'Tu Meri Zindagi Hai''- SS- Part 9 pg 35(13/08)

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preetivr

@preetivr

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#271

thanks for bringig viren back.

if manvi is her heartbeat, viren is her strength.

nice update yar.

you are coming to finale.

cant wait to see how you close this one.

thanks for the pm

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#272

Loved it first we had our virman nok jhok and then viren teasing jeevika awesome continue soon and do pm me

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Jesmin

@...Jes...

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#273

awesome Di as usual!!!!u r such an amazing writer Di 👏
I was totally lost in ur update ⭐️
but then came to know that it willend withd next one,y di?make it longer na.we love reading it too much 👍🏼
bt still u r d creator so it depends on u 😊
thnx 4 d pm & cont soon 🤗

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khusam

@khusam

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#274

Superb updt neha lovd it
pm me n thnx fr d pm.

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Loveleen Brar

@loveleen12

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#275

Neha awesome yaar read the whole thing in one go, how did I miss this please pm me when you update.

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Munni

@munnihyderabad

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#276

Awww Neha first apologies for reading and commenting so late...

Just read Part 7-

Ufff my goodness👏⭐️ .. do i have any words to say how much i loved every bit of it👏.. Devar-Bhabhi opening scene was awesomely written.. every nok jhok of Virat and Maanvi, their phone converstaion .. his taking care of her and the partnership still intact, behind the marriage was amazing and beautiful to the core.. Manvi Jeevika little time in the bed..😍

Aww I love Mannu in J's lap anyday 😍and Mannu baby and Mannu maasi how cute.. ok ok coming to the piece of cake of the update - everyone agrees to it...

Jeevika's outburst and venting before Viren.. her every word was filled with nothing but profound despair.. i could visualize it.. and the way J told off Viren was so brilliantly written the dialogues..the emotions are beautifully etched and this line packed the scene

Aatma hai woh meri, aur jab chot aatma pe lagti hai toh sharer bejaan ho jata hai, mujh bejaan ko aap jhoothi tasalliyan dete rahe par kabhi ek baar bhi aapka mann nahin chaaha ki iss bejaan ko uss aatma se mila dun,

Thank you Neha for such a terrific update...🤗

Ok me going to read chapter 8 ...will edit here...

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Ok done reading part 8 :

-Ufff .. I had goosebumps reading it.. my heart is choked and was emotional and happy at the same time.. words fail to describe how much i loved it.. so all words of appreciation bestowed up on you 👏⭐️
coming to the update.. can any guy in the world be as selfless as Virat .. can a man bear to see his wife's love for her sibling is more than for him .. but virat is selfless.. each and every word which he said about Maanvi's feelings for Jeevika ultimately shows his feelings for Maanvi and his acceptance of her Di's place in their life..
the whole scene between Jeevika and Virat is just brilliant to the core...👏 Maanvi;s whole reason and strength to fight cancer was for her DI.. she endured so much pain and she crossed every single hurdle to reach her destination her Di,,,,

now i can go on a rant.. here is the best part of Maanvi's feelings for Jeevika in Virat's words...

Viraat bhagwan ji ko bolo k mujhe kuch na hone de, werna Di khud ko sambhaal nahin paayengi'

Aap toh uski bhagwan ho na'bhagwan ko pane ke liye log kaise kaise jap tap nahin karte, kaisi kaisi preekshayein dete hain' usne bhi bas is cancer se lad k ek pareeksha hi di hai apne bhagwan ko pane ke liye' yeh main aise hi nahin keh raha bhabhi.. yeh maine uske saath reh ke jaana hai' kuch uski zubaani suna hai aur kuch maine mehsoos kiya hai'

and and and . Neha 🤗 you are truly gifted writer. where do you get this idea of J's name with diya..BEAUTIFUL👏 is the simplest word i can use..but my emotions are much more than that ..

-Awww what a wonderful surprise is that .. Neha sorry i really can't tell how much i loved the diya surprise..👏 all other diyas surrounding Jeevika's name is goosebumps scene,,,,and the love among them is MESMERIZING and MAGICAL and MAGNETIC

Virat gets the house for Maanvi, so that she can be close to her parents.. no words to describe his love for her..and J's feelings on seeing the surprise.. u have nailed it Neha,,,,🤗

I loved the image link so much Neha...
and the last part .. Mannu baba ki muft gyan 😆... such a thoughtful words to her Di.. Viren's perspective is well described by Mannu .. and i am happy to see J accepting M's request .. awesome👏
Thank you once again Neha 🤗

going to read chapter 9 - will come and edit

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Done reading Part 9
- Awww i was grinning all through the update..😃 beautiful and endearing update .. all characters are so real and so imaginable.. J's FM role.. VirMan nok jhok.. Viren supporting hubby and also trying to steal romantic moments of his wife and Virat , dude wants babies 😳 but Mannu is still a baby ...

