Virman OS Trust part 5(A)(pg 12)

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preity_d

@preity_d

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

smile XD an awesome writer and your ff has the only one same thing virat having cancer but girl you really wrote it beautifully, so nicely written
👏
hey waiting for your break my heart million times and one night stand
plz update soon

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

When you said someone shoot me I was getting happy
Thinking yeeey payback time for not updating perfect life
Then you said you was joking I was like oh crap all my hopes
Crashed lol loved it to the core second part made me emotional
he lied to her so if anything happens to him she wont be upset
Made me fall for virat all over again but hope he tells her the truth

Ps please please please update perfect life

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shaimah

@shaimah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Beautiful update

Continue soon and thanks for the pm!!

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oriyana

@oriyana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Okay! When was the first part written?? Oh was that yesterday?? If it is, then how I came to know about it now?? Oh! Did I miss ur pm? Or u sent a pm only now? These were all my reactions when I saw ur PM, that too with the second part of the story... LOL Am I mad? No... LOL 😆

Okay... the story is so just amazing dear.. Virat can't betray Maanvi and it was obvious! I expected the reason to be many things, first was cancer ofcourse, and it came to be true! No way Virat is going to Die... 😊

But, the thing is I am looking forward to the part where Maanvi would come to know about his cancer... Would it be soon or Would it be late??

And yeah, SmileXD is a beautiful writer as u... You both are my favorites... She described the part, where Virat told Maanvi about his cancer, very very beautifully... But, the thing I am saying this is, Do I expect something like that in your story?? Or Something more beautiful?? Well, the answer is NO, to both the questions ofcourse! You both are very good writers with a very unique style! She wrote very beautifully in her own unique way... And I expect u to write it in ur own way... *fingers crossed* 😊 Lot of expectations... NO?? 😉

And yeah sorry, I din't say earlier that I can't listen to the songs u give with each update.. Net is too slow! But yes, they must be beautiful as everyone says.. 😊

Edited by oriyana - 12 years ago

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missmystic

@missmystic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Omg!! Nisha, your such an amazinf writer!!! Loved the OS, it was absaloutly amazing!! The way you decribed the pain and feelings both characters are going through is just superb!!! I admire u for ur writing skills, great job!
Thanx for the pm :)

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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

What a heartbreaking second part! 💔... Virat ...

Virat made the biggest sacrifice ... 😭

Do continue this emotional story and thanks for the pm

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naina

@naina927

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

i really have no words to explain how am i feeling after reading both the parts... nisha seriously i am speechless... feeling very bad for virman... feel like crying anyways thnx fr the pm...

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Mind blowing!!!
Loved both part, can't wait 4 the next update!!!
Awesome songs to go with the updates!!!
Thanks 4 the pm!! 😊

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deepika03

@deepika03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

this os makes me wish virat ws da cancer patient in da show too...i realy love da way u described virat's emotions...it always is harder fr da one who knws da truth...i wnder wat wil happen nxt? wish manvi gets bak wid him 😊