crying..Adi-what???

Avinash neh..I mean vo aaisa kaise kr skta h..bt thank god U R okayy..So ghar meh sabko pta chal gya???M-nahii yr abhi toh kuch b pta ni chala..I mean abh di k shadi k baad sochenge..Bt I dnt know virat ko kya ho gya h...N suddenly virat came there..n stops hearing his name..N hide behind d door. Manvi crying..

continueee...

Continue..Manvi crying..M-adii..tum toh sab jante ho na..K college k dinoo se hi m virat se kitna pyar krti hu..Tum Tanya aur Arav kitna chidhaya krte the mujhe..Aur vo sare songs jo Maine virat k liye likhe the..Avinash ko yeh sang pta chal gya tha k m virat se pyar krti hu..Tumhe yaad h college annual funtion meh usne mujhe propose kra tha..Aur Maine usse mana kr diya tha..Adi-ha..aur uske kuch Dino baad vo tumse sorry Bolne aya tha..Aur tumse frndship karna chahta tha..M-dostii..usse toh sirf mera bharosa jeetna tha taki m uspe vishwas key aur vo use vishwas ka fayda utha kr sake...Adi virat ko kuch b nahi pta..jitna tum jante ho mere bare meh..M virat ko kaise ignore kr skti hu..I luv himm..M aj tak zinda thi toh sirf uske liye jo pyar tha mere dil meh uski wazah se...nahi toh jo avinash neh mere saath kiya uske baad toh mera iss duniya meh rehna hi mushkil ho gya tha..Pr aj m zinda hu toh sirf virat k pyar ki wajah se...I know vo mujhse naaraz h ha galti meri thi..Bt vo iss baat ko kyon nahi samajhta k..Meri lyk meh meri di ki jagah koi nahi le Sakta. kal raat ko m puri raat di k saath thi..M usse rply krne hi vali thi..Bt di neh meri hath se phn le liya..M kya krti..fir m unse baat krne meh itni mast ho gyi k kab land aah gyi pta hi ni chala..Bt thanxx adi tu aah gye Tumse baat krke mera dil halka ho gya..Adi-ohh..manvii..kaise baat kr ri hooAur vaise b virat ni mana toh m hu na..Maa b kah ri thiKoi achi si ladki pasand kr le...Aur hamari Jodi kaisi hogii .Tu pagal aur m Paglo ka doc.Both started laughing..Virat who was standing behind d gate..Came out. V-manvii !!!!Both manvi n adi turns..M sorry. His head was down n glaring at manvi wiz teary eyes ..V-manvi I m sorryy Adi-I think I should go now..Manvi-adi kaha ja re ho????Bt he was gone..V-manvii..plzz I m sorry..Manvi moves her back towards himWipping her tears..Virat plzz abhi neeche chaloo funtion start hone wala h ..Manvi was abt to go...Bt virat held his hand..Manvi-virat plzz mera hath chodoVirat come closer her..N now virat's half naked chest was touching manvi's back...N he turns manvi hand behind her back..N put his chin on her shoulder. N wisper "I m sorry" in her ears..She closes her eyes...N virat kisses her ear...??manvi had jst closed her eyes more tightly..Virat brings his hand forward n held her waist..A shiver comes to manvii..N she turns n hug virat tightly..she was breathing heavily..N virat can feel her breath on his neck..She rubs her nose on virat's neck..N virat seperates her..he brought his facr near her..manvi was standing still..With closed eyes...Lips shivering..Virat first touches his nose to hers..N again held her by her waist...N kissed her...Manvi standing still..N virat moving his hand from her waist to her back..Manvi clucking virat's shervanii..N virat suddenly untie manvii is doriii from d back...Manvi realises what she was doing..she sepertaes herself N moves her back towards virat...M-v..vi..virat yeh kya kr re ho tum????Virat comes near her...N tying her doriN everytimes her touches her bare back...M-ahhh..n closes her eyes...N then manvii blushed hard..N ran downstairs Virat WAs jst staring at her...

virat keep staring at manvii..N manvi was steeling eye contact...Awww ???N the background music...Is one of my favourate songs..Its a song of Salman n aiswarya

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