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Originally posted by: Let-It-Go
I am glad that i was in ur pm list coz i seriously , after reading it , didnt wish to miss this . It seriously didnt seem like ur first time .. U are so good .
I love ths song myself , so could easily replay in my head while reading ur stuff n it looked so amazin .
The see-throu kurtas , Poor virat . On the contrary i was trying to imagine This kurta on.virat .. Lol ..Back to ur OS.
I loved Manvi getting impatient , a needed break from cute cats . I was anticipating Manvi to take first move and u wrote it beautifully .
The ending is perfect ..
U kept the essence and at the same time made it Hawwt , in a good way .
Loved it ..Do pen something more
Ruchi
Thanx Ruchi!
Ahw, I love long comments, that's why I try to comment very long
Ahw, I love long comments, that's why I try to comment very long
with others too, okejj.
WoW, seems like you understood it more than I did... Hahaha, no just joking
but you understood it, I was thinking if anyone could
understand what I meant, because i can see it happen you know, but I was
thinking whether I chose the right words to describe or not. But seems like
you got it SO I'm really happy.
Cricket
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