Virman SS: Her all time Saviour Part 2 at pg- 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys I am zaira and I am writing a short story on Virman...this is the first time I am writing a story... Plz guys bear me with my story...this ss will be of 3 or 4 chapters...
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It has been one year since virman became two individuals Virat and Maanvi...
It was a cloudy evening and blinding mix of rain and snow slashed against the window panes of her car faster than the wipers could swipe them. She could hardly see the road and it was getting darker. She was returning from her office to her house.
Suddenly, the flashbacks of her past came running in her mind. Her golden times spent with her husband in these streets kept running in front of her eyes. She thought that he loves her so much that when she asked him to leave her without asking her any question he fulfilled his promise. She always feel guilty for leaving him just because her sister had asked her not to show her face again. But what was his fault in it? Why is he suffering from so much without any fault? She was cursing herself for all his pain. But soon she came back to reality and kept going ahead on the snow laden road. Barely a seconds later, her tyres skid, she tightened her hold on steering wheel but it was pointless. The car went out of control and her head struck with steering wheel which leaves some stains of blood on steering wheel also.
On the other side, Virat was also lost in the thoughts of his love, his life, his Maanvi. He was once again in those streets where he has spend aa golden period of his life with his wife. He was still angry on her that she took a promise from him not to stop her from leaving and ask her any questions. He was angry on her that once again she choose her sister over him. Was he nothing for her? Why didn't she think that how can he live without her? All these things kept running in his mind. He never wants to be her first priority he just wants a little place in her heart.
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So guys, this is it for 1st chapter...plz tell me if I should continue this story or not...plz guys comment if u like my ss...

Index:
Part 1: pg 1
Part 2: pg 3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start 👍🏼
u should continue it
and plz pm me when u update it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice..
Plz pm me...
I liked to read it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice dear cont soon n pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome yr ,would love to read it ,



please continue soon .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great start!
Loved the concept!
Do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gr8 start
Do contine soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing start! I would love to read more soon :)
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Awesome start..! would love to read more...!
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Loved the start.Pls continue and pls pm me😊

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