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Menika

@BrunoMars

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: jannat89
Good update
But too short
Update soon

I know, but I had to update and this was all I could do,

I wanted Virats entry to be another chapter.

I am not promising anything.

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Menika

@BrunoMars

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: chandana123
Such a short update???
And Virat is Viren's rival??!!!!

I know! It is patheTic! It is... So bad!

I am really sorry!

You know? I first wrote best friend, but

I thought;it sounds too sweet. So i changes it...

How could I do That? Too weird.

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Menika

@BrunoMars

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: girl_rocks
wat is dis so short update!!!!!
anywayz as usual it was fab...viren's rival virat sounds gr8
continue soon asap

I told you! No high expectations! -Okejj this is below average,

But still...-

Really, Nothing happened.. I know, everything sounds great if it

Is Virat.

I Will try...

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avika

@avika26

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Hey u cant do these when i start enjoying it ended so viren is going to ask help of virat hmm int cs

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Anu101

@Anu101

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

Thank you for the pm

"and making clear that Maanvi will have to marry first made all the guys roaming around Jeevika disappear. It was a lost case"🤣🤣🤣

Though it was short I really loved it😃 Even there was no VirMan I love the way you are developing the story😃

Eagerly waiting for your next update. You stopped at a very interesting point!!!!! So Viren will ask for Virat's help..😉

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Disha

@.albatross.

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Aww This is so interesting. I love Taming of the Shrew. And I love how you are writing the story in different people's views. Keep up the amazing work.I also read all 4 parts in a row😆. And don't worry about the updating.Slow and Steady always writes the best?...(Slow and Steady wins the race)- but then again I can't say anything about that because i'm a slow updater aswell. 😉. Oh Well...You write amazingly once again and can't wait for the next part.

-Disha P.S I am loving Viren and his dialogues in this aswell as jeevika and her relationship with maanvi. I can't wait for things to unfold.

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Menika

@BrunoMars

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: avika26
Hey u cant do these when i start enjoying it ended so viren is going to ask help of virat hmm int cs

Ahw, trust me, I know how it feels,

I often feel so after reading something

of yours, so pay backtime I guess...

Thnx for liking it!

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Menika

@BrunoMars

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: Anu101
Thank you for the pm
"and making clear that Maanvi will have to marry first made all the guys roaming around Jeevika disappear. It was a lost case"🤣🤣🤣
Though it was short I really loved it😃 Even there was no VirMan I love the way you are developing the story😃
Eagerly waiting for your next update. You stopped at a very interesting point!!!!! So Viren will ask for Virat's help..😉

Really? You don't know how happy you made me by telling this.

You liked it even without VirMan? I hated it, but thanx though!

Thanx! Trying to bring the developments -though still got to work on

it- takes a lot of time -for me-.

Okejj, well it looks like that, but I never know what I am upto next time,

I surprise myself most of the time, planning doesn't work for me...

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Menika

@BrunoMars

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: RICOPUNK101
Aww This is so interesting. I love Taming of the Shrew. And I love how you are writing the story in different people's views. Keep up the amazing work.I also read all 4 parts in a row😆. And don't worry about the updating.Slow and Steady always writes the best?...(Slow and Steady wins the race)- but then again I can't say anything about that because i'm a slow updater aswell. 😉. Oh Well...You write amazingly once again and can't wait for the next part.

-Disha P.S I am loving Viren and his dialogues in this aswell as jeevika and her relationship with maanvi. I can't wait for things to unfold.

Thank You! Really? I love it too! Yes, it actually just happened to turn out

like this, but glad you it the way it is. Thanx, I will try.

You read it in a row?! AHh! *jumps around* *sits like nothing happened*

How sweet yaar! Uff! Happy that you think so, but I won't allow myself

to take too much time...

True, I feel like the turtle, at the end I will come first-,right? once, ever...?-

Thank You -once again-

Menika

P.s. Ahw! I am so happy it was going to be VirMan oriented, so I was really like; What am I

doing when I wrote 'Virika'-it is not really Virika-, but I am glad you love it. The relationship of

the sisters was a kind of a surprise for me too, as I did not plan to do so...

Can't wait either, it always is a surprise for me, it always turns out to be really different than

I thought it would...

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#210

Hiii !

Ok , first of all dont feel so bad about the lenght. Atleast you updated.. not everytime we get time to type 5 pages of MS (I have faced this many times :-P)

And the content matters more than anything . I love cliff hangers in any story so be happy that people will be dying to know 'Virat'.

I found Viren awesome ..he was surely some one I am looking forward to read.
And the whole deal of boys vanishing around from Jeevs was hilarious. I read that line and I was in splits

Great Work

Love

Edited by Let-It-Go - 13 years ago

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