new virman os!! luv is strong...part 2 on pg 2...

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dis is frm dat point wer maanvi overhears buaji's nd jeevika's convo on d phone...nd decides 2 leave virat fr d betterment nd happiness of both d families
part1:
maanvi is standin in d courtyard of der house...thinkin wat will she tell virat so dat he can go frm der...she noes virat is nt goin 2 go by ny insult or ny odd behaviour as he noes his partner very well but she is determined 2 send him 2 chandigarh dis tym...she doesnt want him 2 waste his lyf fr a person whu is nt even guaranteed wedr she l survive fr 6 months also...nd she noes its indirectly affectin her di's lyf...
wen she is busy in her thoughts..virat cums dere..she cud sense him cumin close 2 her..shivers run down her spine..she wants 2 hug him 2 complete herself but all in vain..wen virat cums 2 giv dat shawl 2 her as she is feelin cold...she turns around all fierce like a lioness

maanvi:wats ur problem virat?? she yells at him very badly..cant u c dat becz of u everything is changin...everybody has sum tension or d oder..ur mom is worried regardin ur future...she wants u 2 be happy nd settled in ur lyf den why cant u do dis much fr ur family??

virat:partner..relax..dnt shout..it l take a toll on ur health..i will manage dem u dnt worry...

maanvi:relax my foot..hw can u ask me 2 relax wen everythin is in d worst of situations...do u even no dat becz of ur one decision of cumin 2 hrishikesh both d families r in damn tension!! dhav u ever thought hw will i face swamini bua,dadaji,beeji...its so difficult fr me..nd i hav told u several tyms dat i will never accept u ..den why is it dat dis simple thing is nt gettin in ur brains...or u want me 2 suffer lyk dis...thrughout..

virat:nothin lyk dat maanvi..nd even u noe dat u luv me...its just dat u r nt lettin it out becz of some sort of fright nd tension...even bhabhi nd bhai hav agreed...wen dey r wid us den why r u scared...nd moreover u need me in dis situation wen u r facin such a big illness..jus think maanvi...no 1 noes u as well as bhabhi nd me...bhabhi is nt here nd she cant be here always becz of bhai nd our family..bt i m wid u ...in d mornin u wer nt able 2 walk..nd do u think ur family will be able 2 manage it wen dey all r facin dis emotional turmoil...

maanvi:wen u wer nt here dey wer takin care of me..nd dat 2 very well nd u dnt hav 2 think of it..i wil take care of myself...plz i want u 2 move frward in lyf...nd nt wait fr me..becz i m never goin 2 say yes...nd i want 2 make dis very clear..

virat:yes ur family has taken care of ur health..but dat tym ur health was nt deterioratin so much..nw as d symptoms hav strtd showin demselves u need me..
nd as far as my lyf is concernd...im goin 2 spend it wid u nly..nd if u r nt goin 2 accept me its okk but i will never accept ny1 elz...in my lyf..nd wid u sayin me no..its not goin 2 change me at all..i m still goin 2 luv u ...nd let me make one thing very clear maanvi..i m incomplete widout u ...nd rather dan acceptin sum 1 elz..i wud lyk 2 die..in ur luv!!

maanvi is completely scared wen she hears dat..mixed emotions run thrugh her mind..she is very hapy frm within dat she has gt d best partner ever...no 1 can ever be lyk him..but den d same prb she is facin again nd again as 2 hw 2 send him back 2 hrishikesh...nd 1 more tensn arrives nw..dat even if she sends him 2 chandigarh...will virat blame his family..nd will dis take him away frm dem...she very well noes dat virat is very stubborn nd will stick 2 watever he has said...nw she feels dat nly 1 thing can stop him...
wen virat is abt 2 leave frm der...he hears d most awaited words..

maanvi confesse:i luv u virat!!

virat is so hapy 2 hear dat frm maanvi..his world seems 2 hav changed..he feels his lyf is back on track...he feels he has becum a millionaire 2day...he hugs maanvi...nd maanvi hugs him back...

virat: i cant believe...maanvi u...i mean ..i luv u 2...but suddenly...

maanvi:partner..u wanted me 2 confess dat i luv u nd i hav done it...yes u r rite i luv u nd i hav always luvd u ...nd will keep luvin u ...u r my soul of happiness,yes u r one person aftr di..whom i can share everythin..yes u bring a smile on my face..wen i m in d most difficult phase of lyf...but virat u hav 2 undrstnd..dat we cannot leave our families disappointed just fr our happiness nd luv...
we cannot be so selfish virat..dey hav contributed 2 our lyf so much nd hw can we leave dem dissapointed lyk dis...

virat:but...

maanvi:listen 2 me virat..if u luv me truly...plz go back 2 chandigarh...plz..fr my sake...fr me...fr bhai nd di...
dey r alone der handlin things...nd we cannot let dem face evrythin alone...
i cannot cum der..but atlest u ca go...plz..partner..

virat:nw virat cudnt deny her...aftr all he had cum 2 hrishikesh 2 convince her..wid her feelings...nd he had done it...nd he truly luvd her...so fr her happiness he decided 2 leave back 2 chandigarh...he hugged her tightly befr leavin...dey knew dey had 2 do dis...he packed his bags widout meetin nybody except maanvi he left frm der...


okk guys if i get gud response i may continue dis nd write 1 more part!!!
Edited by sashhh33 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is really good 😊...plzz continue soon !!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice 1 dear... continue it...❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Tat was nice:) she confessed n he left... Bt wat nxt?? How will dey meet again?? Plz continue dis soon... I noe its an os bt u've scope to write more if u wish to... So plz write more:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good one dear
Cont Soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dat was awesome loved how manvi confessed her love for virat, hope virman dnt separate 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was awesome It was an amazing confession do continue soon and do pm me
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okk guys u wanted me 2 continue so i decide i shud write a lil more..hope u njoy...

