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girl97

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

very short

but have to say very nice

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Nishtha Relan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

vini_karan u r superbb yaar love the update and i am really really really really excited for the scary house update please continue soon and update soon i am waiting eagerly it is superbb please or if u can do a long oone thanks

Edited by nishyrelan - 12 years ago

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KatieDruzza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Its an awsum one :D want to see virika romance in scary house :) continue soon with a long part ..

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urmil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

plz give a long update...thnks 4 pm...waiting 4 nxt part

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sushmakryan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

nice update continue soon pm me

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..Amrita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

plz continue soon waiting for the next part

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saavi jain

@vini_karan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

PART 3

All four went to d scary house..virat brought d tickets :)

Jeevika holding viren's shirt tightly :D

J-virenjii muje bohot dar lag rha hai..plx aap log jaaiye

V-shshsh..mai kuch nahi jaanta tum chl rhi ho bus..mai hu n tumhare saath ;)

M-dii daro mat hum sb hai n..

AND THEY ENTERED D HOUSE...

DOOR sHUT

COMPLETE DARKNESS

jeevika screams..nd hugs viren tightly.He laughs sayin "abhi se hi dar gyii"

J-viren aap mujh pe haas rhe hai :/

V-achcha sorry ab nahi hasunga.

they moved ahead nd few voices started cumin..she was still holding viren's chect nd moving ahead.

SUDDENLY A HAND COMES OUT..SHE SCREAMS LOUDLY

V-(laughs) itna kyu dar rhi ho.. :P

J-thik hai virenji aapko muj pe hasi aa rhi hai n..jaayie aap aa jaungi akeli :/ ...mannu tu chl mere saath

manvi and jeevika started moving..viren and virat coming at back.

Viren-yr ye to gussa ho gyi.Chlo mna loonga ;)

moveD aheaDD..

a disturbeD man wiD a lonG knefe insiDe a cage was sitting nd cuttinG a wooD with kniFe nd long hairs

jeevika was again scared to move ahead she looked back to viren but then holds manvi's hand to move..ny how she managed..Viren was feeling guilty he moved to her nd holds her hand tight nd says sorry she didnt replied but he di not leaves her hand they moved ahead..

there were 3 coffins nd they opened nd 3 mummies comes outt

she hides herself in virens chest but she realises that she is angry frm him nd she runs fast frm that area.

NOW COMES THE LAST ONE

they were simply walking jeevika eyes closed nd she was holding manvi's hand..

they were passing frm a room nd suddenly the bed starts moving towards dem..all four ran nd hit d door of exit.

SORRY FOR A SHORT ONE...i'LL continue wid one more part may be today itself..till den njoy dis :)