SS: Khoon Ka Rishta...Update -Pt-5/Pg-15-7th Nov.. - Page 6

awesome upfate

Originally posted by: screen22

I just don't know what to say, WOW, amazing, brilliant, wonderful I could go on!👏

What amazing chapter, you could imagine the whole scene in your head, better than on tv, I hope this will happen in the show?

I loved the long chapter because you just wanted to continue reading and not stop.

The feelings were so real?

Please continue soon and pm please👏

Thank you so much dear.. glad u liked it and appreciate your words..

hehehe yeah imagined the whole scene in my head and put it down.. had headache after writing each scene LOL😆

will surely pm

Originally posted by: ani_gr

OMG Munni.. it is just brilliant... I could easily picturize the way you have written... it is fabulous ! I have no words to explain... absolutely fantastic!

I loved the second part really, so touching, emotional, I could easily figure how these people will be acting with your lines... Fabulous writing.. Keep it up !

Awww love the baby's dialogues.. OMG.. it is sooo good... Hope Jeevika manages baby and Mannu together really well..

🤗❤️

Awww Gayathri hug back 🤗 and thank you so much and i am very glad u liked it ..
yeah it was indeed emotional... coming up parts will be even more emotional ...

be ready with kleenex 😳

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

beautiful absolutely beautiful too good please pm me when you update next thanks

Thank you so much pinky .. glad u liked it..

will surely PM you

Originally posted by: mika17

Dat was an Amazin update, so emotional loved every bit of it

Thank you mika.. glad u liked it

Originally posted by: virenjeevika

Great update... very emotional... loved the scene where jeevika was questioning virat... would love to see a scene like that between them ... if the cvs do bring this up... please do continue soon.. i cant wait anymore after the precap... but i have a feeling it is jeevika's dream..

Thank you dear.. glad u liked it..

you will know about the precap in the next update

Originally posted by: Sonia17

I have no words to say! 👏 🤗It was just beautiful every word had so much meaning, so much emphasis on my heart! It made me cry seriously! 😳 😭 It reminded me of the first weeks of the show the spark between the two sisters, the sacrifice, the pain that was going through their hearts as if they were being seperated forever! 😳That one soul being teared into two! Just perfect! 👏 Please please carry on! You have made this one special OS for sure! 😳 ⭐️ Just loved it all! ❤️Thanks for the PM waiting for the next update! 😍

Hug back sonia 🤗 Thank you so much dear.. your comments mean a lot to me..
I am sorry for making you cry 🤗

yeah it was one soul tearing into two

appreciate all your kind words...

Originally posted by: jannat89

superb dear
Sorry 4 being too late reply😭
But ur update is really very amazing
All 4 some r just wow
Loved it❤️
Thanx 4 d pm n cont soon dear ❤️

Thank you dear.. glad u liked it.. don't apologize ..
you are not late.. you can comment any time dear

Originally posted by: Sunitha_Swayam

Wow...Loved it...Awesome...Thnx for d PM dear

thank you sunita.. glad u liked it

Originally posted by: urmilsalve

superb...i was reading it spell bound...thnks for pm

thank you dear.. appreciate it

First of all Munni I am really sorry for the horribly late reply.But honestly what can I say after reading this addition to your OS.Its brilliant👏. If I have to start quoting which lines I loved in it the list would be endless😃. Virat s, Angush, his love for manvi, Jeevika s pain all you showed so beautifully in words that anything I say would not be enough😊. Absolutely lovely and waiting for the next installment eagerly😃 p,s loved the part where Dadaji puts a stop to SK s rantings😆

Originally posted by: nobo

Please Jussst DONT think about length ...I love it Even if u write twice of it...helps me connect better

Now coming to update ...I don't have enuf words to describe... So please understand ...really emotional, connecting, & realistic at same time... Courtesy ur writing skills

Her frustration about hiding is described so well

" Virat who gave u right to decide anything for my sister...Am still alive & have every right to know Everything"... Awesome

& one more thing the medical perspective of story is the most wonderful thing I found...stem cells,bone marrow, distinction between both...EVEN diet chart of patient, iron riched food...not only knowledgeable But also necessary for story...& How J wanted to understand it all ...Amazing

Enough of my blabbering...Fabulous update.

Awww Priya thank you so much.. glad u liked the long one..

appreciate each of your word and yes the medical perspective in the show which makes it amiss .. and the cancer doesn;t seem as serious as it is in the dramas over here...like ER or scrubs..

thank you once again for the kind words priya

Originally posted by: Pooja_Ch

Aww it was amazing!!! It was a long long chapter.. Finally i completed it..!!!

Lovely and fab update..

Cont soon..

Thnx 4 Pm..😳

Aww pooja thank you glad u liked it.. i know the length is sometimes a big flaw in my updates.. but glad u made it to the end...

Originally posted by: shine123

brilliant...thnx 4 d pm...continue soon...awesome precap...

thank you shine.. glad u like it

Originally posted by: adenah

Amazingly written...I loved it, continue soon, thanks for the pm

thank you adenah.. glad u liked it