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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Loved it wanted a rain dance sequence loved it pm me

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Hooria

@hooriaa

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

So romantic and damn cute lived the rain dance
Continue asap and pm
Me please

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..Zainab..

@..Zainab..

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Awesome do continue nd pm me wen udo

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HarshIkaZaYaxox

@HarshIkaZaYaxox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Part 3:

Virat looks at manvi and thinks she might be getting awkward so he stood up and adjusted himself. Manvi was trying to get up, but couldn't, slowly virat put his hand forward manvi staring at him.

Virat smiling and nodding his head to tell her that he's helping her.

Manvi: n...nah...nahi virat it's okay

Virat: aajao it might help (smirking as he knew the way he made her blush)

Manvi slowly started raising her hand,when she had flashbacks of all the times when they held hands, finally she was up,hands on virat's shoulders and his hands on her waist.

Virat took his hands away as manvi turned around, she turned back around again to find virat missing. Manvi: virat no jokes kahan ho tum…VIRAT!!!!

Virat: chh…chh manvi situation ka mood mat kharab Karo yahaan hoon mein

Manvi looks down and sees virat smiling at her.

Virat: manvi tumhe pata Maine jab tumhe pehli baar dekha mujhe tumhe tang Karen ke Ilawa kuch soojta hi nahi tha, isle baar Maine times kuch baate kya share ki mujhe tum bohot khaas Lagne lagi pata hi nahi chala ke kya ho raha hai, har din tumhare baare mein sochta tha, tumhara hi naam leta tha, kabhi sochta nahi kyun, par baad mein maine realise kiya ke 'tumhi mer partner ho, tumhi mera pyar ho, I love you manvi'

Virat puts his hand out for manvi's

Manvi: virat mein tumse...

To be continued!!!!!!

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shilpa09

@shilpa09

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

so short update...plzzz can u get a longer one if u have tym :):):)

very well narrration of story...i loooved it:):)

thnx 4 pm dear:)

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

awesome start! U should definitley continue! :)

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isha.raj_98

@isha.raj_98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

awww it was too short but too good...pm me and try and give the link if u dnt mind thanks!!!!

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Hooria

@hooriaa

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Aww so cute and my fav dialogue tumhi ho mere partner tumhi ho mera future tumhi ho mera pyaar so cute
But such a short update not fair
Give a longer update next tym please
Continue asap and pm me please