'Tu Meri Zindagi Hai''- SS- Part 9 pg 35(13/08)

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tulip.flora

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

fab update!!!

eagerly waitin for ur next update

waiting 2 know wat's d reason behind sepn of jeevika from hrishikesh n her family?

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Hey...you write really well!

Curious about Jeevika's background, Viren and VirMan!

Update soon 😊

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Nisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Eeehaaa..

jump jump jump jump..

aleee ye kyaaa... choti mannuu..😆

thik hai thik hai... i did not expect that kahani ko aage badhake likhoge aap SS.

but its awesome... U ROCK!!

Meko PM karna bhool gayi na aap... PM chahiye meko bhi..

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..Jessie..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Neha !!!!

once again speechless !!

i am still searching for words to describe how beautiful the emotions have reached my heart!!!!!

its simply unbelievable!!!!!

⭐️

ok so flash back is there !!!!!

i feel i am going to break down at the past!!!!!

i am still in search of words to describe the SS!!!!!!!!!!!!

i am dead after reading the terrible inner emotions of Jeevika is breaking me into pieces!!!!!!

her connection with Maanvi !!!!!!!!!!!!!

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WELL DONE NEHA!!!!!

i am bowled over by ur writing!!!!!

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shine123

@shine123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

sry 4 not commenting earlier but iloved it...simply awesome. ...continue soon n pm me the next time u update...

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Ladybug10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

I loved it. Very well written and please update it soon and do let me know

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Deepika Asrani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Awesome.. 👏

Too much suspense.. 😆

Continue asap and do PM me ! 😃

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karpagam rajendran

@Kryanian08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

i just read all your updates!!!!! stunned!!!!! amazing amazing job!!!! 😊 👍🏼

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Priya

@nobo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Read the whole story I one go & der Is only one word to describe it

OUTSTANDING !!!!

Plz update soon

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NEHA KASHYAP

@Neha.K.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

1st of all A very big thanks to all of you... Your comments really oblige me to write further... You have been wonderful readers..thank u so much for your encouragement. Here you go with another update...

PART - 4

"Nahin Viren.. Its not possible… Koi Hrishikesh nahin jaayega…"

"Badi Maa Please, abhi main aapko kuch samnjhane ki haalat mein nahin hun, aaj tak maine aapka har kaha maana hai, aur aaj aapse bhi wahi umeed kar raha hun k aap meri itni si baat maan lein…"

"Tum logon ko kya lagta hai k main tum logon ki dushman hun? Bolo Viren.. Janam chaahe na diya ho maine tum logon ko par apne inhi haathon mein paala hai maine tumhe, dar lagta hai mujhe bhi kahin mere bachon ko kahin kuch ho na jaaye.. Nahin bardash kar sakti main ki Jin logon ki wajah se aaj Viraat humare paas nahin hai, un logon ka saaya bhi tum pe ya humari Manya pe pade.."

Tears started forming in my eyes and a pained feeling in my heart when I came out of my room after getting ready and listened what Viren ji and bua ji were discussing about. I couldn't hold myself anymore so I came back to my room and took out an old picture of my Rishikesh family. I teared up at the sight of that picture.. I hate the weakness I was feeling.. I was so much trying to control this but again something was torturing inside..

Suddenly a known hand touched my shoulder and I drew my watery eyes from the picture.

He gave me a soft look. "Kya hua..muh kyun utra hua hai..?"

"Nahi toh.." I replied putting that photo frame back in the drawer.

"Oye" he held my wrist and urged me to face him, " chup-chup ke baatein sun rahi thi aap Mrs Vadhera , not good haan.. aur chup chup ke rona toh Very Bad.." He said with getting cute. This is the best way of handling me according to him.

"Bua ji nahin maani na" I asked with teary eyes.

"Pehle toh yeh ansoo andar karo abhi k abhi, Itna paani toh ganga ji mein bhi nahi hoga jitna tumhari inn badi badi aankhon mein hai" he enveloped me into his arms, "Zara zara si baat pe tip tip shuru ho jati hai" I tried to say something but all that came out was a loud sob.

