.: || *VirMan OS - Promises* || :.

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Sorry for giving you such bad pieces of writing again and again, but what can I do? VirMan are on my mind 24/7 :D Came up with another OS...enjoy !! It's late though...it takes place when Maanvi has not recovered from cancer..

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-From Maanvi's Point of View:-

Here I am, laying down in bed, with drips and oxygen and machines and whatnot around me. Today is the first time I realized how serious my disease is, my cancer is. I used to treat it like a minor cold. I can't even walk...I can barely speak...I even have difficulty breathing. Why is God giving me such a punishment? Why is he separating me from my Jeevika Di...my Virat...my family? Why? God took my parents away from me when I was so little...and now he plans on stealing me away from the people I love with all my heart! Well, at least, now I can go in heaven and find my mama-papa. I'll share with them everything about my life...about the good times I spent with everybody ...about Jeevika Di and how she got an amazing husband and family...how I found a chep who loves me more than himself. Virat. What will happen to him? All those tears he cried for me...all for nothing. How can that be? He has done so much for me...and I couldn't even bring a smile on his face!

-From Virat's Point of View:-

Cancer. Why did it happen to Maanvi? Why does she have to suffer? A girl who lives life to the fullest...is battling between life and death, but she doesn't have to worry at all because I'm always going to be by her side. I will never let anything happen to her. I will give her twice as much happiness than the sadness cancer gave her. I will replace those tears with smiles and laughter. I will make sure she never cries. Maanvi, you don't know how sad it makes me feel to see you so ill, so sick...having difficulty breathing, talking, walking...I want to remove every part of cancer from you! I want to see you like before, I can't stand to see you like this! Why does God want to steal her away from me? It's the first time I fell in love, that too with an amazing girl, who cares for everybody, who is so lively and loving, who has thousands of amazing qualities! I don't want to lose her...! Is this is what I get for falling in love? Don't give me such a punishment! Don't steal my life from me!

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As Maanvi was in bed, unable to sleep, and lost in her thoughts, her eyes stopped at the window, as she looked at the sight in front of her. Virat. He was in the garden, looking up at the stars and wondering why Maanvi had to suffer from cancer. She tried to move and go up to him, but she couldn't. The Maanvi that couldn't stay quiet for a minute...the Maanvi that lived life to the fullest...the Maanvi that loved to have fun...couldn't even get up from her bed to talk to her partner. Cancer. That was why. She felt like a trapped bird in a cage, unable to escape, unable to enjoy and have fun, unable to live life...unable to spread her wings and fly.

How was she supposed to talk to Virat when she couldn't even get up? She needed his comfort right now. What could she do? "Vi..Vir..Virat" She whispered with much difficulty, expecting her attempts to fail...but they didn't. He turned around and looked at her through the window. Their eyes met. He could sense whenever Maanvi was in need of him. His heart told him and right now his heart told him to rush over to Maanvi and talk to her.

The door opened and he stood in front of her. He walked and sat next to her, making sure she was perfectly fine. "Vi-Virat" She said once again, with much difficulty, in less than a whisper, but loud and clear enough for him to hear. "Yes, Maanvi... I'm here, I'm with you" He told her, grabbing her hand and looking at the love of his life, all weak because of this cancer. Why is God punishing her? The girl who brightens everyone's lives is experiencing such a darkening phase in her life. She tried to sit up but failed to, until Virat helped her, making sure she was comfortable.

"Vir-Virat...ho-how did yo-you..kno-know...that I-I..needed yo-you?" She said softly, looking into his eyes. "I just knew it...my heart told me...Maanvi, I know everything about you...what you do, what you're thinking...everything. Did you just realize that I'm madly in love with you? Tum abhi bhi bandariya ki bandariya hi ho...you haven't changed" He said. She couldn't help but smile at two things, his love for her which hasnt decreased a bit even while knowing about her cancer, and at the fact that they still called each other chep and bandariya.

While snuggling closer to him, she managed to reply, "Vi..V.Virat, I love yo-you..I lov-love you..a..lot, I'm sor-sorry...maine tum..tumhe srif..aur srif da-dard diya hai...a-aur kuch na-nahi...plea..please muj-mujhe..maaf ka-kardo" She said as she started to cry, which he couldn't stand at all. He cupped her face, and wiped off her tears, while saying, "Nahi Maanvi, Asa mat kaho, tumne to..iss Virat ko ek life diya hai...you brightened my life..you taught me how to live..how to have fun!! Actually..I'm sorry, kyuki main tumhare cancer ko theek nahi kar sakta..I'm sorry...and Maanvi, I love you more! I will love you until I die."

At that moment, she fell in love with him all over again.

Not caring about anything else, she pulled him into a tight hug. She knew that she was more safe in his arms than she was with all that medical equipment. When he was there, she didn't have to worry. Nothing could happen to her when she was with him. Absolutely nothing. Shocked at her actions, but happy, he hugged her back, while checking to see if she was still okay without the oxygen masks and other equipment. "Maanvi, tum theek ho na? I mean..are you comfortable and able to breathe? I don't want to make you suffer.." He told her, but honestly, he felt really nice to have her in his arms, so close to him. He wanted to freeze this moment and live in it forever. "Vir..Virat..tu-tum ho na me-mere..saat!! did yo..you for-forget..? Whe-when Vi-Virat is h-here, not to f-fear" She said while hugging even more tightly. She also wanted to stay in his arms forever. He smiled at what she said. She may have cancer, but she still had her bubbly and happy-go-lucky personality. That's just ONE of the things he loved about her.

