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Posted: 12 years ago

brilliantly written...those flashback scene was awesome

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vishwa patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

brilliant update

so emotional n heart wrenching

very well written...so feel jeevika's pain n trauma she went through

the ending couldn't have been better

thanx for pm...n thanx for writing such an amazing Os...loved each update

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Aashima

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Posted: 12 years ago

Those flash back was just awww. Loved it so much. And sorry coz i rarely reply on your post :(

Loved it so much.

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Madhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you for such a brilliant update. It was so emotional and painful. The flash back was amazing. Love it to the cor. Thanks a ton for the pm!

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--Iqra--

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Posted: 12 years ago

Very well done! Good job! Thanks for the PM!

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Aaliya

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Posted: 12 years ago

so emotional...😭

loved it

cont soon

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Surbhi Jain

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Posted: 12 years ago

it ws damn good n 2 emotional

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Shicksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

so sad jeevs went so much of pain :(

but viren is always there to make her happy :)

awesome update

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urmil

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Posted: 12 years ago

brilliant...kudos to you...flashback scenes were heart wrenching...actually giving me goose bumps...thnx for pm dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Iqra--
Very well done! Good job! Thanks for the PM!

Your welcome and thank for reading the entire Os as I have updated 😛

Originally posted by: krystu05
so emotional...😭
loved it
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I most likely will not continue it. It ends here. All the parts come together this was just to fill in those initial blanks. Yet I thank you for your comments

Originally posted by: surbhi1994
it ws damn good n 2 emotional
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Thanks, I just hope it wasn't too much

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