SS: Khoon Ka Rishta...Update -Pt-5/Pg-15-7th Nov.. - Page 7

Originally posted by: ktloversera

dis is very gud!! loved evry single bit of it 😊

Thank you sera .. glad u liked it

Originally posted by: jia123sagar

awesome upfate

thanks for pm me

thank you Jia

Originally posted by: nikhilageet

First of all Munni I am really sorry for the horribly late reply.But honestly what can I say after reading this addition to your OS.Its brilliant👏. If I have to start quoting which lines I loved in it the list would be endless😃. Virat s, Angush, his love for manvi, Jeevika s pain all you showed so beautifully in words that anything I say would not be enough😊. Absolutely lovely and waiting for the next installment eagerly😃 p,s loved the part where Dadaji puts a stop to SK s rantings😆

Ohh don't apologize nikhila,🤗 there is nothing like being late

Thank you so much nikhila... appreciate your kind words... and yes how can you not like the SK bit LOL😆 that was specially for you to smile 😃

Beautifully written! 👏 I have no words for it! The way you portrayed Jeevika and the three voices it made me shiver and cry! My god if we saw that on the show my heart would stop! That was superb! This is what we want from the show, this intensity, these emotions, the pain that the sisters go through for each other. You are an amazing writer! Has Jeevika aborted the baby? 😲 otherwise I don't think Viren will be so angry! You've got me worried now please update quickly but when time permits! Keep going this is perfect!

Munni I am speechless. Honestly, that was a marvellous piece of writing. The way you created suspense and drama is magficant. The way you kept the connection between the two sisters with Maanvi's automatic knowledge of what happened to Jeevika and the glass but the inner dialogues and emotions of Jeevika, I just loved it. The way the baby, Maanvi and herself came up her and questions her own convictions was brilliant etched.

I did think after that bit, that Jeevika might have lost the child. But it seems she had gone a step further. Well I don't know really, but I do wonder what she had done. I can't wait to see your angry Viren. Something I always love.

By no means was that long, I could have continued reading on if you had posted more. I'm falling short of words now of how I can express what I felt about this update. Fabulous.

Ps I will edit tomorrow as this post is filled with errors from typing on my phone.

Wow dear it is really very beautiful... Thanx 4 d long updatd dear... U write each n every line so beautiful... Liked it no no loved it... Poor jeevika, she is in d dilema of choosing one of dem...
Cont Soon dear 😊

Originally posted by: Sonia17

Beautifully written! 👏 I have no words for it! The way you portrayed Jeevika and the three voices it made me shiver and cry! My god if we saw that on the show my heart would stop! That was superb! This is what we want from the show, this intensity, these emotions, the pain that the sisters go through for each other. You are an amazing writer! Has Jeevika aborted the baby? 😲 otherwise I don't think Viren will be so angry! You've got me worried now please update quickly but when time permits! Keep going this is perfect!

Thank you so much Sonia.. for the wonderful comments...
aww i am so sorry for making u cry 🤗

well the questions of Jeevika's baby will be revealed in the next part.. stay tuned... haven't started writing it yet

Originally posted by: -Pj-

Munni I am speechless. Honestly, that was a marvellous piece of writing. The way you created suspense and drama is magficant. The way you kept the connection between the two sisters with Maanvi's automatic knowledge of what happened to Jeevika and the glass but the inner dialogues and emotions of Jeevika, I just loved it. The way the baby, Maanvi and herself came up her and questions her own convictions was brilliant etched.

I did think after that bit, that Jeevika might have lost the child. But it seems she had gone a step further. Well I don't know really, but I do wonder what she had done. I can't wait to see your angry Viren. Something I always love.

By no means was that long, I could have continued reading on if you had posted more. I'm falling short of words now of how I can express what I felt about this update. Fabulous.

Ps I will edit tomorrow as this post is filled with errors from typing on my phone.

Now i am speechless with your comments.. thank you so much Pooja ,,🤗

Even I loved writing the whole flash back of Jeevika's internal turmoil..it was a tough scene to pen down ...

I am glad u did not think it to be long.. and regarding Jeevika and Viren's anger towards will be revealed in the next update...

thank you so much once again pooja😳

Originally posted by: jannat89

Wow dear it is really very beautiful... Thanx 4 d long updatd dear... U write each n every line so beautiful... Liked it no no loved it... Poor jeevika, she is in d dilema of choosing one of dem...
Cont Soon dear 😊

Thank you so much jannat for the lovely and wonderful comments.. glad u liked it..
yeah Jeevika is going through a very rough phase