"Hey bhagwan, Mrs Vadhera main aapko rone se nahin rokunga, par abhi ke liye aap apna huliya thik kariye, mannu ko ready kijiye, adhe ghante mein hum nikal rahe hain" He said looking at me.

"Kyaa.? Bua ji ne permission de di?" i asked shockingly

"Mr Viren Vadhera aaj tak koi case nahin haara" he smiled.

I took a couple of deep breaths as hugged him tightly. "Thank you", I muttered under my breath.

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"Beeji.. Virat ko Manvi pasand hai.. aur main Virat ko ache se jaanti hun, who Mannu ko bohat khush rakhega"

"Kaise khush rakhega, koi kaam dhanda toh karta hai nai, kitna gair-zimmedar hai woh, khud ko toh sambhal sakta nahin aur who humari Maanvi ko sambhalega?''

" kya ho gaya hai beeji aapko, ek baar shadi ho gayi toh who khud jimmedar ban jayega aur waise bhi kami kya hai us ghar mein… maanvi khush rahegi wahan, use kisi baaat ki pareshani nahin hogi aur main bhi toh hun na uske paas"

"yeh Tu nahin bol rahi jo maanvi ki badi behan hai, yeh Vadhera khandan ki badi bahu bol rahi hai jo apne devar ka rishta leke aayi hai yahan"

"Nahin beeji, aisa hota toh main bhi sabke sath baad mein hi aati, par main chahti thi ki baaki sab se pehle main aapse baaat karun, maine dekha hai Manvi aur Virat ke badhte rishte ko aur mujhe poora yakeen hai woh bhi Virat ko pasand karti hai"

"Nai dee…yeh sach nahin hai..maine kabhi bhi Virat ko uss nazariye se nahin dekha..aapko galat fehmi hai"

"Galat-fehmi? Mannu tu mujhse jhooth bol rahi hai??''

''Ismein jhooth bolne wali kya baat hai aur main kyun jhoot bolungi di… kya ho gaya hai aapko…aapki isi ravayiye(behaviour) ki wajah se main chandigarh se wapis aa gayi thi.. Beeji bolo na dee ko..''

''Beeji kuch nahin bolengi abhi… tu meri baat ka jawaab de filhaal..aur iss waqt baat hum dono ki nahin chal rahi manvi.. us din chandigarh se tu jis tarah se wapis aayi thi woh meri samajh se ab tak bahar hai..aur ab bhi tera wohi behaviour hai… Par usko hum baad mein solve karenge…Abhi ke liye main tujhse pooch rahi hun Mannu ki tujhe Virat pasand hai toh kyun naa kar rahi hai iss rishte se... ''

''Nahiiinnn pasand hai mujhe Virat.."

''Toh yeh sab tu mujhse nazrein mila ke kyun nahin keh rahi..tu poori duniya ko patti padha sakti hai Manvi par mujhe nahin..teri aankhein toh door main teri saansein bhi padh sakti hun... ''

'' Di…bohat filmi ho gaya yeh…Main aapko easy words mein bol rahi hun mujhe virat nahin pasand..."

"Aur iski wajah jaan sakti hun main?"

"Nahin.. har baat aapko batana main zaroori nahin samjhati..I am an adult citizen… apne faisle khud lene ka haq hai mujhe.."

"Basss MANNU BAS… main pagal ho jaungi.. tujhe pata hai mujhe lag hi nahin raha hai main tujhse..apni mannu se baat kar rahi hun..lag hi nahin raha mujhe... "

"Lagega bhi kaise..Aap toh Mrs Viren Singh Vadhera hain jo apne Devar Mr Virat Singh Vadhera ki tarafdari karne aayi hai..par main aapko bata dun Mrs Vadhera k sorry aapka devar kisi bhi angle se MISS MANVI CHAUDHARY ke layak nahin hai..so aap jaa sakti hain..iss waqt aapke devar ko aapki zyada zaroorat hogi moral support ke liye"

" Beeji dekha aapne yeh kaise baat kar rahi hai mujhse… kya..hua kya hai ise ? "

"Galat bhi kya keh rahi hai woh Jeevika"

"Beeji ?"

