How life goes on... (SS)

-Tinu-

@-Tinu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Amazingly penned 👏 Loved the Convo between Viren and Manvi. You have described Manvi's feelings so well. I could actually feel it. 😭 I am glad you are concentrating all four characters😃
Please do update soon can't wait to read the conversation.😊

Tina

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mnss123

@mnss123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

beautiful flow!! I really liked it, great job 👏

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

@Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Pj!! I think I am just going to read your fictional story rather than watching the show because the characters in your story have much more depth and meaning compared to the characters we see on television. Manvi's outburst made complete sense to me, her frustration at being restricted not only by the medical staff but also by her family is making her insane.

This is the Viren we need in the show, a guy who LISTENS, observes and understands and Jeevika who has completely shut herself down from the world with her focus being Manvi and only Manvi!

Pj please forward this to the production house :)

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_innocent_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

My criticism of part 2 was that it was too short😆!! so am glad this one wasnt short!!.. Seriously Pooja, am loving ur ss!!<3 keep it up :D

Only wish cvs had the brain to incorporate similar scenes in the show, especially in regards to Viren's attitude towards M's condition!!... Looking forward to the next part :D

Once again totally loved Part 3:D

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Priya

@nobo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Long ???? It was a treat !!!

Whether u write a line or many pages , I'll read it in one go, loved viren manvi convo, & virat's feelings. Maybe we will get to see a strong jeevika and again a childish maanvi after seeing her sis strong & understanding.

Please keep writing and update soon@@@

& huge thankkks for pm, would have missed otherwise

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