of course the first Viren Jeevika scene was emotional and so pati - patni types.. very well written Neha.. J's explanation . Viren's apologies everything is neatly etched out..

and lovely Nok-jhok of Virat and Maanvi which always brings a smile on my face.. they never change and shouldn't change ..so what if they get married..loved Mannu sleeping on J's lap and Virat and Mannu fighting over J lovely ,..

and last scene.. it happens in every house i guess.. so realistic.. dad comes and wakes the baby up and when the baby cries .. they give the baby to mom.. my self went through this almost every day 😆 and Viren trying to steal time with J ... so where is he taking her huh😉

Well a big thank you Neha..🤗

I am done with this ...it's 2 am . need to catch up on my sleep 😳

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Fari_15

@Fari_15

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#277

Aww tht was another superb update,loved the virika parts,seems like all is coming back to normal, next will be last? No,will miss ur SS,anyways Thnks for the pm and update soon!

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-Pj-

@-Pj-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#278

Nehaji, what do I say. I know you had trouble with this update

Virat, Maanvi and Jeevika's part had me grinning like an idiot. Even though they are married they still act like children in front of Jeevika. Well to Maanvi she is always a baby to Jeevika - yet Virat wants children, he already has one as a wife :D

Viren and Jeevika scenes were lovely. Both of them were different, the emtional apologise to the teasing and romance. Loved Jeevika's speech to herself (When I was able to read it), it just summed up everything she has been feeling over the course of your SS and how it effects her now. :D

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Nisha

@hnisha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#279

CHOOOLLLYYY... KAAANNN PAKAD KE CHOLLLYYY... MERE DO AUR AAPKE DO KAAN, AUR BAAKI SABKE KAAN PAKAD KE BADA VALA CHOOLLLYYY... *POUTS*... DERIII KARDI NA MAINE COMMENT MAARNE MEIN.. AAJKAL INNA ZYADA TIME NAHI MIL PATA NET PE BAITHNE KE LIYE..ICHLIYE PHILCHE CHOLLY HAA..MAAFI KALDO PLEAJJJ...

Chalo Chalo comment time... Mujhe to laga ye last update hoga..but accha kiya jo ye last update nahi hai..😆..

Every scene was just perfect...utne bade nahi the par mazedaar the, acche the.. aur baaki aapko pata hi hai, bahut acche writer ho aap..

Mujhe tho lagta hai ye EHMMBH ki poori team bahut talented hai..sabki acting inni acchi hoti hai aur aap bhi bahut talented nikle..i m proud of you . 😃

Love you,

Nikko

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-Tinu-

@-Tinu-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#280

Why??? ... Why are you such a great Writer???... Why Do you write so well??... Why am I always stunned after reading your updates..??? Why am I always lost for words to comment!!!!??? 😭

I swear Neha... You torture me so much... be it with your posts of KD and KT or your updates!! 😆 You Seriously don't know how much time I spend after reading your updates just thinking of what to write and trust me I only come up with a sentence or two! 😛😆

Anyways enough of my blabbering and more talking on the update! Lol! 😆 Its Just A few sentences... 😳

It was Amazing Neha... You have wrote it so well 👏. The convo between Virika was so sweet and cute... I mean even though it was a serious convo ... Cuteness ki Hadd hoti hain yaar! 😆😉

Loved The Virman nok- Jhok... Lmao @

"Apni patni ko pyare pyare bache de sakta hun"

Trust you to come up with something like this! 😆

Yippee! Viren came back! lol @

"Hamesha roti rehti hai'bilkul Maa pe gayi hai''

Can so imagine this scene specially Jeevika expressions when Viren says this! She would look so Cute! 😆

This last sentence...

"Aaj nahin Mrs Vadhera...Bachna chaahen toh koshish kar ke dekh lijiye..Par hum toh aaj Aapko nahin chodne wale..."

... is a killer! *Hayyye* * Me dead* 🤪

Gosh Girl Haven't you tortured us enough! 😆

Please continue sooon! I can't believe there's another update!😲😆
Please please Jaldi update karo! Sorry I couldn't give you an detailed comment but Like I said I'm loss at words 😳 and anyways it's your fault for writing soo goood! 😆
Thanks for the PM yaar! 😃 and sorry for the l8 Comment 😳.

Luv yuh! ❤️

Tina

Edited by virenjeevika - 13 years ago

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