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Manvi sitting on the sofa getting hell bored. Virat was sitting on his phone,and her do was talking to her jiju, she had no idea whatsoever. So she went over to her partener trying to see what he was doing.
Manvi: kya kar rahe ho?
Virat: ga raha hoon. Gao gi? (sarcasm)
Manvi: tum mere liye gao ge? (with her cute face)
Virat: theek hai... Lekin kal (smirk)
Manvi: Lekin ek mein aur ek tu phir gun gun guna re se mana kyun?
Virat: WAH!!! Singer banne ka irada hai.
Manvi: nahi times gawane ka irada hai.
Virat: partener mera mood nahi hai
Manvi: tumhare saamne tumhari for lifetime partener bethi hai aur tum usse entertain bhi nahi Karo ge! Huh? Aisi bhi kya majboori?
Virat: gaoon ga nahi par tumhe bahar walk par le kar ja sakata hoon
Manvi: hmmm... Theek hai par kal gaana pakka?
Virat: haan pakka!
Manvi goes to her di and asks her if she could go with virat.

Manvi: chale partener
Virat: after you

Virat manvi were walking when suddenly it started to rain...
Manvi ran out in the rain and put her arms out and span. Virat was just standing there stunned as she looked more beautiful then ever! Then suddenly manvi realized that she left virat out. She turned aroun to see virat right behind her,got scare,slipped and the right pair of arms caught like always! Both of them looked in each others eyes as the raindrops crossed their faces. Virat pulled manvi towards him and they were just inches apart from each other... Both could here their heartbeat but didn't wanna look away...

To be continued
Guys plz do comment so I can decide If I should continue or not 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful start...!!!!!!👏 PLease do continue soon...will be eagerly waiting for your next update...⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey superb start yaar !!
Continue sooon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plsss continue
pls make it romantic😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing start, now my heart beat starts to increase.🤣.
continue soon and pm me plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice do continue... And do pm me the next time 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: geethapapi

Nice do continue... And do pm me the next time 👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great start loved it pm me when u update
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I always wanted a rain dance, thanks!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2:

Both of them were looking into each others eyes!
Manvi doesn't sing but girl bit starts playing:

Jaagi jaagi Soyinka na mein saari raat,
Tere liye,
Bheegi bheegi Palke hui udaas,
Tere liye,
Haan jaagi jaagi Soyinka na mein saari raat
Tere liye,
Alhiyan bichayi Maine tere
Duniya bhulayi Maine,
Tere liye

Virat spins manvi around singing:
Ooo
Puts her arms around her and puts his around his waist, as she closes her eyes in relief

Virat: Tere liye Jhoomoo deewani ban ke tere liye
Vaada hai mera mein hoon tere liye
Hona kabhi tu Juda (x2)

Manvi tries to run away but he catches her hand

Ho bheegi bheegi mein le kar ke tujhko
Saath mein
Madhosh huwe maaye hum
Aa faasle kum karde hum

Ooo

Tere liye jhoomoo deewani ban ke tere liye
Vaada hai mera mein hoon tere liye
Hona kabhi tu judaaa

As he sings he caraases manvis hair and goes towards her lips but tilts his head and goes to her neck and gives her a few pecks
Manvi turns around and lifts both her arms out snd so does virat (doing a titanic)
He kisses her on the cheek from the back and she blushes
They have their romantic time in the rain and virat goes towards her lips, holds her face with both his hands, suddenly it starts to get windy and manvis duppata flies on their faces

Virat gets her in his strong arms and manvi is looking down and he looks around, he spots shelter and decides manvi to take inside.

He slowly puts her down on the bit of hay and is still on top of her both looking in each others eyes

Virman bg tune playing


To be continues

Should i still continue...








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