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@wanderlust09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

awsum piece of work...

beautiful potrayal of emotions...

"He enclosed her in his world of safety. For her, being in his arms was the same as being in heaven." superb lines...can these two gt anymore adorable...😳

luvd it to bitz...

if dis z a bad piece of work ...thn i wanna read more of ur baddy bad works

waiting for ur next virmanish shot!!!!

thnx a loot for the pm!!!! 🤗

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Aysha

@aysha1989

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

It was beautiful... Thank you so much for sharing it with us 😊

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

who said u writes bad pieces ? 😡
it was a very good piece of work and you made manvi fumble due to her cancer wow yaar you looked after about every detailing 🤗

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love_never_dies

@love_never_dies

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Lovely dear, very nice..
Glad to read your work after a long time..

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Adenah u called it bad... It was super fab ss dear
Too emotional and u writen very well
Thanx 4 d pm dear 😊

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Aarti

@__Aarti__

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

i am speechless .it was awesome and beautifully written .loved it .thanks for the pm .

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Smith

@tadi-maro

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Fantastic...So filled with emotions❤️❤️

Thanx for pm..

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mary9053

@mary9053

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

it was extremely awesome and the garden scene was cute

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Jaya

@screen22

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

emotionally and sad all in one, amazing😭👏

She found peace and heaven all together in his arms this she where she belonged for kingdom come no matter what, nobody could take that away from them. Her knight in shine Armour would takes the stars from heaven just to bring a smile to her face. This is true love and there is a few people who can find this. virat and maanvi are one of them.

thanks for the pm, please continue