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snowdream

@snowdream

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

awesome.pls pm me when u update!!!!waiting 4 next part

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Menika

@BrunoMars

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

As always, just perfect, no beyond that.

I always get goosbumps reading your

stories, they are always so good, the emotions

the words you chose to express them everything!

Hope you continue soon.

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Aisha

@Aisha202

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Awesome start to a wonderful OS Gayathri - absolutely loved it. You write beautifully. Really looking forward to reading the next part!

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sonika sharma

@sonika_virman

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Hey gayatri
I loved it yaar . Though the ending was a bit too sad but if you are planning to continue it then u surely should go for it .
Waiting for the next part

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neenu chandran

@NeenuAmmu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

loved it awesome...

keep continue GAYU...

u r all os n ss r just perfect m a big fan of it...
love uuu

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hopehot

@hopehot

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

aw...

YES!!..make it a 2 or 3 shot please...😆

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Preethi

@preethis

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

ya loved it dear... it was superb... now waitng for the remaining story... thank for the pm.. waiting for the rest...

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Rachel

@Shineon

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Loved it...just awesome..please pm me when u continue

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Prem Prem

@Prem Prem

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

honestly this os of yours made me cry soo much thank god my sister was not around
hats off man i loved it.. can't wait for the next par nd thank u for the pm

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Izza

@memories_im

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Nice OS..please update soon! 😊

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