"Haan Maanvi...main hoon tumhare saat and I will let nothing happen to you, that's my promise, Virat Vadhera's promise" He told her confidently. He meant each and every word he said. He will let nothing happen to her. Nothing. She couldnt believe this. How did she find someone who loved her so much even while knowing that she has cancer which is becoming more and more serious day by day? "Vir-Virat...I wi-will never fi-find..a lover li-like..yo-you eve-even if I sea-search...wi-with a torch" She said. He chuckled at her comment. She hadn't lost her charm even while being diagnosed with cancer. Wasn't she amazing?

"Vi-Virat..ca-can you pl-please..tak-take me to t-the gar-garden?..I'm bor-bored si-sitting here an-and I'm not slee-sleepy" She requested, hoping for him to say yes. He wanted to take her there. He wanted to see her smile, see her happy, but he couldnt take her there. What if her health worsens? He couldn't afford to let that happen. "Maanvi, I'm really sorry, but I can't...I can't take a risk on your health" He said, hoping for her to understand. She understood why he was saying no, but she really wanted to get up from his bed. She was tired of laying down. How much could a person rest? "Vir-Virat...ple-plea-please..ju-just 5 mi-minutes?" She said while giving a weak, but pleasant smile. How was he supposed to say no to her? "Ok Maanvi, only 5 minutes" He told her. She happily nodded yes. He helped her get up from the bed, but he wasn't going to let her walk by herself. No way. He carried her in his arms and they made their way to the garden.

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As they entered the garden, he wrapped a shawl around her because he didn't want her to get cold. They both sat on the bench, looking up at the stars. He kept on checking to see whether she was fine or not. This didn't go unnoticed by Maanvi. "V-Virat..I'm fi-fine" She told him while resting her head on his shoulder. He put his arms around her while grabbing her hand. All of a sudden, she started crying while saying, "Vi-Virat, I wa-want to l-live, I do-don't w.want..to di-die...I wa-want t..to..live w-wi-with..yo-you..a-and..Jee-Jeevika Di..and m-my fa-fam..family. I don't w-want to l-lose..m-my li-life..Virat..pl-please s-save..me, I w-want..to liv-live Virat..pl-please...!!" She moved closer and embraced him. He comforted her as much as he could and wiped off her tears. He couldn't stand to see her cry. It broke his heart.

He took a deep breath before saying, "Maanvi..please don't cry, and who told you that you're gonna die? You aren't going to lose your life because I won't let that happen. You're not going to leave us Maanvi, I won't let anything happen to you!!..You are my life Maanvi, without you, I'm nothing. I won't let God steal away my life from me, no matter what. Nothing will happen to you Maanvi, nothing." He said as he cupped her face and kissed her forehead. It was a kiss of pain. A kiss of fear. A kiss of love. A tear escaped her eye, but it was a tear of joy. Why did he love her so much?

"Maanvi, you should sleep now, it's getting late" He said. Virat wanted to sit and talk with her for some more time, but he had to sacrifice as Maanvi's health was more important. After some time, she agreed and he carried her in his arms as they made their way back to her room.

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Virat placed her on the bed gently while covering her with the blanket. She smiled at her would-be husband's actions. He caressed her face and tucked a strand of hair behind her ear. He leaned closer and gave Maanvi a good-night kiss on her forehead. He was about to go, when he felt Maanvi grab his hand.

He turned around to see why Maanvi grabbed his hand. "Kya hua Maanvi?" He curiously asked while sitting next to her. "Don't l-leave..me...please V-Virat..I-I want to s-sleep..with y-you.., in y-your a-arms..please Vi-Virat, pl-please." She begged him. It may be the last night with him for her. She couldn't miss this opportunity. "But Maanvi..I mean, I don't want you to be uncomfortable.." He told her. Honestly, he wanted to sleep with her in his arms more than she wanted to. He had been waiting for this special moment for who knows how long, but he had to sacrifice...for her...for her health.

"Virat..p-please, I f-feel mo-more comf-comfortable in yo-your a-arms..than I d-do in a-any o-other p-place..in t-the wo-world..please, don't l-leave me" She said. There was no way he could say no to her. He agreed and she smiled happily. He sat next to her and she cuddled closer and put her arms around him. In order to make her smile, he said, "Kya baat hai Maanvi? Aaj bohat hi romantic mood mein ho..." She blushed. "Vi-Virat..tum a-abhi bhi c-chep hi h-ho.." She teased him. He laughed. "Tum bhi to bandariya hi ho." He replied. They chuckled at their childishness.

She laid her head on his broad chest while he put one hand around her back and the other one on her forehead, caressing it. He enclosed her in his world of safety. For her, being in his arms was the same as being in heaven. She wanted to stop time and be in this moment forever. She caressed his face and kissed him on his cheek as she whispered in his ear, "I..I l-love..y-you." He smiled and whispered back, "I love you too." In each other's arms, they slept, with hope...hope to recover from cancer.

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How was it? Please do leave me your feedback...it motivates me to write more!!

-Adenah

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Arshi-licious01 thumbnail
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Wow this is amazing! Love it!

And you call this bad? 😆
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that was a nice piece of writing...
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Wow!!..That was just too Lovely..
Emotional yet Special moment for Virman..
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Aww dat was such a beautiful update
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beautiful story
loved it!!
i wish the cv's could come up with something like this...awesome!!!
you are a superb writer!!
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You call this bad ill say its out of this world meaning awesome
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Amazing Loved It Poor Souls Too Much Pain
Beautifully Written<3
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sweet and lovely story, written with great emotions.
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Beautiful story!! Loved it!!
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