Virman SS: Her all time Saviour Part 2 at pg- 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start.. Plz cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start... Plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey...new ss...sounds interesting...part 1 is good...i like this ss's title...continue soon...and take care..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the lovely comments...I will surely continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Guys, thanks for ur valuable comments it means a lot to me... i'm going to update a 2nd part of my story , hope u all will like it ...
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Part-2

Maanvi reluctantly opened her eyes and winced at the exploding ache in her skull...swallowing a moan, she brought her fingers to her forehead to find it damp.

Blood

She had knocked her head on the steering wheel when she lost control of her car. She tried to start the car...but the engine made a strange sound. She was struck in the middle of the snow storm with a dead cell phone. Now what? She couldn't stay in her car, if she could she will surely freeze to death. She thought she could walk back to her office, it isn't that far away.
Unwillingly, she left her car and stepped out. A cold wind passes trough her body and her whole body frozes...but she kept on walking in this cold wind...

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On the other hand, virat was in deep thoughts when suddenly his chain of thougts break when he saw a car hit a tree. He brought his jeep to halt and came out of jeep to inspect the car. There he found the doors of the car unlocked and when he opened the door he found the car empty and saw the blood on the steering wheel. The accident must have happened a while ago, he thought. Then he watches here and there and found a purse and a phone and when he checks the purse, he got the biggest shock of his life. It was his maanvi, his wife who was in this car and when he saw the blood on steering wheel his heart winced in pain. His whole world came to an end thinking that if something had happened to maanvi how he could live without her. Suddenly, tears start flowing from his eyes. He thought where she would have gone in this biting wind, why can't she stay in her car until someone came for her help...is she mad?

Struggling to keep the dread quiet, he got back in his jeep and follow the white path ahead. He couldn't find her footsteps because of the heavy snowfall but then also he kept on scanning the whole for her like mads. He prayed to god she had enough sense to stay out in the open where he could find her easily. If she had went towards the forest, there was no way in the hell that he could find her especially at night.
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After walking too much in this chilled snow, her legs stop working. She couldn't take another step, her whole body lost all feeling. She need to sit down. She sit between two trees and started rubbing her arms, her legs. Her eyelids dropped...but she had to stay awake and keep moving...but it was so cold and she was too tired...but she know if she closed her eyes...she would not be able to open them again...She thougt she can close her eyes for moment and she will open her eyes instantly...so, she closed her eyes.

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Here Virat kept n searching for her here and there, but didn't found her anywhere...He was in a fear that he if he didn't found her what would happened then. He got frustrated and stopped the jeep and hit the steering wheel with his fist to show his frustration...but after a while, calming himself he again began his search to find his love. He went near trees and from the far distance he watches something no someone...a girl sat on the bark of the tree...something inside him died a small death and then instantly reborn...He was so happy to see her...that too safe. He thanked all the gods he known to give back him his life.

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When next maanvi opened her she saw a familiar figure was walking towards her. A tall man, with wide shoulders was coming near her...as she watches him carefully she didn't believe her eyes... she found that it is Virat, her husband...but how he could be here...she thougt that she was dreaming...As he inched closer to her...she saw the same green eyes that always drive her crazy and the concern in those eyes was same like before. with these thoughts she closed her eyes...but the next thing she knew she was in his arms . He carried her as if she weighted no more than feather. She kept looking at him as she think that if she keep away her eyes away from him than he must probably be go away from her...but he didn't look at her and kept on walking straight and set her in his passenger seat and covered her with his jackets before going...

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So Guys, this is the end of part 2...hope u like my update...if u don't like my update then plz forgive me as i'm writing for the first time...and sorry friends i cdan't send pm's bcoz i don't know how to send the pm's...


Edited by zaira_virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update yr !!!




loved it .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the update yaar.U write so beautifully.U expressed Virat's pain as a husband so well wen he found out that the car's owner was Manvi. Loved the whole update .Waiting for the next update.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: preetipc

Loved the update yaar.U write so beautifully.U expressed Virat's pain as a husband so well wen he found out that the car's owner was Manvi. Loved the whole update .Waiting for the next update.😊

...thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: __Aarti__

awesome update yr !!!




loved it .

thank u dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update

plz continue it soon

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