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missmystic

@missmystic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

wow that was beautiful. You said that it wasnt that good because it was your first time but it was AMAZING. i loved how you used the song in the story, toally loved it, great job 👏

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Menika

@BrunoMars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: missmystic
wow that was beautiful. You said that it wasnt that good because it was your first time but it was AMAZING. i loved how you used the song in the story, toally loved it, great job 👏

Thanx! Means a lot to me!

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StarStruckLove

@StarStruckLove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Amazingly beautiful OS . I saw it in your signature and decided to read it ( cool idea BTW😉)

Coming to the OS , You are lying . This perfect writing can't be your first timer .

Everything was sooo perfect , the writing , potraying everything .

Loved that part of the car breaking down ... That's soo Virat 😆

You should either continue this or write another one .

And if you do any one of them Pm Me .

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Menika

@BrunoMars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: khusam
Amazng updt pm me wen u do

I will! Thank You!

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Menika

@BrunoMars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: sana.r
Amazing OS
very cute and i loved the ending

Do write OSs more often, esp on virat and maanvi
Totally loved it:D:d

I will try... Thank You!

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Menika

@BrunoMars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: love_angle
Amazingly beautiful OS . I saw it in your signature and decided to read it ( cool idea BTW😉)
Coming to the OS , You are lying . This perfect writing can't be your first timer .
Everything was sooo perfect , the writing , potraying everything .
Loved that part of the car breaking down ... That's soo Virat 😆
You should either continue this or write another one .
And if you do any one of them Pm Me .

Thank You! Yes came on the idea when I saw

Bookfreak07 doing that.

I really am not lying, yes of course I wrote more but

not like this and I never have done something of my work

in internet...

I know, I just love the car thing so I just had to add it...

I will try...