"Thik hi toh hai.. is waqt Vadhera Khandnan ko teri zyada zaroorat hogi"

"beeji kya bol rahi hain aap..ho kya gaya hai aap sab ko.."

"Humein kuch nahin hua..tu ab bade khandan ki bahu ho gayi hai isliye tujhe humare jazbaton ki koi kadar nahin hai..Tere gharwalon ka phone aaya tha k who yahan aa rahe hain Virat aur Manvi ke rishte ki baat karne..Maine saaf mana kar diya..Ab yeh baat unse bardasht nahin hui ki hum logon ne unhe mana karne ki himmat bhi kaise ki… unhe kya lagta hai humari koi izzat nahin hai.. humne apni ek beti unhe de di matlab hum unke dabav mein aa gaye..?? matlab jo who kahenge wohi hum karenge?? Agar woh aisa samajhte hain toh yeh unki galat fehmi hai.. samjha dena apne sasuraal walon ko ki Chaudhary pariwar na aaj tak kisi ke saamne bina kisi kaaran jhuka hai na jhukega…Ab tu jaa..apne pariwar ka khyaal rakh.. ho sakta hai aaj ki ghatna ke baad who log tujhe yahan aane ki ijaazat na den.. toh main bas yahi kahungi jeevika ki agar aisa ho toh tujhe aane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai... Apne pariwar ke sath khush raho aur humein shaanti se jeene do"

Uss din aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi ne mere pairon ke neeche se zameen kheench li thi…Kyun hua kaise hua kuch samajh nahi aaya tha mujhe…sab badla badla lag raha tha..Beeji jinke kadwe se kadwe shabad maine bachpan se sune the par kabhi bhi un shabdo se dukh nahin hua tha kyunki pata hota tha ki beeji humari bhalayi ke liye daant-ti thi.. par us din maano kisi ne koi khanjar hi mere aar paar kar diya ho.. Aur Mannu..Meri Mannu jo kehti thi di aapse naraz hougi toh meri saansein atak jayengi, wohi mannu naa jaane kis baat se itna khafa ho gayi thi.. ...Mujhse naraaz hoke toh uski saansien atak jaati thi toh ab woh kaise jee rahi hogi? Kyun woh yeh nahin samajh paayi ki uski saanson se hi meri saanson ki dor bhi bandhi hui thi..jiske tootne ka asar abhi bhi waisa hi hai..ab bhi takleef hoti hai mujhe jab jab who pal yaad karti hun.. dono ne mujhe indirectly ghar se jaane ko bol diya…us ghar se jahan se chahe bidayi ho chuki thi meri par phir bhi mera apna tha… mera sara bachpan meri saari yaadein thi us ghar mein… kisi ne mujhe kuch poochne ya kuch batane ka mauka nahin diya..pal bhar mein meri saari duniya badal ke rakh di.. Kyun??

My track of past broke with a sudden jerk… I looked out of the car and the outside view filled my eyes again… We had been reached Rishikesh. I sighed and looked at Virenji..

"Tum chalo main car side pe laga ke aata hun" He said putting his hand on my cheek softely.

"Nai main aapke saath hi andar jaungi" I retorted

"Acha baba..utro toh sahi.. main aata hun 2 min mein.. aur haan mannu ko dhak lena ache se..thandi hawa chal rahi hai bahar I think'' He said

"hmmm" I wrapped myself and mannu with shawl and stepped out of the car with heavy heart.

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OK..thats all for today... See you soon with next update...If any confusion, feel free to ask..

Take Care!!

Love,

Neha..