Hi Munni,
I just read all five parts of ur SS in a stretch...
I liked tat part in the beginning where jeevika scolded Virat asking him how did he get to decide for maanvi himself when her sister was there(when she came to know abt Virat hiding the mumbai reports)... I felt the same while watching tat particular episode... I felt tat virat was wrong to hide reports from Jeevs cos she is maanvi's sister and was her responsiblility... But then at the time the way they had shown J so aloof abt M made me forget it...
What i loved the most is tat particular scene between jeevika, her inner conscience, then the imaginary baby girl and imaginary mannu... In the show they did not show the war of minds so clearly... They just showed J crying and some flashback and booommm she decides to abort...But here i liked how u have shown her turmoil where she does not want to let go of her baby or her sister..Love how she is not able to decide, but then when finally she sees maanvi coughing blood she decides to save her...
And then the next one is Maanvi dreaming of chutku and wanting to save him was amazing... And the way you have justified even maanvi pov abt why she does not want to live at the expense of chutkus is mindblowing...And Virat understanding Maanvi is so good...Love ur words on Virat when he tries to make jeevs understand what mannu wants... And u have highlighted Maanvis opinion strongly...
And love the final twist in the plot , it was more sensible than in the show... That legal aspect in the show was totally flawed... Lets not go to the shw and its bloopers...
Totally loved it and it was more sensible... Now m eagerly waiting for the next update...
Edited by sennareni - 12 years ago
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