part2:
maanvi is disheartend aftr virat left..as if she has becum lifeless..she noes she did dis fr both d families but she is nt contentd frm widin..nd der is a new fear..wich arises in her..she is confused..as 2 why she is feelin lyk dis..but der is no answer..a strange feelin...she is ponderin over d whole situatn...she thought she shud call up di nd ask her but..den rethinks abt d fact dat her di will be shtterd 2 noe dat dey hav decided 2 stay away frm each oder becz of family..she noes hw emotional her di is...

later on beeji nd d family cum 2 noe dat virat has left d house widout informin dem...nd even maanvi's behaviour was absurd..d whole day..dey r quite tensed abt d whole fact..dey dint noe wat happend but dey cud sense maanvi's pain..after all dey wer her family...maanvi tries her best 2 convince dem dat she was fine but sumwhere she was failin dis tym..as if it was her soul being carried away frm her...d house had turned silent as never before...beeji called up jeevika 2 inform dat virat has left frm here..jeevika nd viren r left in awe..as 2 wat must hav happened der...but a fr nw..dey wer just waiting fr virat 2 be back home...

swamini bua was hapy dat virat is goin 2 be back home..but rest oders wer sad...fr d first tym dadaji was unhapy dat virat is cumin home alone..swamini tried 2 convince him but he just moved away frm der...wen viren jeevika vanshika mom nd oders wer waitin fr virat 2 be back home at nite...der came a phone wich disturbed evrythin...

d person had called frm chandigarh highway..he spoke..
unknown person:is dis vadhera house??
jeevika had picked up d phone...she answerd
jeevika:yes...but whu is dis??
unknown person:dis is chandigarh police..calling frm d highway..May i noe dat MHO21330,does dis car belong 2 u ?
jeevika:yes..but wats wrong?? why r u askin such questions...
unknown person:srry 2 call dis late nite..but ur car has met wid a major accident..on d highway...
der jeevika started tremblin..she nw understud nd realised dat virat had met wid an accident..she cudnt control her feelings...d whole family is in wory as 2 why jeevika is tremblin..nd starts askin her many questions..viren asks her 2 calm down nd tell him wat happend nd der she says...
jeevika:virenji,virat's car has met wid an accident...

a silence strodes in d vadhera house fr few seconds...vanshika faints hearin dat..nd den d chaos starts...
viren: wat?? where nd whu had called??
jeevika just calm down nd tell me wat hapeend...
jeevika:dat..dat..police had called frm d highway..statin dat our car has met wid an accident...nd its virats car...virenji..i m scared..wer's virat??
vanshika mom:virat...virat..she keeps on mumblin in dat fainted situatn..every1 tries 2 handle her first...chachi nd chachu make her sit on d sofa..dadaji asks viren 2 redial d no again...nd ask...wer is virat taken??

viren does as asked
viren:calm down jeevika..i l just call dem up nd ask abt virat..jeevika tries 2 calm vanshika nd herself statin virat is alright..nothin major must hav happend 2 him..assurin everythin is fine...

dey cum 2 noe dat virat is admitted in cityline hospital...nd dey rush 2wards it...aftr enquirin frm d receptionist dey cum 2 noe dat he is in icu..nd dey meet d doctors..der dey cum 2 noe dat he is in a very bad state...viren fr d first tym feels weak..his knees seem 2 go down...jeevika tries 2 support him...he gets up wid her support..nd tries 2 be strong...

doctors tell dem dat he is serious..nd has met wid a bad accident...dey will try der best...well amidst all dis d doctors inform dat he inspite being in such a disastrius situation was just chantin one name...sumone named maanvi...

nd der arises a new tension...viren ,jeevika nd d family r scared 2 tell dis 2 maanvi..but d doctors hav asked if dey cud possibly bring her den may be he may recover soon...nw jeevika..is in a rift as 2 wat is she supposed 2 do..where dey hear dadajis voice..nd he asks jeevika 2 call up nd tell mannvi...nd ask her 2 be here soon...
viren triies 2 comfort eevika..tellin her dat she has 2 do it..fr virat..fr maanvi...her dear sis...

maanvi der was still feelin d same fear..although virat had agreed of returnin 2 chandigarh as she wantd..why was she feelin so low..she wondered...was it becz of virat nt being wid her..or becz she confessd 2 him..she was askin herself..wen she saw her cellphone ringin..it flashed her di's name..nd she was scared 2 answer d call as 2 wat must hav happend in chandigarh...hesitatin she picks up d call..but befr she cud say sumthin she heard her di's voice breakin..on d oder end..as if she was cryin...she dint understnd wat was wrong..

maanvi:di..wat hapend...why r u cryin..is everythin fine??
jeevika:manu...
maanvi:di..r u alright..is jeeju fine...sumthin happend between u both..or wat??did u all fight??
jeevika:manu...dat virat...
maanvi:virat wat?? di...say sumthin...did he fight wid d family...aftr reachin der...wat is it di???
den wid a pause...she realised dat it was sumthin elz...
maanvi:di...is virat fine???
jeevika gatherd all d courage nd finally said..
jeevika:virat has met wid an accident...manu...relax..we all r here..but u ...u need 2 cum here...she cud hear nothin frm d oder end of d call...she gt scared...
maanvi:virat...
jeevika:manu...are u alrite...?
d phone gt disconnected as d phone fell...

Edited by sashhh33 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Plz virat ko kuch mat karna... Interesting twist... I hope atleast now da vadhera's agree wid virman's luv... Cont soon n thanx for da pm:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Virat has an accident wow great twist loved it update soon and do pm me

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