VirMan SS/ The journey/ Part 8-Pg 16

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THE JOURNEY


PART ONE

She ran in the wrong direction due to her haste. "Manvi it is this side" pulled Jeevika making her run in the airport.

"Passport" asked the same voice that always pulled her when she went in a wrong direction.

"Yep, I have" she replied checking her bag if she had taken all her things.

"Virat I told you- was it that important for you to have a date when you're in a hurry" asked a hyper Viren checking his watch and literally running. The other guy smirked looking at his own watch.

"Somethings cannot be explained; they are worth feeling yourself" he replied hurrying up before hitting a girl opposite to him who was in a equal hurry.

"Ouch" she rubbed her forehead vigorously because of stumbling over a guy in her haste. Oh god, I'm already late, and here comes another douche", she pulled her bag that was sliding away from her shoulder.

"Jab chalti ho na to ghanti baja diya karo" adviced the guy angrily.

"Kyun" asked the same girl still rubbing her forehead.

"Pata to chalega ki ek andhi ladki aa rahi hai", she frowned looking at the guy. "You.., she came near his face just an inch away. "Yes me" replied the guy smirking. She fell short of words looking into his eyes wondering what to say. Argh, shoot me! Why does my brain stops working when I need it the most?

"Don't feel embarrassed. I have this kind of effect on girls which makes them tongue-tied" he replied making his warm breath touch her face.

"We are getting late, c'mon" Jeevika pulled Manvi to the boarding place. She glared at him. Avoiding those honey orbs she moved forward coming still closer to his face. "Consider it as your lucky day because I'm in a hurry to leave or I would have made you regret commenting on me" she gave one last glare to him before walking away with Jeevika. "I would love to feel that way" he spoke loud enough for her to hear. What a jerk!

Manvi hugged Jeevika before getting into the plane. She was greeted by an extremely good-looking air hostess at the entrance of the plane. She rolled her eyes looking at her. She checked her seat before sitting down taking a sigh of relief.

"You" she shrieked looking at the same guy she had stumbled over. Oh god! Am I supposed to bear this nuisance for two hours" she rolled her eyes looking at him.

"Exactly my point" he said faking sadness. How did he get that what I was thinking? She sat carefully not being too close to him. As the announcements were made, passengers started putting their seat belts. She looked bored out of her wits. She turned to face him trying to start a conversation.

"Erm...so where are you going"? She asked adjusting herself in the seat. He looked at her surprised.

"I'm planning to jump off in the middle of the sea" he whispered as if it were a secret winking at her. She looked flabbergasted at him, trying to make sense of what he said.

"What" she asked bulging her eyes. He smirked looking at her. "This plane is upto Goa, so obliviously I'll go there" he said relaxedly leaning on to his seat. See the audacity of this man!

"Can I have your name?" he asked becoming curious.

"Why?Don't you already have one" she replied sarcastically taking a book out of her bag.

What a snag! He murmured in himself leaning to the other side.

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Tell me if I should continue, if at all you find it interesting.

Part Two https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/73948599

Part Three https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/3390658/virman-ss-the-journey-part-8-pg-16?pn=5

Part Four https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/3390658/virman-ss-the-journey-part-8-pg-16?pn=7

Part Five https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/75157459

Part Six https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/3390658/virman-ss-the-journey-part-8-pg-16?pn=11

Part Seven https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/3390658/virman-ss-the-journey-part-8-pg-16?pn=14

Part Eight https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/3390658/virman-ss-the-journey-part-8-pg-16

Part Nine https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/3390658/virman-ss-the-journey-part-8-pg-16


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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOWW... I AM THE FIRST ONE TO COMMENT...!!!!! 😃
HEY IT IS NICE...
TO BE HONEST I LOVED IT YAAR... 😃 😃
THE DIALOGUES ARE SO VIRMANISH...
DO CONTINUE SOON N THANKS FOR THE PM...
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Loved the start
Excited to read the next part
Continue soon
And thanks for the pm!!!
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Hey its so good!! U shud continue n thnxx 4 the pm
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Wonderful start... And why wouldn't I be interested in something which is written by you? I'm kind of planning to demand for pm's on the future updates too...😳 😊

Thank you so much for letting me know... And do pm me in the future too..
Take care 😊
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Loved it so much.It was all Virmanish all the way.Loved their meeting and their conversations between both.Now they will be spending their flight time with each other. pls continue and pls pm me wen u update😊
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That was Awesome!!!!!! 👏I just Love their nok jhoks like anything which is present in plenty in the story...😃... Loved it a lot...The way Manvi and Virat were talking and fighting with each other was just hilarious...😆... Please do continue with this as soon as you can and thanks a lot for the pm...😊
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dont ask, continue only😃
great start, but pleasee write in english so that i can understand everythink..


thanks for pm
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yes u should cntinue it its fab
thanx fr pm
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wow !! It is just superb !! Loved it !! Do continue nd please pm me 😳

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