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..Amrita..

@..Amrita..

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

no yaar its really very good . God now jeevs is oregnant & what a day for viren to know the truth awesome thought yaar. U r brilliant . The surprise is just amazing

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Surbhi Jain

@surbhi1994

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

i wish u cld continue more
it ws so good
awesome
mind blowing
amazing
excellent
loved it
😊 😊 😊
👏 👏 👏

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BloomingAway

@BloomingAway

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

What a lovely ending to a lovely story

Really sad that its finished and good luck for your exams

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urmil

@urmil

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

upset coz this ss is completed bt its good that there is a happy ending...loved it thnx for pm

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Latika Gurung

@-Latty-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

awww maria it was a superb end..!

the update was simply awesome👏👏

i loved it totally😊

thanx for all ur lovely updates and for all the pm's...!

really gonna miss this wonderful story...! 😭

plz keep giving us this type of beautiful stories😉

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little.angel56

@little.angel56

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Hey!

last update? why?😭

i really loved this ss, it was so cute and lovely!

i loved the white gown surprise

and how it ended to the church! i was seriously not expecting the church wedding!

and the last part was like the terrific of all!

jeevika pregnant! omg,

awesome idea, remarkable, appreciable!

thanks for the last pm though :( will miss this!

all the best for your exams! hope to read more after ur exams!

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kamu_zainaddict

@kamu_zainaddict

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

No marium u can't end it lyk dis way. It was terrific dude. Itne se part mein tune saare emotions include kr diya. Hats off gal.. Do cntinue dis OS wid a new begining after ur exams.

😊

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Ayesha

@--Ayesha--

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Awww it was just awesome 👏.
Such an lovely update.
Viren surprise was beautiful.
Aww finally their baby is cuming,their family is complete.
Jeevika cant gve a better gift thn this.

Feeling sad that this was the last part,.
Will miss ur updates n pm.
Hope 2 get more of storie like this 4 u,u r just amazing writter.