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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Omg you stopped and you said you won't continue please
Continue why you doing this I will die I want to know her
Answer loved the truth and false game and the flashback
Was great an outstanding update loved it to the core
Please just give one more update please please please

Edited by madpaki - 12 years ago

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-Aswathy-

@-Aswathy-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Part 3,then part 4 is coming!??Eeks! :D
Part 3 was awesome Ava :) Their relationship is still had not completely turned into love..And I love that slow pace..Awkwardness,jealousy,hurt...Virat is so good at getting the right hints!:D And your literacy works are always a treat to read :)

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Superb update!!
Loved it!!
Plz continue!!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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little.angel56

@little.angel56

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

You cannot be so modest right?

You joking? This is like one of the best piece of work!

Every feeling

Every word had its own meaning and emotion,
I am eagerly waiting for the next part, which you please update!

This is it, i am in love with it

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Green_chilles

@Green_chilles

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Wonderful piece of work...hopefully u write alot...waiting for ur work

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girl_rocks

@girl_rocks

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

and this was perfect...
smile said everything :D

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Suarez

@Suarez

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

OMG...u cannot end this here!!!!!! M dying to knw her answer!! Will be a confession!! plzzz u hv to write part 4 !! Pity us!! 😭
Awesome update!! Loved it!!
Love all ur work !! U r just brilliant !!

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Kryan4ever

@Kryan4ever

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Omg this is too cute !! Please please please continue
I have to know what happens next !!

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MaebyFunke

@MaebyFunke

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Such a sweet story this is, the female lead is shown really very strong that she had survived after being head over heels with a jerk and then being able to live without him. And you've showed it so well, but the male lead is something different. The main reason why I loved and enjoyed this story... because it is told by his perspective.

It's a touching love story. And gosh, you've used the true or false game! Man, we play here or rather say use it to see the reaction from our friends. We literally use it to get the secrets out! Fun it is. You've made an extremely brilliant use of the game. The last part was really...good.

And what I see, there wouldn't be next part to this thing? I think the answer is explained in her one smile to his question. It is good if it ends this way, but it would be extraordinary if you'd write next part to this. Either way it is good. But I'm more obsessed with the second option 😉.

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

what do you mean by, there will not be a part four to this, please dont do this to us, we need an answer, what will she say this is so excited, pleaseee 😭 continuee

and thanks for pm

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