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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update😊
loved surprise 1...viren is so sweet n caring!!
can't wait for surprise 2...thanx for pm
continue soon!!
Marzii thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update.. loved all the lines on slideshow// pm me for the next one plz.
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Posted: 12 years ago
P.E.R.F.E.C.T.I.O.N P.E.R.S.O.I.F.I.E.D
Dats all I can say :)
Thx for the pm :)
Continue soon ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww lovely update!! Loved it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
ty fr d pm
srry fr l8 comment
cont
soon
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me! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
HERE GOES THE LAST PART .THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR THE LOVELY COMMENT .THIS IS THE LAST STORY FROM MY SIDE AS I VE MY EXEMS I HOPE U GUYS LIKE THE LAST PART

THANK YOU
SARA :THANK YOU FOR YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS N THANKS FOR THREATNING ME SO I CAN UPDATE WILL MISS UR THREATS
HAJRA (VIRIKA11) THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENTS N LOVELY FEEDBACKS
ASHNA :THANK U FOR MAKING ME REALIZE THAT MY UPDATE R NOT LONG N LOVING THE SS
LITTLE ANGELS :FOR AWESOME COOMNTS

THANK YOU EVERY READER

LAST PART

Next morning the sun rays penetrated into their hut n directly hitted viren face .He woked up n was staring at the worlds most beautiful lady .he kept on staring at her until he realize that he had to get ready for the second surprise .He softly placed a small kiss on jeevika's pink cheeks .
Viren :good morning mrs vadhera
Jeevika waked up and a smile was on her face after seeing viren she kissed him n wished him good morning .Viren asked her to quickly get up n get ready for the second surprise .Jeevika refused to get up n insisted to stay in the same position .Viren was enjoying her company in his arms but the second surprise.he quickly got up n lifted her .Jeevika was screaming as everyone was seeing them but viren without caring about otheres took her to the washroom n asked her to quickly take a shower .

Jeevika had no option rather than doing what he was saying .she quickly went to take shower .she came out n saw viren standing outside the washroom

viren:aww u look so cute in this gown u should wear this the the whole day

Jeevika hitted him on his chest .viren quickly gave her a kiss on the lips n asked her that ur surprise is on the bed n went in .Jeevika opened the packet n was shocked to see it .She followed waht viren told her .Viren came out n was mesmerized to see her .She look so pretty in that white gown .He couldnt take her eyes off . he soon came out of his world n got ready in a black suit .
they went out of the hotel n a car was waiting for them which was completely decorated with flowers .Jeevika had no idea was viren upto she knew that he had planned something special that no one can do so therefore just followed him .During the whole journey jeevika rested her head on his shoulders n was holding his hands .soon the car stopped n they stepped out .
Jeevika was speechless she cant believe to her eyes .She just holded virens hand n went inside the church .The whole church was full.Finally jeevika spoked

jeevika:virenjiii

viren :shshshshsh dont say anything

He went on his kneels n asked jeevika to accept his propsal n promised him to stay with him foreever n ever .Jeevika dont know what to say she just nodded n hugged him tightly .Soon the priest came n did the rituals .viren told jeevika that on this day i wanted u to be mine once again forever .viren lifted her n took her to the car .Viren has planned a cruise fot her .Soon they reached their destination .jeevika was pleased viren took her inside the cruise it was just viren jeevika thats it .

Viren:now mrs vadhera i have given u 2 surprise so whre s ny gift

Jeevikasoftly took viren hand n kept it on her tummy n told him that it was his gift .At first viren couldnt understand but when he saw jeevika n tears in her eyes he understood .He was the happiest person of the world e quickly engulfed her in a hug .Now it was snot only viren n jeevika there was someone else who will make their love exist for years n years

I KNOW ITS NOT A GOOD END BUT STILL BARE IT
DO LIKE N COMMNT
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unres
Last Part😲
Nahiii
I"ll miss this ss😭😭
Okay abki ka rona dhoona at the end😛

Bravo
This ss was terrific.
It had everything. It was emotional, romantic, sweet, cute and passionate
Wonderful.😉

The update was BRILLIANT.
What a surprise. Unbelieveable. I could actually imagine that happening. Jeevika in white gown, church, cruise.
It was cute and romantic.😳

Jeevika Pregnant
What an ending
Remarkable 👏

Tumbs up👍🏼
Loved it❤️

You deserve a big tight hug for giving us this ss🤗
Thanks alot for all the pm's and updates

And your welcome. You actually dseerve all this.😊

I'll really miss this ss😭
Bohat pakka liya. Okay now bye😛

Haju


Edited by Virika11 - 12 years ago
Kays94 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowowowow that was awsome!!!! seriously well written 👏

i wish you would have continues it to their life after, but whatever you wish!!

it was superb 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww wht a nice ending but i didnt wanted it to end :(((((

nooo!its ended now!will misss it

it was marvellous as always :)
n the note ur story is long but we never get enough of it however long it is :)))
Edited by ashna1406 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good finish to an amazing story..
Loved it😊
Thanks for the PM...

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